Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2009-10-22 01:26:15 +0000 UTC]

alright, that would be good

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Ninja-Rosette In reply to ??? [2009-07-01 17:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch ^^

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ninja-Rosette [2009-07-02 01:07:01 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. I just now looked back at the fact you commented, and decided you deserved a watch. Thanks for the comments

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megasoidwarrior In reply to ??? [2009-06-29 12:44:04 +0000 UTC]

This space is crying out for more stories from Arcadiusd. When will we see more? You skills are so legendary, your pen opens new world views on paper! Please allow us the sublime joy of sharing that view even in reading your so richly tapestried writing!

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Arcadiusd In reply to megasoidwarrior [2009-06-30 01:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Chapter 16 gives a glimpse into the soul of havoc, a battle between rival forces that show different versions of the truth. Chapter 16 shows the violent urges of man embodied in a single, unwilling individual, and the brave man who stands against this beast of wastes. We also see the result of the manipulative man Raznus' machinations.

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megasoidwarrior In reply to Arcadiusd [2009-06-30 02:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes! The creative juices flow, the pen emits the ink. Life enthralls and the writer's art flourishes.

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Arcadiusd In reply to megasoidwarrior [2009-06-30 03:21:20 +0000 UTC]

there is actually something a little different I have that I wanted to post for the longest time, but could not because of a volunteer job. It deals with quite a complex character in another work.

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xithe In reply to ??? [2009-05-25 04:56:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch

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Arcadiusd In reply to xithe [2009-05-25 05:02:53 +0000 UTC]

did you read any of the chapters?

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xithe In reply to Arcadiusd [2009-05-25 17:28:21 +0000 UTC]

not yet sorry heh, i was out for the weekend, im starting today as soon as i can

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Arcadiusd In reply to xithe [2009-05-26 01:03:33 +0000 UTC]

good, thanks. I would like for you to point out any plot points you see as interesting or otherwise

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xithe In reply to ??? [2009-05-18 20:18:24 +0000 UTC]

well, umm i started with your story...but umm apparentl that was chap 14, and youve got like thousands of chapters without number so...wich one is ch 1
hehe..

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Arcadiusd In reply to xithe [2009-05-20 02:26:11 +0000 UTC]

I'll post the links here...


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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2009-05-14 04:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Due to unanticipated homework (yes, it's from English, like all wasteful assignments), I will be unable to read anything tonight.

*edit*

Actually I don't see anything new uploaded anyway, so I guess this was good timing.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2009-05-14 05:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Just posted it, check again. I will be up until Midnight tonight to see my 18th birthday tomorrow

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2009-02-17 05:40:31 +0000 UTC]

I keep forgetting to ask, are you aware of the Open Room #77 at Logan? It's basically where everyone goes for tutoring, and I'm a tutor there every day (that's zero period Monday to Friday and eighth period Tuesday to Thursday). So I wanted to know if it would be at all possible for you to show up during any of those periods for us to discuss each other's writing (or just hang out).

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2009-02-18 01:28:07 +0000 UTC]

I will try to show up

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2009-02-14 07:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Since its almost midnight I'll stop for now with two of the four chapters read. Tomorrow my family will be going to a museum for most of the day and I will want to spend most of the afternoon working on Andromeda, so I will plan to read and critique chapters 3 and 4 the day after that (Sunday 2/15).

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2009-02-15 03:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I really appreciate your comments. Oh, and from now on, since the rest of the book is scattered with good and bad chapters, I have decided to rework a few things. More depth of character and more on Chaos

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2009-01-30 02:46:47 +0000 UTC]

I must've misheard you somehow; I thought there was a new chapter or two out for one of the stories I'd been reading (Yamato arc or Rise of Demons).

Or did I hear correctly and just fail to find the new chapter?

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2009-01-30 03:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sorry, I ran out of ideas half way done and just spilled poop on the page. I figured it was better to collect my thoughts and then continue. In the mean time, I am gonna upload the finished story...lets just call it that. I realize now just how rotten the whole thing is. If you could, edit it.

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2008-12-19 05:00:18 +0000 UTC]

I appear to have found out what happened with the first copy I sent. Just a few minutes ago I found this in my junk folder:

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Message from yahoo.com.
Unable to deliver message to the following address(es).

:
Resources temporarily unavailable, please try again later [#4.1.9].
/I'm not going to try again; this message has been in the queue too long.

--- Original message follows.

Return-Path:

The original message is over 5k. Message truncated to 1K.

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Since the sender was listed as MAILER-DAEMON@yahoo.com, I think its safe to say this was some internal error in the Yahoo email system. Either that, or it's actually incapable of sending messages larger than 1 kilobyte, which would be truly sad. I shall now take this opportunity to recommend getting a Hotmail account instead.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2008-12-19 05:12:07 +0000 UTC]

I got it, no need to worry about this anymore. Oh, and Eric. Have you seen the fight with Terra on youtube? Its from KH2FM. Its just fun to watch people get pummeled past recognition

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2008-12-15 02:34:23 +0000 UTC]

I have resent the email in question. Since I am slightly suspicious that the email address I have for you might not actually be yours, please confirm it:

shaun_94587@yahoo.com

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2008-12-15 03:10:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah, that is mine. I do not know what happened. If I created my own boss, it would be an Anti Sora type Heartless with several mechanical parts and its face looks like Sora's, but the other half is shadowy and mutated. It is thoroughly convinced in order to become Sora, it has to be rid of the real thing, so as to use Sora's light to banish its Heartless half. It is capable of upgraded forms of Sora's attacks, multiple orb slash moves which send orbs after Sora every time Sora Replica attacks. Its strongest attack is Heartless Sword Berserk, where it basically Omni Slashes with two times the orb blasts and then ends with a massive shockwave. It is also the only Heartless able to speak.

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Drakhand006 In reply to ??? [2008-11-12 10:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I need permission for something because I finally figured out leading role for Parallaxus. In Chronicles, he works with Andrafelauth, but I've already got a new story for a time after Andrafelauth is defeated. In this story, Draco is training a young Ryugami. I was hoping to use Parallaxus as the main villain so I don't have to make a new OC.

As with my original guidelines, he won't be killed off in said story, he'll just act as the villain... in other words fight the main character (Draco's apprentice) near the end of the story. I'll still be using him in Chronicles, but I'd like to use him in this too if that's ok. Also, could you possibly send me Parallaxus' bio and the bios of any other chars you might want to appear in it?

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2008-11-30 05:51:32 +0000 UTC]

I sent you the notes with the additional characters. I was thinking if you could make CaS versions of them

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Drakhand006 In reply to Arcadiusd [2008-12-06 18:40:53 +0000 UTC]

KK, I'll see what I can do~

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2008-12-07 03:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and a juicy tidbit about Vennon. You see, it was Vennon who tempted Strife to get Soul Edge, whispered to him of its legendary powers. It was Vennon who gave Soul Edge its twisted power to absorb souls, but it was so Soul Edge could destroy monsters called Wraiths. Wraiths are all soul, and as such normal weapons do little to them. With Soul Edge, men could kill Wraiths

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Drakhand006 In reply to Arcadiusd [2009-01-12 14:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know about Wraiths lol. My brother is into them, hi char's evil form is even similar to one at times.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2009-01-13 03:48:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah. The Soul Edge, though, began to exhibit a Wraith-like appearance, an eye at the center, and veins. It is speculated this was what Vennon always wanted. People to attain the limitless power of the soul, even as the Wraiths plummeted into extinction. He framed them for a crime, then lead the humans to attain their power through Soul Edge. By forcing a Soul Edge fragment into a body, its natural power is increased. The process, though, drives most people insane. The other creator Gods did not like that much, so they exiled Vennon to the land of the Ryugami, with consent of Bahamut. Ever since, Vennon has hated Bahamut, and especially Draco. He found Parallaxus there nearly 30000 years later...

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Drakhand006 In reply to Arcadiusd [2009-01-15 17:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good, except Bahamut wasn't that old lol. He was only like around 1000 when he passed his power to Draco.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2009-01-16 03:05:26 +0000 UTC]

ok, then, some other Miaboreas. You can have liberty with its name

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Drakhand006 In reply to Arcadiusd [2009-01-19 22:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, well their were no leaders before Bahamut, but I suppose it could be his father or something.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2009-01-20 04:28:16 +0000 UTC]

yeah, and accordingly, Vennon is pretty angry with all the Ryugami, and is using Parallaxus to try and drive them to extinction

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Arcadiusd In reply to Drakhand006 [2008-11-13 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

OK, I was waiting for this chance! Thanks man, you definitely have my permission! I have his bio in a journal of mine I'll put to the front page.

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Ixrec7107 In reply to ??? [2008-11-12 04:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Are you still using your facebook account at all? I put up new stuff on my profile every couple days so you really should look at it once in a while.

Oh yeah, and read more Andromeda NOW, please.

Your book still looks good though. Keep it up and remember to consider the edits I suggest.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2008-11-12 04:31:35 +0000 UTC]

I have been rapid fire editing the new chapter and you might be surprised how Shae is gonna fit into all of this

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Ixrec7107 In reply to Arcadiusd [2008-11-13 02:33:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking forward to it too, but foreshadowing should be part of the story itself.

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Arcadiusd In reply to Ixrec7107 [2008-11-13 03:14:59 +0000 UTC]

it will, Chapter 5 is gonna show some of it

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-12-25 00:56:42 +0000 UTC]

actually, both Jaden and Haou will be dueling. Sorta, its hard to explain. one will give the other advice, depending on which is dueling.

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DylanIsntHere In reply to Arcadiusd [2007-12-26 15:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow~ That's awesome! Finally those two are cooperating!

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DylanIsntHere In reply to ??? [2007-12-24 19:22:24 +0000 UTC]

A pre-sketch for Voimus is up. I made sure to get this up before x-mas for ya~

I wasnt too clear on what to do so I need you to tell me if there's anything that needs to be changed in his design.

Happy Holidays~

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-12-20 03:22:49 +0000 UTC]

hmm, guys, I wonder. In the duel between Jaden and Keres where Keres uses the Chaos Emperor Dragon, should I make Jaden win or lose in that duel. 1/2 of me wants to see the dream fulfilled, but the other 1/2 wants things to be different. I need your advice on this one!

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DylanIsntHere In reply to Arcadiusd [2007-12-23 22:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Wait, that was Jaden? I thought that was Haou. o_o

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-11-16 03:39:39 +0000 UTC]

so, what do you guys like about the stories. What surprised you? I like having my reader's opinions so I can know what to add.

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-10-26 00:57:56 +0000 UTC]

so, what did you guys think of the last animations?

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SpiralGx In reply to Arcadiusd [2007-10-30 02:09:33 +0000 UTC]

pretty nice

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-10-19 15:19:41 +0000 UTC]

last three animations of the current series are up!

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Arcadiusd In reply to ??? [2007-10-19 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]

well, sometime then, Jaden battles Brron, the dictator of Dark World. Jaden defeats him, but is turned to evil by a mysterious character called Haou. Haou is even worse than Brron, eventually, Jaden's friends find out. Jim duels Haou but loses to Haou's evil heroes. O'Brien duels Haou next, and forces a draw to wake up Jaden.

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