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Yoko-Meow
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[2007-10-25 00:05:28 +0000 UTC]
"Cheshire Cat"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 84; Deviations: 87; Watchers: 33
Watching: 49; Pageviews: 12116; Comments Made: 861; Friends: 49
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: I enjoy the style's more than the actual artistFavorite movies: Lord of the Dance (even if its a corny choice)
Favorite TV shows: Pysch, Doctor Who, The Daily Show with John Stuart, and The Upsidedown show
Favorite bands / musical artists: Everything... including the kitchen sink
Favorite writers: Darren Shan
Favorite games: Kingdom Hearts 1 and 2
Favorite gaming platform: gamecube
Tools of the Trade: varies too much
Other Interests: art, writting, and movies..... oh and the great outdoors!
# About me
Current Residence: kansasFavourite style of art: pencil drawing
Operating System: Wacom Tablet
MP3 player of choice: i-pod
Favourite cartoon character: Cheshire Cat
Personal Quote: Secrets Keep You Sane
# Comments
Comments: 101
you're welcome anytime .
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Please, check this out. It's a comic about Hades and Persephone in Disney universe.
[link]
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lol Okay I am in love with your story. Hades is just so Dorky, and Cute. *le sigh* Anyways thanks for pointing me to your page, haha its great! 
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I wish, sick with the flu. 
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so whats new with you?
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really? is it inuyahsa, or something else?
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inuyasha but i dont have a title
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do have any ideas for it? or is it just blank?
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I feel your pain I hate it when that happens.
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sorry my replies might be long in coming (being sick and all, not to mention cable guys working on the internet so it keeps going down. This is the third time I have tried to send this message. lol)
And as for the title it might help if you look through your first chapter and the main theme turn it into the title. Thats what I did with choice. Inuyasha had to choose between Kags and Kik which lead to the events of the story. Does that help?
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yep maybe u can read it when it comes up
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ok I am all for reading new fanfics
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good cause it's almost done
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awesome just tell me when its done!
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Ya I looked in your gallery and found it. Although its short, I like it. I do have one thing to say, but its more of a critic, however the good kind. I don't know would you want to hear it?
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ok sorry once I gave someone some constructive criticism like I thought they wanted and they yelled at more for an hour so now I ask just to make sure.
So I love the plot, its new and interesting. (I have read a lot of repeated themes) But this one was really cool. I like how she talks to the sword in the end. She seems like the kind to blame everything on the sword and talk to it like a sentient being. Um I think you cut your sentences a little too short. I mean there is nothing wrong with them, but they feel like you rushed to get to the next sentence if that makes any sense. I feel like if you could draw out those ideas a little more it would make your story phenomenal.
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well i do have a brain problem i think like a 9yr old
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I think its really just the story is in your head, and when you start writing it down you forget to put in the details because you already know them. I do this all the time, lol. it sucks, and usually takes a lot of revision.
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m but i have a plot for our rp/story
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Ok soo kelli and Yoko join Inuyasha and his group.While on the journay they run into Sesshomaru some how and he sees the new girls and falls in love with kelli!(XD) Later on they find Naraku and Naraku kidnaps Kelli and sesshomaru saves her before naraku could rape her....thats what i got so far
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Hmmm.... okay so I think there needs to be more with the plot. Like why Kelli? (we will still do that) and what about the others? whose the big bad. Just little details, but we can go over more later. I need to go (babysitting) But if you want to figure out this stuff, oh and did you get a profile for Kelli?
Talk to ya laters!
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