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lydia-san In reply to 13-year-old [2016-01-29 02:58:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh gooshh just noticed you watched meee thank you so much you're too kiinndd
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Obelis [2016-01-23 04:49:17 +0000 UTC]
#projectcomment
Oh, I know that feeling when you are afraid to draw something because you're afraid to ruin that topic for yourself!.. However, you definitely didn't ruin Rurouni Kenshin for yourself by this. This anime was also my childhood favorite so I have lots of warm feelings to it!
This artwork impressed me! I like the calm atmosphere, created by peaceful look in the characters' eyes. Also, the pose! The way Kenshin and Kaoru are holding hands shows the strong bond between them. I especially like how you drew Kenshin's hand - I can see all those hand bones through his skin, which creates an impression that the author knows anatomy really well! Also - the pattern of Kaoru's kimono - it's a perfect combination between decorativeness and realism.
What could be improved here is Kenshin's clothes. You see, under his pink part of clothes he should be wearing a white shirt like he always does.
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Also, Kenshin's scar. A part of it should be seen on his left cheek...
However, these are just little details to fix. Generally, you did great. Keep up the good work!
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Obelis In reply to 13-year-old [2016-01-23 05:37:00 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! You probably hadn't watched RurouKen for a while and that's the reason why you forgot them. Human's memory can be such a tricky place...
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jmalfonso7 [2016-01-22 21:23:28 +0000 UTC]
Hello, This is from ProjectComment!
This is a very good piece! I haven't watched this anime series, but I like the effects you did for the two of the characters shown. The colors are so vibrant tertiary colors of red and blue-violet, plus warm colors of red, yellow with tints of pink in it. I like how you did with the effects on the sky as well as the tree barely shown on the left. It's as if it were real.
One minor detail that's bothering me is the sky shown on the top-right behind the purple-haired girl. If you could match that sky well with that next to Rurouni Kenshin, or vise versa, that would be perfect!
Overall, this is great and keep it up! You're getting there!
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jmalfonso7 In reply to 13-year-old [2016-01-23 05:18:32 +0000 UTC]
That's okay whatever works to create the illusion is fine all the more! What caught my attention even for a split second is looking at Kenshin embraced by Himura. And the background just fits perfectly as they are looking at each other.
Overall, a job well done!
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jmalfonso7 In reply to 13-year-old [2016-01-23 08:17:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh sorry, I never watched the series and watched snippets of Samurai X, I didn't know much of the characters names...I always thought Himura was the name because of the hashtag label shown below...
My apologizes..
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chinchongcha [2016-01-20 08:12:19 +0000 UTC]
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Hey It's very good semi or realistic (sry i'm new artist). Blooming effect of his and her hair is very good. I feel very good at his neck from sternocleidomastoid and his clavicle is so good. You paint your hair with great skill and stunning visual.
For one thing I think her head is not the same way with neck and her entire body so I feel her head float around lol. Her kimono is not in detail like his cloth (I think you lose all power for him haha)
Background is good one and this is a great art. I'm still new so maybe it's my mistake so far. Have a nice day!
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chinchongcha In reply to 13-year-old [2016-01-20 16:36:37 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. I'm so glad this comment not bother you since I'm just a newbie >w<.
Oh about sternocleidomastoid (I guess you copy and paste ), I just addict from medical school so pardon me
I have the same problem too when I color I usually use cheat free transform all around character (haha that's a shame for me )
Thank you so much. You are so professional.
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kyrtuck [2016-01-19 15:27:36 +0000 UTC]
This looks too glossy and shiney, which looks particularily bad for the robes, becuase of the pressumed material. The hairline on the second girl's forehead, should get done differently, make it so its not such a smooth line. Or, was that a boy? Dang it, its like tatlntael said, they both look like girls. The color of the eyes seems much too light, it looks like they're possessed, but then Im not at all familiar with these characters, so maybe thats what they're supposed to look like? It seems like their eye pupils should be a little more visible. The eye lashes on the second girl (girl?) seem a little short to me, but maybe its supposed to be like that.
The hair looks good, and this is the one part that looks like it has appropriate lighting on it. the lighting should not be as drastic on the clothing, and maybe not quite as drastic on the flesh, though it does help with the noses and other features which look finely sculpted.
Lastly, the background looks way blurry and out of focus. I know backgrounds should often be like that, but it feels like you over did it. Maybe you could've shown a little more of the background too? It looks like a water fall and trees, but Im not wholly sure.
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kyrawriter [2016-01-19 15:20:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice looking pair. Good background.
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Arthey [2016-01-19 09:07:11 +0000 UTC]
I love those colors well done
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tatlntael [2016-01-19 07:08:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, this comment might come off sounding weird but I feel Kenshin turned out looking a bit too feminine. Honestly, when I see him here, he could easily pass for another woman to me. I feel the hands need some work; They just seem a bit...crooked.
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