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Description How many of us are suffering in silence?

Does anyone believe that the other person cares? That they will listen and do something, anything?

How many of us are suffering in silence?

So much that we are rendered mute, eyes to the ground, ashamed of looking up, not having the confidence to even look at ourselves, believe what is honestly right, and stand up for what we believe in.

How many of us are suffering in silence?

Our 'rights'; continuously  t  h r  a s  h e d  like what someone calls a 'thing' and you a 'body', a 'heart', a 'life'.

Our 'freedom'; [incarcerated] no longer a human being, but a 'thing' that doesn't exist and isn't even worthy of the liberty to see, hear, taste, touch and smell.

Our 'happiness'; where we don't (can't) have a conscious thought to dream of those days, cling onto those dreams, because we are too busy surviving just one. more. day.

How many?

How many of us are living through the {S    C   R  E A  M I   N   G} pain every minute?


Every. Single. Minute.




How many?
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Comments: 117

3wyl In reply to ??? [2017-08-14 23:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Of sorts, yes.

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RueTris [2013-01-24 00:27:09 +0000 UTC]

This is very well written. It's sad how many of us go through so much alone, because no one cares. This captures that tragedy very well.

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3wyl In reply to RueTris [2013-01-24 20:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Indeed... I think it's an issue that pops up often in our lives.

Thanks for the comment.

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RueTris In reply to 3wyl [2013-01-25 00:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

No problem. ^^

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Postmorteum [2012-07-21 10:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written. It's so sad what goes on in this world. You'd think that every person that causes such pain has a heart as well, maybe it's been emptied, hallowed or blackened but that gives no excuse. Thank you for a piece that draws on awareness, attention, and sensitivity.

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3wyl In reply to Postmorteum [2012-07-24 13:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes.. maybe. There are all sorts of reasons there. =/

It's awkwardly written. I can still remember that.

But thank you.

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Postmorteum In reply to 3wyl [2012-07-24 21:44:14 +0000 UTC]

True.

You're welcome.

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Astrikos [2012-04-23 21:05:40 +0000 UTC]

It's so deeply touching. I think you nailed it. Perfect power and use of different freestyle writing expressions.

SO touching... Every word well chosen!

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3wyl In reply to Astrikos [2012-04-26 14:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Really? I still feel as if this is quite awkward.

Thank you.

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Astrikos In reply to 3wyl [2012-04-26 21:39:52 +0000 UTC]

What's awkward? Your creation, or my comment?

I think it's not awkward. I think it's from the heart. Nothing's wrong with that.

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3wyl In reply to Astrikos [2012-04-28 10:30:06 +0000 UTC]

The creation. Your comments are never awkward.

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Astrikos In reply to 3wyl [2012-05-02 21:44:57 +0000 UTC]

I see.



Thanks. Your comments are never awkward either! The opposite!

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3wyl In reply to Astrikos [2012-05-03 14:48:35 +0000 UTC]

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stonedInc [2011-06-18 20:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Is it ok if emotions fail?

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3wyl In reply to stonedInc [2011-06-20 20:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Aww..

I can't say I'm too fond of this piece, actually. It feels a bit too stilted for me, but I am glad you like it?

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stonedInc In reply to 3wyl [2011-06-20 20:37:21 +0000 UTC]

It's a bit rough, but I know a few people who live in similar scenarios, probably I shouldn't use the word "Live" more like "living dead".

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3wyl In reply to stonedInc [2011-06-21 18:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah... I see what you mean. =/

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Crunchy-Case [2011-01-21 01:04:53 +0000 UTC]

The tone sounded sad.

It broke my heart, it did.
Aw, elaine.

Don't worry, you can scream any time you
want, I won't let them stop you.

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3wyl In reply to Crunchy-Case [2011-01-23 18:06:24 +0000 UTC]

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Crunchy-Case In reply to 3wyl [2011-02-02 00:45:49 +0000 UTC]

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sombra013 [2011-01-16 23:53:34 +0000 UTC]

*Sniff* Beautiful, the effects you added to the words made it even more easy to feel... how to put it? ...to feel the impact of each word crashing into a sentence, into a true hearted story.
I, for my part, found it like a sad truth.
You're quite a story teller.

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3wyl In reply to sombra013 [2011-01-17 21:08:34 +0000 UTC]



It's still a bit rough, this piece... Or rather, I don't feel proud of it. =/

Thanks a lot, though!

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sombra013 In reply to 3wyl [2011-01-17 21:18:57 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Beyond-the-void [2010-05-18 10:37:50 +0000 UTC]

Wow! It's a beautiful text...
sometimes I feel similar like this text..
it's beautiful, harsh reality and that's really painful

(excuse me for my english xD I'm a little bad writing it, but I understande it all)

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3wyl In reply to Beyond-the-void [2010-05-18 17:54:07 +0000 UTC]



Thank you!

Oh, no, it's fine!

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RuelfA [2010-04-18 20:16:52 +0000 UTC]

*Gasp*
This piece just ..took my breath away...

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3wyl In reply to RuelfA [2010-04-18 21:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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technochroma [2009-12-12 08:27:27 +0000 UTC]

Too many.

A great spoken piece.

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3wyl In reply to technochroma [2009-12-12 20:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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indikat [2009-12-02 17:13:07 +0000 UTC]

This is different from everything I've ever read on dA - thank you (XD), really!

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3wyl In reply to indikat [2009-12-02 21:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww... No, thank you. I appreciate the support.

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hexdeflective [2009-11-25 01:59:42 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I can say anything that hasn't already been said. Very powerful writing on a subject that, unfortunately all too often, gets swept under the carpet.

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3wyl In reply to hexdeflective [2009-11-25 19:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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ShinyFriction [2009-11-22 20:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Everyone suffers and it is our doom to unwittingly make others suffer. These are our karmic roles in life. Without that we could never experience happiness. (imho)

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3wyl In reply to ShinyFriction [2009-11-23 20:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Interesting...

So a sort of balance?

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blueAkemi [2009-11-22 02:26:49 +0000 UTC]

This is really powerful. I think more of an impact is made when reading this rather than hearing someone say it out loud. I have to say this is my favorite line:

"How many of us are living through the {S C R E A M I N G} pain every minute?"

The emphasis on different words makes this a very dramatic and thoughtful piece.

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3wyl In reply to blueAkemi [2009-11-23 20:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the constructive comment!

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SIXCOOKIES [2009-11-21 03:53:35 +0000 UTC]

I think of...mother Teresa. A woman was lying dying in the streets, people passing her by, no one caring. Mother Teresa took her in until she died in her chapel that night. There was a man picked off the street that said, "I have lived life like an animal, but I die like an angel, warm and loved." There was a woman with a starving family, whom mother Teresa had brought rice to. The mother divided up the rice and gave it to their neighbors saying they were hungry too. We are materialistic, but to be loved, to love in return, and to share that love, is all that is ever really needed. We buy things to feel whole, because we are lonely, but those who suffer in silence, don't know this, and so instead, spread love.

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3wyl In reply to SIXCOOKIES [2009-11-21 20:21:25 +0000 UTC]

That is... really interesting.

Thank you so much for sharing that. I must admit that I couldn't see how what you said related to this piece.. but I get what you mean.

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SIXCOOKIES In reply to 3wyl [2009-11-22 05:12:33 +0000 UTC]

That's just what it made me think of. =/

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3wyl In reply to SIXCOOKIES [2009-11-22 20:21:08 +0000 UTC]

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AstridBruning [2009-11-20 15:34:37 +0000 UTC]

I know this piece is about abuse after reading the comments, but I can read it also about depression where people suffer in silence, or people certified as mentally ill, and condemned by society resulting in isolation and no self worth.


Who really cares or understands?


Good piece. Profound

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3wyl In reply to AstridBruning [2009-11-21 20:03:50 +0000 UTC]

That's really interesting.

I think everyone can interpret this differently. I like that about art.

Indeed... It makes you wonder, here and now. >.<

Thank you for the comment.

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roseguardian5 [2009-11-20 02:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow...thats really powerful...well written to! Honestly, how many? Too many to count.

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3wyl In reply to roseguardian5 [2009-11-20 22:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

Thank you for the comment!

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roseguardian5 In reply to 3wyl [2009-11-20 23:03:32 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Extroth [2009-11-19 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm a sociology major and so to me this draws a lot of parallels to what I've been learning.

As a matter of fact did you know that Labor is considered a commodity. How is it possible to have rights in a society that considers the work someone does more valuable then there actually human worth.

Well that's just what I think.

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3wyl In reply to Extroth [2009-11-20 22:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah... Sociology is interesting. I must say that I personally prefer psychology over sociology.

That is a really interesting thought.

Makes you think that... thank you for sharing and commenting.

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Diesel-420 [2009-11-19 22:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Stellar... Thought Provoking

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3wyl In reply to Diesel-420 [2009-11-20 22:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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