6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to xxJTHMxx696 [2012-07-12 22:33:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm good, you?

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xxJTHMxx696 In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-07-13 03:46:32 +0000 UTC]

good thanks for aking my friend.

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to kciNdroLeripmaV [2012-05-14 20:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Copy the URL of the picture or GIF, click edit on the Webcam thing, paste the URL on the line, save, then there you go :3

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kciNdroLeripmaV In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-15 01:27:50 +0000 UTC]

thx i figured it out now.

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to kciNdroLeripmaV [2012-05-14 20:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you lol

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kciNdroLeripmaV In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-15 01:04:36 +0000 UTC]

how old are you this year?

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to kciNdroLeripmaV [2012-05-15 01:11:54 +0000 UTC]

19

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kciNdroLeripmaV In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-16 17:12:47 +0000 UTC]

wow

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to kciNdroLeripmaV [2012-05-16 18:21:28 +0000 UTC]

yep lol

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to TheIrritatedDog [2012-05-13 19:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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TheIrritatedDog In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-14 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, hope you've been good.

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to TheIrritatedDog [2012-05-14 20:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have been lol

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TheIrritatedDog In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-14 20:41:33 +0000 UTC]

That's great to hear. =]

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to xxJTHMxx696 [2012-05-08 03:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol You're about 6 days early but thank you XD

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xxJTHMxx696 In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-08 23:30:46 +0000 UTC]

But happy b-day anyway! so what should I get you

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to xxJTHMxx696 [2012-05-09 03:22:02 +0000 UTC]

lol don't have to get me anything

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xxJTHMxx696 In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-09 19:50:22 +0000 UTC]

okay.

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xxJTHMxx696 In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-08 03:30:31 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-05-03 03:41:02 +0000 UTC]

I saw~~

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-04 18:47:56 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha Im glad. Do you want me to put a picture together for the both of them with one of my fancy shmancy background or something?

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-05-04 20:28:18 +0000 UTC]

That'd be awesome! We'll buy that one

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-05-05 16:41:58 +0000 UTC]

Awesome opossum!

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-08 21:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Course I did, you did my Hunter zombie makeup X3 lol
You're panel was very amazing btw very funny and can't wait for our Commish to be done :3

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-09 03:38:02 +0000 UTC]

OHHHHHHHHHHH hahaha awesome! Thank you so much, it was totally a spur of the moment thing and I hadn't planned at all haha. The presentation was last minute, and all the technical difficulties through us off badly. You guys were the only ones who bought make up from us hahaha. Ill definitely give you a great price on your commissions! Thanks for all the fun and staying at the panel

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-09 03:44:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem lol, I needed the zombie makeup done otherwise i'd be a lame non-undead hunter D: and I didn't have a mind to leave, I love zombies xD plus I didn't want to be so rude. And I can't wait to see them when their finished!

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-09 03:56:25 +0000 UTC]

hahaha that is great, and it wouldn't have been rude at all but you guys made it that much more fun! It might be a few weeks, I am in the middle of designing two games right now but Ill definitely work on them when I have free time (Hopefully this weekend). I remember you saying you write, if you want any critiques from a fellow horror writer/story designer please feel free to link me some of your stuff!

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-09 04:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh? Thank you! X3 The writings I have in my gallery are kinda old so my writing style kinda sucks... never was actually good at describing things and the story line I had came up with around that time seems bad to me so I might have to re-write most of it... But yeah I have them in a folder in my gallery if you ever have time to read them then note me your critique it would be awesome!

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-14 00:55:53 +0000 UTC]

From what I have read so far (Which isn't much because of my schedule) I've noticed a few things. Your Organization is a little messy, especially for a script, try to break things up as much as possible. Not by commas or periods but by line breaks or paragraph starts.
Second, description is key. Also when developing a story try scenes and actions which would flow well with you and your friends and not to push the story to a cliche location. Surprise the reader/viewer. Try acting things out with yourself, and reading it out loud, it really helps to teach yourself how things sound in real life. It really helps to do that.
When describing a scene try something like this. (Ill use Zombie Apocalypse 2, Line 23 starting with "Jennie Groans")

As Thomas stands up, a few tears fall to the ground. His clenched fist held stiff at his side.
Jennie Groans.

Lexa
Thomas! Jennie is trying to say something!

As Lexa speaks, Jennie uses her arms to get to her feet and turns to face the back of Thomas.

Thomas
What?!

Thomas turns around and sees Jennie staring directly into his eyes, as he looks in shock at her Jennie raises her head and shrieks. The ear deafening sounds could be heard for miles, and Thomas was right there in front of her.

Thomas
My God! What is that sound.

As he covers his ears.

Lexa
THOMAS LOOK OUT!

As Lexa warns Thomas, Jennie runs towards Thomas at full force.
Lexa mid scream, drops her axe and slides her hand onto one of her pistols.

A loud gun shot echoes through the forest.

The body of Jennie falls backwards as the bullets penetrates her eye cavity and exiting the back of her head. Blood splatters all over Thomas as brain matter and skull fragments sling all over the trees and nearby vegetation.

Lexa slowly puts her gun away with a look of shock on her face.
Thomas stands there, speechless covered in what was Jennie's insides now all over his shirt and face.

Lexa
If your bitten...

She gulps

Lexa
I guess you'll turn into... that.

She then looks around at everyone else

Lexa
No one else was bitten were they?!

Slowly picking the ax back up.
Thomas and Max look at each other and shake their head in a "No" motion.

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-14 01:02:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow thank you! lol, like I said I wrote this years ago and never got around to fixing it up. I've written in script form when I wrote Invader Zim fanfics for my friend to draw so I can go back to that, I just wanted to try this kind of style, not very good at it. I also always have a problem with descriptions but practice always makes perfect I suppose.

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-14 03:25:57 +0000 UTC]

Very much so! Like I said it wasn't bad at all. Oh and try original names, never use your own or people you know
You don't need to write in script form. I find it easier to organize for myself. Also have someone cold read your work out loud. It will help you figure out how others read things and understand the order of writing.
But like I said, it wasn't that bad at all!
Like going to the forest to calm down. I can't say I know many people that do that haha. Try connecting placing to lead to the forest. Hey lets go to the park, oh what is that sound coming from the trail. Yeah it's still cliche but it adds a path of travel. Try using bubble maps to figure out locations and how to get to one area to another.

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-14 03:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah lol a good idea and thank you again. When I get to working on this story again... when I actually get out of writer's block for it and the Demon story as well. I had planned on Lucifer's Book be the first movie/story and the Zombie Apocalypse (Which will be actually named at some point) the second to it and I was thinking a third to them but haven't gotten that far yet. And as for the names I was being lazy, I have to rename all of them anyways since i'm not friends with "Allen" and "Foofy/Thomas" anymore.

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-15 20:31:42 +0000 UTC]

But I'm allen <_< hahahaha
well try other stories in the mean time. Do things out of the ordinary. For instance I love horror, but the game I am working on right now is about Ponies killing Aliens. Sometimes you have to be a little uncomfortable to get new ideas hahaha

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6Demonic6Kitty6 In reply to Allenolantern [2012-04-15 20:45:41 +0000 UTC]

I know lol, I write about other things too like Dragons and like time travelling and such, I don't always stick to Horror XD

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Allenolantern In reply to 6Demonic6Kitty6 [2012-04-22 21:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Got arcanine done
Go check it out, hopefully you like it!

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