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                                                                          depressive     (again)

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           e                                   of my soul
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                  where only

                                                            music...
                                                                                                              (will)


Help.                                           [me]
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Comments: 284

3wyl In reply to ??? [2015-02-28 13:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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NightsWarriors [2014-11-15 00:51:51 +0000 UTC]

I like the format of the poem.

I hope you feel better.  

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3wyl In reply to NightsWarriors [2014-11-15 12:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NightsWarriors In reply to 3wyl [2014-11-21 01:24:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Little-Red-Hat [2013-11-10 20:04:13 +0000 UTC]

An emotive and clever piece, with excellent use of space and formatting.

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3wyl In reply to Little-Red-Hat [2013-11-10 21:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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TabbyxthexCat [2013-03-04 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]

I can't tell what the circle says .-.

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3wyl In reply to TabbyxthexCat [2013-03-04 14:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Ah, the circle says 'isolate'.

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TabbyxthexCat In reply to 3wyl [2013-03-05 04:07:55 +0000 UTC]

The great part is I totally knew it said that my mind just didn't register it as one word. I'm like "late for what?" *facepalm*

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3wyl In reply to TabbyxthexCat [2013-03-05 09:40:25 +0000 UTC]



I get what you mean there!

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Soapets [2012-11-16 09:51:12 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwww u okay we all love u on da u are what makes this site BAAAAAAAD ASSS n cool

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3wyl In reply to Soapets [2012-11-16 13:05:28 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty old.

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Soapets In reply to 3wyl [2012-11-16 14:27:37 +0000 UTC]

yeaaaa but still hope u feel better er errrrrrr

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3wyl In reply to Soapets [2012-11-16 22:16:08 +0000 UTC]

It's up and down.

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Soapets In reply to 3wyl [2012-11-16 23:34:29 +0000 UTC]

awww u will be fine hun we all love you here in da land

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3wyl In reply to Soapets [2012-11-17 20:17:37 +0000 UTC]

That's false.

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Soapets In reply to 3wyl [2012-11-17 21:38:22 +0000 UTC]

how so?????????????

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3wyl In reply to Soapets [2012-11-18 13:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Can't have one without the other.

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Soapets In reply to 3wyl [2012-11-18 22:43:59 +0000 UTC]

im lost

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3wyl In reply to Soapets [2012-11-19 13:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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peteallott [2012-09-07 21:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Really creative, great!

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3wyl In reply to peteallott [2012-09-08 13:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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CMWVisualArts [2012-08-21 16:18:59 +0000 UTC]

What you just did.
Made me
[that's a good thing]

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3wyl In reply to CMWVisualArts [2012-08-21 17:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I guess.

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DerelictVampire [2012-02-14 07:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Creative writing 101--I'm the 101st fave, lol.

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3wyl In reply to DerelictVampire [2012-02-18 13:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thank you!

Quite fitting.

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WH1T3-N0153 [2011-03-30 23:50:00 +0000 UTC]

This is incredibly impressive... just the sheer amount of work that you must've had to put into the concrete form of the letters alone... o_o
Wow.

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3wyl In reply to WH1T3-N0153 [2011-04-01 19:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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lonealphawolf [2011-03-09 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]

I love the format of the poem!

It fits what you're trying to convey...

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3wyl In reply to lonealphawolf [2011-03-09 20:28:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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lonealphawolf In reply to 3wyl [2011-03-10 11:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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lonealphawolf In reply to 3wyl [2011-03-10 11:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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TheBrc147 [2011-02-03 23:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow...amazing...
I liked your way of creavity :3

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3wyl In reply to TheBrc147 [2011-02-05 11:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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TheBrc147 In reply to 3wyl [2011-02-05 11:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Now i want to write poems too,but i don't i'm gonna hehe

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3wyl In reply to TheBrc147 [2011-02-06 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww...

You should! That would be very cool.

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TheBrc147 In reply to 3wyl [2011-02-07 00:03:45 +0000 UTC]

ok if i got inspired i will... ^w^

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3wyl In reply to TheBrc147 [2011-02-07 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.

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TheBrc147 In reply to 3wyl [2011-02-07 21:25:42 +0000 UTC]

hehe :3

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Crunchy-Case [2011-01-20 22:14:58 +0000 UTC]

First off, cool text effect!

And second, I have to agree - music's really good for the mind.

And third, YOU ARE AMAZING.

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3wyl In reply to Crunchy-Case [2011-02-20 20:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

You are.

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Crunchy-Case In reply to 3wyl [2011-02-21 07:50:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

Thank you

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iwanow [2011-01-11 03:44:20 +0000 UTC]

This is really amazing. I love the layout so much.

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3wyl In reply to iwanow [2011-01-11 13:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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vanilla-the-echidna [2011-01-07 20:25:03 +0000 UTC]

weird this is how i feel today

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3wyl In reply to vanilla-the-echidna [2011-01-08 12:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww...

It's just a phase. =/


...Right?

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vanilla-the-echidna In reply to 3wyl [2011-01-08 15:32:16 +0000 UTC]

right

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3wyl In reply to vanilla-the-echidna [2011-01-09 15:19:29 +0000 UTC]

I don't know you at all so it feels a bit weird for me to say you can come to me and I'll listen sort of thing, but I'm always here if you ever need to talk. =/

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vanilla-the-echidna In reply to 3wyl [2011-01-10 23:48:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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missi-alicja [2011-01-03 21:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Interesting... And indeed for sure it was quite some of work to make these letters fit to the da text space...

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