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LucidPhoton [2014-01-07 19:03:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow The expressions here are fantastic! And why can't there be a Skylanders game that's based of this?!Β
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Zalay02 In reply to A7XSparx [2015-03-30 10:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Ikr! This would be an AWESOME story!!Β
Or if the bring back the spyro games! ( after The Legend of Spyro Triology )Β
that would be AWESOME!
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AntonSta [2013-12-17 15:05:04 +0000 UTC]
Now i did read through all the pages from page 1!
And i must i say i do regret THAT I DIDN'T DO THAT EARLIER!
Your work in this comic is as great as i'm ashamed i haven't appreciated it enough yet! D:
I don't follow a lot of comics, only specially selected ones that i come across, but your comic is now definitely one of them!
(actually i can only think of like 3 comics that i'm actively following at the moment!)
What i like very much about your comic is that even tough i still haven't played any skylanders game yet (shame on me),
i still can identify and feel with the characters!
I didn't dare to fully read the comic yet because i thougt i wouldn't be able to understand the story and character,
but i was so wrong!
Quality wise: The way your drawing style works with the characters is incredibly cute! (Especially whirlwind < 3)
On the first few pages i still had to get used to your handwriting, but the more i did read the easier it was,
and on the newest pages i can read it better than my own handwriting!
The story seemed a bit clichΓ© at first, but it really caught my attention and i'm looking forward to see how it develops and what you make of it!
Now onto commenting the actualy page!
PAGE 13
Now this is where the horror trip begins! D:
Oh god you're killing me o_o
That second panel with cynder criing in it. IT RIPS APART MY HEART!
How.. i have no idea!
You got a lot of emotion on this page! It's amazing!
I have a quick question regarding speech bubbles.
As i'm not a comic maker myself (yet) i noticed, that every comic i see does the speech-text differently.
In your case you use speech bubbles. I once did read somewhere that the "tails" of the bubbles should point towards the speakers mouth.
But in your case they point towards the character. So do you have any advice for me with speech-bubbles?
I can't find my source now where i did read that mouth-thing, and i'm really fine with the way you do the texts!
I didn't even think about that until this page, which is a good thing because that means that the texts seem natural!
The important thing is that the bubbles are not distracting from the rest and that the text is easy to read, and it is!
I really like the quality of your comic! ;D
Story wise i feel something important happening soon.
Well of souls = undead.
cynder = undead. (at least her sad face makes me die, but as i'm still writing i must be undead too)
ghost roaster = undead.
the comics title = "undying" (close enough!)
I'm not saiing there is a connection with all that, but i wouldn't be surprised if there was!
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A7XSparx In reply to AntonSta [2013-12-31 17:24:45 +0000 UTC]
OMG THANK YOU!!!! 8D Yeeep, I have to say that as much as I love DRAWING comics, I rarely follow them. I only read a few pages of ZR and really didn't keep up after a while, and other comics I've only skimmed and lost track of them after a while xDDD
But wow,Β that's AWESOME.Β I wasn't sure just how much I should describe each character, since it's aimed mostly towards the fans of the games, but I'm SO GLAD that someone like you who hasn't even touched Skylanders was still able to follow the story and not be utterly confused XD I plan to tell their stories more as the comic goes on.
Eeeee! Well, I never knew speech bubbles HAD to be pointed directly towards the mouth. Sometimes it can be difficult drawing the tail pointing towards the mouth, especially if the face is forward and the speech bubble is at the top of the panel. I think you can get away with just having the tail pointed towards the character with their mouth open, that way people can still tell who's talking and saying what.
The coloring of the speech bubbles is based on each character's element--Spyro, Sparx and Pop Fizz are Magic so they have a light purple; Cynder, Hex and Ghost Roaster are Undead so they have gray, and Whirlwind is Air so her speech is sky blue.
...ehehehe, I'm glad you picked up on that. The comic is centered mostly around the Undead and for many reason too, but I think that'll be further explained as the story goes on >:3 all in all, Thank you SO much!!!
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serpenna [2013-12-16 19:26:56 +0000 UTC]
death for a hero thats what
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A7XSparx In reply to RadSpyro [2013-12-15 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU
and omfg your adorable icon *glomps* why u do this to me D:
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RadSpyro In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-22 00:16:58 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you (and sorries) >:
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confiscatedretina In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 19:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Really?! Ooooooh! I'm guessing it's Kindle only?
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confiscatedretina In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-16 18:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Is that the one where Cynder is the title character? Because I am so getting it when I see it. XD
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Cyndergirl211 [2013-12-10 16:06:22 +0000 UTC]
I love this comic <3
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spyroatwarfang [2013-12-10 10:15:47 +0000 UTC]
LOVE DAT 3rd PANEL!!!
OMG whenever I see the title SUD I keep thinking of soap XD
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Star6176 [2013-12-10 00:45:22 +0000 UTC]
Awww!Β Shroom boom looks cute in your style! And poor cynder.Β
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A7XSparx In reply to sonicboom8710 [2013-12-15 16:46:21 +0000 UTC]
QUICK WE NEED TO FIND THE COLORFUL DISCO BALL OF FURY!
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sonicboom8710 In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 17:25:48 +0000 UTC]
YERSH!!! Let us go!
UP UP AND AWWAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CrossDevice [2013-12-09 23:36:58 +0000 UTC]
Seen? This is why you always have tug ships
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A7XSparx In reply to CrossDevice [2013-12-15 16:47:26 +0000 UTC]
That sounds painful o3o
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CrossDevice In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 18:01:36 +0000 UTC]
Only if you try to use your body as an anchor : D
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A7XSparx In reply to CrossDevice [2013-12-15 18:53:13 +0000 UTC]
That could work, but I would need a grappling hook, a penguin and a LOAD of hot glue.
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CrossDevice In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 19:16:29 +0000 UTC]
Don't forget 2.4Β Β BritishΒ Β China men
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PteraDragon [2013-12-09 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]
DONUT STEEL! YES
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A7XSparx In reply to PteraDragon [2013-12-15 16:45:57 +0000 UTC]
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Pieces-Mod [2013-12-09 22:21:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh yiss
We got epicness in the house toniiiiiight
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RPCatgirl56 [2013-12-09 21:51:55 +0000 UTC]
WOO! Cant wait to see what'll happen next! X3
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A7XSparx In reply to RPCatgirl56 [2013-12-15 16:50:09 +0000 UTC]
*is currently in the process of uploading the next page*
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EvArts [2013-12-09 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]
COOOOOOOL!!!!!
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