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[2013-01-31 20:11:08 +0000 UTC]
"Serious fiction disguised as EUF"
(United Kingdom)
# Statistics
Favourites: 603; Deviations: 126; Watchers: 164
Watching: 20; Pageviews: 12726; Comments Made: 995; Friends: 20
# Comments
Comments: 46
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You're welcome, it was a very cute picture
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Hi! You commented on my profile a while ago, but for some reason it wonβt let me reply. You said something like βthanks for all the favoritesβ. Well youβre welcome!! I love what you do and I hope you continue to do something similar! If not, thatβs okay too.
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Well it's nice you went out of your way to reply. I will be writing some more in the future, taking a little break at the moment, but I have loads of ideas for new stories in the series, so hopefully you'll enjoy them too when the come.
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Sounds awesome! Take your time, no pressure at all, and Iβm excited to see what else you have in store!
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Yeah, it might be a little while, but hopefully they'll be good.I got a new one done during the summer which I think turned out pretty good, so the gaps in between don't seem to affect my narrative flow too much.
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Awesome!!! Canβt wait! Take your time though. Donβt over work yourself π
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Don't worry, I won't. I was going to try to make a start this week, but Ive not been well.
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Sorry for the late reply. And sorry to hear you arenβt feeling well! I hope you feel better soon, if you donβt already!
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No problem, your pictures are rrally great. I really enjoy seeing gurls with short hair, and especially no hair, its a great look that isnt seen often enough, and your pictures are some of the best to show that.
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No problem, you have a lot of great pictures
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No problem, thanks for watching me too
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Thanks, my good friend recommended I check out your page and I really liked your stories, although I'm hoping we might see another wedgie or two in the upcoming chapters.
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Thanks, I'm glad you liked them. You'll be pleased to hear that the upcoming chapter 5 features not one but two wedgies. And I'm pretty sure there is one in chapter 6 and another in chapter 7 as well. I know from reading similar types of story to mine that wedgies are very popular so I've tried to include them as often as possible. Although I think of the ones I've uploaded so far, the only one that has a wedgie in it is the first one, right at the end. But don't worry, they're on their way.
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No problem, you have some great stories, I've been starting out writing similar sort of stuff, so I think it's good to read stuff like yours and get a feel for how it should be done.
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Awww thanks, nice to know my stories are appreciated even if I'm not sure I would call them great; I've read some of the stuff you've written so far and it all seems really good in my opinion.
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Well, I certainly think you've done some great work.
Thank you, I'm still fairly new to the whole thing, so I'm still finding my feet a bit. Hopefully as I keep going I'll get better, I've been doing loads of it, I'm hoping the more I keep at it the better I'll get.
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Thanks, I appreciate the compliment.
No problem, you're really good especially for just starting off with this; just keep up with writing and you'll get better and better the more you do.
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You're welcome
The first episode took a lot of time for me to get into, I knew where I wanted to go but it took a while to get into a good writing rhythm. Probably because it needs to introduce everyone and the situation. But I think by episode 3 or so I'd gotten more comfortable with writing them. I've actually already written the first 7 episodes, but I thought it best not to upload them all at once, so I'm doing one a week, hopefully that'll give me time to write a few more before I run out of ones I've already written.
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Yeah intros are hard, especially with a bunch of characters; you handled it a lot better than I did with my current series where I decided to try giving each of the main four characters their own intro story only to find that was rather hard to do especially since my original plotline only had three of the four in it lol. Wow you already have 7 of those episodes done? That's really impressive; I can't wait to see the rest of them, and yeah sounds like a good idea to give yourself plenty of time to keep writing.
Btw just curious do you rp at all?
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The downside was that that first chapter went on a really long time without anything really happening. There's a bit early on where Tiffany's dress gets billowed up from the bus stopping, that was added in after I'd finished just to avoid the story taking too long to establish the underwear element, which seemed like an important thing to signpost at an early point. But yeah, episode 1 I wrote in early november, 2,3,4 and most of 5 I wrote over a particularly productive week in december, the rest of 5, then 6 (which is another long one) and 7 I wrote just over the last two weeks. I have episode 8 planned out, and some ideas for the next few after that as well.
I don't know, it's not something I've really tried.
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I didn't think the first chapter was too bad, it didn't take too long to get started and there was a decent bit that happened during it. Writing that much in one week is really impressive, I wish I could make progress like that; right now I'm on a bit of hiatus with plans to restart uploading next month, but even at my most productive I can't write that quickly.
Let me know if you want to give it a try they can be rather fun especially when you have a bunch of fun characters to use.
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I had the benefit of having planned the first five episodes out in advance, with the order of events and key points pre-planned, so when I wrote the big load of them in december I'd done most of the work already. The last two I wrote took longer because I had to plan them out individually then write them. In fact Episode 6 came out of nowhere, it's set on the weekend after the first week of term, and I hadn't planned to do a weekend episode, I was just going to jump into the following week, but I had a really interesting dream that I wanted to try and incorporate into a story, and by the following night I'd planned a storyline around it. But it took ages to write that one.Β
I'll give it some thought. I certainly have quite a few interesting characters, although I'm still getting to grips with them and their various quirks. Some are easier to write for than others, I've found.
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Yeah that's a big advantage, for my stuff I planned out a later story line in pretty decent detail, but I'm been making up the earlier parts as I go along which has been annoying to work with. Yeah I like to add parts set in strange time places too just because I feel like having something happen, that's actually the story behind what might be the next thing I post where I had an interesting idea during my rp with someone that I decided to flesh out into a full blown story set sometime that is completely irrelevant to everything else I have planned.
That's fine, often times I've used rps to get a really good feel on some of my characters prior to introducing them in actual stories; so it's fine if you're still learning them.
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I have a sort of broader plan with bits and pieces that I want to do set at various points during the school year, and even a few things for later years if I get that far. I'll probably have to drop the "one episode per day of term" thing, though, it'll get a bit repetetive if I end up doing 300 episodes all set the same year. The first two weeks, though, there is an episode planned for every school day. I go on holiday at the end of february, so I'll be putting up roughly one a week until then.
I'll certainly consider it, I could imagine it would be a good source of ideas, like incorporating interesting things that happen into stories.
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That sounds like a good plan to go forward with, a few bits and pieces are all you really need to end up creating a lot of interesting stories. Yeah I can imagine one story per day of their school would end up getting a bit harder to write after a while, but doing it for a while seems like a rather cool concept.
Just send me a note anytime if you want to start one, I could end up using my main human characters meeting yours at the school or something like that as a basic plot start for it. Yeah I've gotten a lot of ideas I used later from rps in the past.
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I'm certainly sticking with the current format until the end of week two. Although there is only one story set in the weekend inbetween. I might end up doing a story set over a few seperate days some time, I'll probably experiment with stuff like that. One of my other influencial writers on here I've been taking inspiration from is carlydawson17, and her stories seem to be spaced out by around a week in-story, which seems quite a good pace, I think more than a week between stories would start to lose a feel of continuity. I'll see how it all goes, I'm currently having a lot of fun writing them, so hopefully I'll get as much done while I'm in a writingy mood.Β
That sounds like it would be interesting, I'll give it some thought and get back to you on that.
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Yeah switching between days between stories and a week between stories sounds like a pretty good plan, that's pretty much what I'm planning to do once I'm able to start writing again with my next few things taking place back to back days aside from some that take place who cares when then skipping around in weeks until I get the major plot line I'm planning. Keep a sense of continuity can be hard, but seems like you have a good plan to keep it going.
Alright
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It's just a matter of working out the right balance, I think. A bit like balancing out the speed I upload at, like although I have the next 4 episodes written, it would be crazy to upload them any quicker than I am since I only have 4 watchers at the moment. But then any slower and it might put off any potential readers, if they though the series was dead, it's quite hard to find an audience when you're just starting out. I imagined I'd put out my first one and everyone who likes that type of thing would just show up, but it seems you need more patience than that. But I've had at least some feedback, for which I'm very grateful, I know that at least 3 people have enjoyed what I've written.
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Yeah starting out with that type of story can be hard, I think what you're doing right now is handling it a lot better than I or most people would have handled it and if you keep it up you'll get more watchers in no time with your skill just keep at it. I don't usually give feedback when people are looking for it since I'm always a bit iffy with settling my own opinions on things, but I really do thing you're handling it all really well right now and the stories are great.
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Well, I appreciate what feedback I have had, I mean even just you saying you've read them, and enjoyed them was enough to at least know that they're being well received by someone, I wouldn't expect in-depth critical analysis, or over the top praise, the amount of feedback I've had from you has been nice. I'm quite hopeful still that with time and continued work I can get a few more readers. I also appreciate you saying I'm handling it well, because I've been kind of stumbling around blindly a little, making it up as I go along, so it's good to hear I'm going in the right general direction.
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