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Published: 2005-09-29 19:38:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 8539; Favourites: 193; Downloads: 201
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You live to love.You love to give.
You give your love.
Your love is big.
Your big heart smiles.
Your smile is bright.
Your brightness blinds.
You're blind to spite.
You spit at hate.
You hate to cry.
You cry to love.
Your love is fate.
Your fate is real.
You really try.
You try to love.
To love, you'd die.
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Comments: 92
EMO stands for emo-core, which is a form of self-expressive punk music. I am an emo. Yes, I do have depression, but that is because I have manic depressive disorder. NOT BECAUSE I AM EMO.
All of that aside, this is a beautifully emotional poem.
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I am anti-emo because I have graduated from that crap.
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I love the way you written this 
though the title makes me uncomfortable 
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[What's wrong with it?]
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"anti-emo"
>_<
I'm not emo, but I try not to judge...though...they do wine about stuff a lot...
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[Yes, they do...:/]
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That's really good, you're very talented ^^.
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awwwwwwwwww !
i really love this, great job ! (L)
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Aaah, I completely agree. ^^
Oh devotion, how lovely it is. <3
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Beatiful...thats all I have to say. It was very beatiful.Keep writing, okay. Luv ya!
xoxoxoxo,
mmp13
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hehe i love it, its beautiful, being emo i understand what your saying
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this very well written.
has a great meter and overall makes sense. Good job!!
hails!!
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idk if i've commented already, but i fav'd a while back and i still come back every once in a while to read this amazing poem!!! it's so beautiful!
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aaaaaaaaaaah! It burns, it buuuuuuuuuuurns!!!! lol
The poem is beautiful though, very very nice. Amazing in fact,
Just... too much happiness and hope.... to much cheery stuff... too much love...
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i really like this, it's very meaningful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I really love your writting! It's so sweet ! o.O
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Oh man, I can't believe you fit so much meaning in such a short poem.
Kudos to you.
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Certainly one of the most rythmic, flowing poems I've read in quite a while. Keep it up, you have a great gallery here, ^^
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Thanks : D oh and nice ralphie quote on your sig *thumbsup*
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wow ... o_O I couldnt do that ... it sounds difficult ... Good job! It flows so perfect. ... whooOOaaaAA....
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I guess I didn't like the 'flowy connections' that everybody else did. Starting every line with the ending word on the last line came across as forced in a couple circumstances, and was kind of gimmicky over-all. It reminded me of the way little kids talk, or would right poetry, really simplistically, you know.
However, it wasn't terrible. I like how the first line is, "you live to love", and the last one is, "to love, you'd die." That was a nice touch.
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Oh. My.
This is amazing. It looked like a really really simple poem at first. And it is. But the way you put such a simple meaning together, with such simple words just makes me smile. I love it. I love how the edge-word of one line, echos and it begins the next. And the ending seals it all with a snappy-clank.
Donuts for you.
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