HereticalGM In reply to juju712 [2013-11-06 04:27:04 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes I check sooner than later

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juju712 In reply to HereticalGM [2013-11-06 17:46:17 +0000 UTC]

^^

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2011-04-11 15:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Vengeance part 2 is coming by the end of April. It just needs to finish editing, and I am working on the flow of events.

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2011-01-25 05:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Once I do better descriptions of them the perfect picture would be one of Karma and Nick with Karma laughing and Nick embarrassed.

Or the Scene were nick is driving Karma home while she's passed out drunk.

Or for a good romantic feel. Nick holding Karma and holding her hair back, as she offers to the idol of everyone who had too much to drink.

Or The Scene where Nick is looking around Karma's room in shock.

But tell me what's your favorite Scene? Which of the moments from the Teacher do you like the best? Because that is the moment I would say that would be the best to draw.

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xz791 In reply to HereticalGM [2011-01-26 11:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, difficult choise.
Maybe something about how Karma is seeing Nick as a angel while also showing how he views himself (the opposite of a angel i am guessing)...

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2011-01-31 20:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Nick doesn't view himself as the opposite of an angel. He views himself as a knight in shining armor. It could almost be said that he has a Don Quixote complex.

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xz791 In reply to HereticalGM [2011-02-01 10:42:35 +0000 UTC]

So who is nick his dulcinea then if he has that complex?

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2011-03-26 02:34:14 +0000 UTC]

For nick it isn't a matter of any one woman being his Dulcinea at the moment. For him it's the ideal of teaching, and being a teacher. To better his students lives and help them to become good moral people.

Nick sees Karma as a Joan of Arc figure, and all of the teachers he knows are in a way knights to him, so though his image of Karma is improving all the time. Becoming stronger and stronger.

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2010-08-31 05:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Sept 1st

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2010-04-27 10:08:09 +0000 UTC]

It's been slow going on the teacher mainly due to work related issues. I'm up for promotion but that means all kinds of crazy extra training sessions, helping out at other stores, ect. All of this combined means less time to write.

That said, next chapter should be out by the end of the week. And I'm going to shoot for a chapter a week. at least until the end of the Japan arc. After that I'm going back amending the time line and plot a bit, fleshing out some of the Auxiliary characters.

For example I have been meaning to do something featuring Mellisa's class and showing her doing an after school club for students who are of human eating races and teaching them how to resist their natural urges or channel them in "socially acceptable ways".

Also I need to go back and do a history lesson about the "Peace Treaty" that changed everything. I know it's rather Anita Blake(esq) plot device but the peace treaty in this case is rather pivotal because the safety of Nick, and the humans of this world is rather dependent on it, and it explains why mobs with pitchforks aren't gathered outside of the school ready to burn it down.

Another factor I need to go back and do that I have been bouncing around but can't figure out how to approach more than I have already is Nick was a geek in High-school and College. Hence the Battlech and Warhammer T-shirts in his closet. Of course the very existence of a Warhammer 40k t-shirt creates a problem because the feel of that game would have to have changed due to the "Treaty", more over Nick put his geeky ways behind him when he graduated but still owns the t-shirts which he relaxes around his apartment in on weekends when no one can see him.

Also I need to spend more time on Tressa, and bring up the fact that she used to be human, she wasn't born a werewolf. She was infected with the condition when young. She had a wild streak and in highschool it was a singular student teacher who helped her get her act together in her senior year.

As you can see there is a lot to write. Plus we get to see Nick's third, and most painful to him, form of Psychic attack. Using it will hurt nick greatly so I have been remiss to write it because the more I write about Nick the more I want to give him the bro fist. He's the kinda guy I want to be to be honest. Oh well enough spoilers. Thanks for the push xz791. Sometimes it's needed.

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xz791 In reply to HereticalGM [2010-04-27 10:56:12 +0000 UTC]

In the first chapter you already wrote about how Tressa became a werewolf, thanks to a abusive stepfather who turned out to be a werewolf.

Melissa... That was long ago that there was some mention of that arachne ><
I actually had to look that name up again ^^"

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HereticalGM In reply to xz791 [2010-04-28 03:33:46 +0000 UTC]

That though was mentioned in my notes. I need to work it into the story. Same with the after school class that Melissa teaches. I need to go back and develop these things in the story.

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