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1pen — MANA: Ain't Nobody

Published: 2011-04-14 18:48:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1366; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Description The Mana Farms story line frequently contains mature language, topics, and situations. The characters within are fictional beings with weaknesses and faults, and I cannot promise you that you will like them for what they believe, say and do.

Note: The character Re, or "Running Elk", as seen below, was first introduced in the Mana farms entry "Counting Coup" in case you've forgotten.


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The horse Fiveforfighting was a big tall gangly colt from a farm in West Virginia no one had ever really heard of. His sire was Big Bend of plebeian breeding, whose only claim to fame was some mediocre connection to the blood that had given the racing world John Henry. He was a lot bigger than he ought to be at his age; long and straight and pointy in a few places like a Norfolk pine, and then knobby and stringy everywhere else like a rubber tree. He walked like a tree too; his head bobbing this way and that way like a new hickory quivering in the wind and singing to himself “Ain’t a nothing gonna blow me down, me down, ain’t nothing gonna blow me down.” He was something like a twelve year old boy who got his growth spurt when he was nine, towering over the other students in his class and making all the other mothers whisper that maybe he was a less-than-stellar dope of a kid who had to repeat. His legs were so long, too long, that it made his tail seem mistakenly short, like his little sister had done the job of cutting it for him and had cut it all wrong. His mane would never lay straight and his feet weren’t either and sometimes he ate so slowly he fell asleep and the grooms would come by and see his big ugly mug propped in the bucket as he slept standing up. The colt didn’t have much of a face either. It was long and pointy at one end with two large brown whorls like uneven mismatched knots in the walnut grain of him at the top for eyes. The Mexican grooms called him “Maderuca” which meant “ugly, rotten wood”, but Maggie called him adorable and nicknamed him “Riley” instead. “Riley is a such a great sweet horse.” “Riley deserves an oatmeal cookie for being such a great sweet horse.” But as soon as her back was turned, all of the grooms and all of the riders called him “Mr. Maderuca” again, divided the oatmeal cookies between themselves, and joked about shoving the horse down an abandoned well.

It was no small wonder then that the bosses gave the ugly horse to Re.

Horses made of prized sandalwood like Subversive or agarwood like Thisismyboomstick, the dark rich metallic luster of koa wood like Xanthippus, or the curly fiddleback maple horse Altissima,...those horses, rare, exotic, quality animals went to master carpenters with rough blistered hands and sharp beady eyes that were designing and planning the moment they picked up the reins. The moment lumber like that came off of the boat, they were passed off to men who could shape and bend and hammer horseflesh into works of art to dazzle and stupefy patrons who eagerly sought a return on their investment.

But the pines and the spruce raised up in farms in some old man’s back yard went to apprentices, quiet inexperienced boys like Running Elk who stood in front of the cheap horses and stared.

Riley took a great deep breath that filled his barrel chest to the brim before he exhaled long and slow out both of his large wide nostrils and stared back. “Ain’t a nothing gonna blow me down, me down, ain’t nothing gonna blow me down,” he sang, "I may be brown but I ain't gonna frown, oh nobody's gonna blow me down, me down."

Running Elk took another deep breath and listened as the horse sang the old refrain again. It had a rich deep sound to it, like an old slave humming to himself as he walked the rows of sugarcane, but tongue-in-cheek, a bundle of raw cane tucked under his arm for the barbeque pit and some good cooking as soon as his day was done. "My life is hard, is hard, but I’ll take the scraps and still eat well, eat well, and if I die well then I'm free and the good lord he can come for me."

“I have heard that song before,” Re admitted. He hadn’t heard it before with the backcountry twang that the horse used when he sang it to Running Elk, the song he’d heard was softer and older, but it was still a song he’d heard all his life. It was in the rhythm of his mother hammering down the lumber and the tin to their broken down trailer on the reservation after a big storm had ripped the last one off or the way his stepfather worked at the well in the back that hadn’t run for weeks. He’d heard his little sister sing that song while playing with a doll the charities had left at the reservation the Christmas before with a box of oranges and some hand-me-down clothes. And he himself had sung it while walking to the bushtracks of Montana and Wyoming. “No well is going to leave my family dry today, no broken down well is going to leave me dry.” It was a song as bitter and strong as tea, and just as medicinal if you were willing to drink it.

“I know that song,” he repeated to the horse. He reached down into his pants pocket and the horse’s ears twitched forward reflexively.

“No, this is not the cookie you were promised but had taken from you when others discovered how valuable it is, this is a gift from brother to brother. Have you ever tasted thunder in your mouth?” he asked. His fingers curled around the loose sand in his pocket and he pulled it out. The horse saw nothing, not even the sand, but he smelled the salt and the minerals and he leaned forward a little closer. Re stood there rolling around a few large grey and orange granules between his thumb and forefinger before sliding his hand palm up underneath the horse’s mouth. A long pink tongue snaked out and licked it up. Re glanced over his shoulder; no one was near them.

“Today you will run faster than ever,” he whispered, “Lightning rock has a dangerous magic to it in the blood of cheap horses. Ain't nobody gonna blow you down.”


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Comments: 45

spookykitty123 [2011-07-20 07:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool style.

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1pen In reply to spookykitty123 [2011-07-20 17:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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AnimalArtKingdom [2011-07-19 03:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh no!
Great work on this. Well drawn.

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1pen In reply to AnimalArtKingdom [2011-07-20 02:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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thunderjam1992 [2011-05-24 03:33:48 +0000 UTC]

I... I... I have no idea what just happened. BUT I LOVED IT. Been a while since I read something that flowed so well. Love the wood metaphor.

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1pen In reply to thunderjam1992 [2011-06-04 17:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It'll become clearer once I get back to this side plot. And, yeah, it's been a while since I've written something that flowed so well.

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thunderjam1992 In reply to 1pen [2011-06-04 18:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Side plots ftw

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1pen In reply to thunderjam1992 [2011-06-04 18:45:40 +0000 UTC]

I have so many...I swear...it's a sickness.

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Azolio [2011-04-17 16:29:49 +0000 UTC]

RILEY!! dats mah name. He is my new favorite.

Buuut, interesting..very. hmmmm.

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1pen In reply to Azolio [2011-04-17 16:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Heehee! It IS isn't it?! Actually, I named him "Riley" for the enforcer on the Utah Grizzlies, though the comparison between horse and man sort of ends there! Well, no wait, they're both unearthly tall and tough, but that's it. I'd forgotten that was your name too! How cool!

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Azolio In reply to 1pen [2011-04-19 02:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh lovely hockey, influencing ponies. I love it. Haha, I feel so special....

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boxofpeaches [2011-04-16 18:33:32 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this so much... I've finally gotten caught up with your most recent stories and I have to say I've missed this little world of Mana farms.

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1pen In reply to boxofpeaches [2011-04-17 17:46:28 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you so much! I have really missed it too.

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123Lalaland456 [2011-04-16 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm running a little tune in my head with those words .. over and over ..

But, , I have the feeling this is going to end badly.

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1pen In reply to 123Lalaland456 [2011-04-17 17:46:11 +0000 UTC]

We'll see, eh?

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Queen-of-Randomness [2011-04-15 14:28:19 +0000 UTC]

OOOOH INTENSITY ABOUNDS! Post! Post! Post!

Also, your writing makes me want to just go hamanahamanahamanahamanahamana. Horses compared to trees? The visuals are just so STRIKING! fdsakfljdsklffdj;kff


AUGH WANT TO SEE THIS RACE SO BADLY IN MY HEAD.

*goes back to studying*

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1pen In reply to Queen-of-Randomness [2011-04-17 17:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I've been wanting to write for a while now, but haven't had much time and Re is a character who in that time I've been developing in my mind...same with the horse...so it's exciting for me to finally get to write about him...and frustrating too because I have to develop him slllooowwwlllyy. XD

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Queen-of-Randomness In reply to 1pen [2011-04-18 00:09:55 +0000 UTC]

All I know is I want MOAR!!!

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1pen In reply to Queen-of-Randomness [2011-04-19 15:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! and there will be more!

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Padfoot7411 [2011-04-15 10:05:08 +0000 UTC]

....I am in love with this horse, and his rider as well. You have my total attention Pen, lead me on

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1pen In reply to Padfoot7411 [2011-04-17 16:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Padfoot! I shall!!

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Padfoot7411 In reply to 1pen [2011-04-23 04:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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Freawaru2020 [2011-04-15 00:37:01 +0000 UTC]

*STEALS Riley* Me liky! VERY much!

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1pen In reply to Freawaru2020 [2011-04-15 01:27:18 +0000 UTC]

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Freawaru2020 In reply to 1pen [2011-04-15 03:32:37 +0000 UTC]

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scaramouche2802 [2011-04-14 22:15:40 +0000 UTC]

o.o

...interesting

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1pen In reply to scaramouche2802 [2011-04-15 01:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Hehehehe...interesting, eh?

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scaramouche2802 In reply to 1pen [2011-04-15 07:31:15 +0000 UTC]

mmmm and if it's going where I think it's going well, all I'm gonna do is this ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Honey-Hill [2011-04-14 21:20:46 +0000 UTC]

I am so confused.

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1pen In reply to Honey-Hill [2011-04-14 21:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Is it just the switch in narrative to a new character?

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Honey-Hill In reply to 1pen [2011-04-14 22:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I believe it is xD

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1pen In reply to Honey-Hill [2011-04-15 01:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm moving Re and Brett up a little importance-wise.

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Beollain [2011-04-14 20:51:28 +0000 UTC]

... you can never go away and deprive us again.

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1pen In reply to Beollain [2011-04-14 21:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you!

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MissDudette [2011-04-14 20:44:04 +0000 UTC]

The fr3@k!n' h3ll!!! Get him away from that horse!

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1pen In reply to MissDudette [2011-04-14 21:43:47 +0000 UTC]

No worries...

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MissDudette In reply to 1pen [2011-04-14 22:17:52 +0000 UTC]

*is panicking*

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Niur-Tarow [2011-04-14 19:50:06 +0000 UTC]

You have just earned my undivided attention. 0.0

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1pen In reply to Niur-Tarow [2011-04-14 21:43:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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decors [2011-04-14 19:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Mana stories YAY (but no Eds :/ sniffs...I want me EDS! *howls a little sad song*)

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1pen In reply to decors [2011-04-14 21:27:20 +0000 UTC]

I know, I know. XD

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Pliochippus [2011-04-14 19:08:26 +0000 UTC]

oooooohhhh!

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1pen In reply to Pliochippus [2011-04-14 19:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh?

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Pliochippus In reply to 1pen [2011-04-15 08:13:19 +0000 UTC]

mhm... it's an "ooh, how interesting, I wonder whats going to happen next" kinda oooh. Good ooooooh

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1pen In reply to Pliochippus [2011-04-17 17:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Always good to have a good oh!

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