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offbyzero [2009-10-23 05:15:17 +0000 UTC]

I like this. The words and the shift do a lot.
And I really think you did well with the shading.

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lennwallace [2009-10-22 02:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Glad to have this in what's sure to be an awesome book, hon.

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aaronminier [2009-10-12 21:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm really digging this and the rest of the pages...Nicely done.

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MerinkArt [2009-10-12 13:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww, story of my life, the illustrations are lovely

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mortmortmorty [2009-10-12 12:10:11 +0000 UTC]

agh so beautiful!! great anatomy, great overtone, great colors. we need to discuss these techniques, i would love your input!

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Renegade-Hamster [2009-10-12 08:10:54 +0000 UTC]

I like how the rest of it comes together, looking at the images at your blog. I think it's great in black and white. Not much of a fan of the colouring. It seems like you're going for subdued colouring here (which is good for the subject), but I think the lower panel on this page loses attention, because of how much lighter the top panel is.

The undressing scene is interesting. I liked how the sequence came together there. I wasn't sure at first what the most left picture of the girl was doing (I thought she was drying her hair with a towel), so it might be a good idea to make the shirt colour distinctive, to help keep the reader uninterrupted in their digestion of the images.

It's also an interesting comic motif to use natural line barriers in the art to separate different panels instead of drawing panel lines. I like it.

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ayuICHI [2009-10-12 05:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Oooh very nice. I like!

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PeregrineJazmin [2009-10-12 04:34:51 +0000 UTC]

i love how you portrayed the mood trough the colors~

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