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FINALLY MOAR COMIC PAGES ARE BEING MADE!!!!!!!!!

These things take, like, an EXTRAORDINARY amount of time to color. But the last thing I wanna do is give up on this comic when I really have high hopes that I can finish it...unlike...SOME Spyro comics I made in the past *glares over at The Last Fight*

WHAT'S THIS? CYNDER is in this comic? And she's....BLACK AND RED?...well frankly, she's a dark, dull purple. My idea is that (and bear with me here) Master Eon wanted to completely hide Cynder's Kurosian ancestry (if you know *WeirdHyena you'll know what I mean; they were considered an evil race) so without much hesitation he pretty much made her purple and pink.

HOWEVER! For this comic I wanted to make her purple MUCH less striking and return her to her older color scheme, with only a HINT of purple based on that headcannon. I just feel like for an Undead Skylander, her black and red color scheme should have been restored. BUT NOPE! And now we have Phantom Cynder; a solid mass of purple tits. I'm sorry Cynder ;__;

*is done explaining things*

So Whirlwind seems to be on a "loner streak". WHAT COULD POSSIBLY GO WRONG HERE?!

Expect more pages soon! Hope you enjoy!!

Skyalnders (c) Activision

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DONUT STEEL!!!!!!!!!!!

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Comments: 39

LucidPhoton [2014-01-07 19:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow The expressions here are fantastic! And why can't there be a Skylanders game that's based of this?!Β 

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A7XSparx In reply to LucidPhoton [2014-01-26 17:32:12 +0000 UTC]

YEEEE THANKS! Β Hehehe, I wish they would do something a bit more centered around the Skylanders themselves rather than just....Flynn and Kaos But meh, I guess that's up to the fans to decide how the characters interact.

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Zalay02 In reply to A7XSparx [2015-03-30 10:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Ikr! This would be an AWESOME story!!Β 
Or if the bring back the spyro games! ( after The Legend of Spyro Triology )Β 
that would be AWESOME!

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AntonSta [2013-12-17 15:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Now i did read through all the pages from page 1!

And i must i say i do regret THAT I DIDN'T DO THAT EARLIER!

Your work in this comic is as great as i'm ashamed i haven't appreciated it enough yet! D:

I don't follow a lot of comics, only specially selected ones that i come across, but your comic is now definitely one of them!
(actually i can only think of like 3 comics that i'm actively following at the moment!)

What i like very much about your comic is that even tough i still haven't played any skylanders game yet (shame on me),
i still can identify and feel with the characters!
I didn't dare to fully read the comic yet because i thougt i wouldn't be able to understand the story and character,
but i was so wrong!

Quality wise: The way your drawing style works with the characters is incredibly cute! (Especially whirlwind < 3)
On the first few pages i still had to get used to your handwriting, but the more i did read the easier it was,
and on the newest pages i can read it better than my own handwriting!

The story seemed a bit clichΓ© at first, but it really caught my attention and i'm looking forward to see how it develops and what you make of it!

Now onto commenting the actualy page!
PAGE 13

Now this is where the horror trip begins! D:

Oh god you're killing me o_o
That second panel with cynder criing in it. IT RIPS APART MY HEART!
How.. i have no idea!
You got a lot of emotion on this page! It's amazing!

I have a quick question regarding speech bubbles.
As i'm not a comic maker myself (yet) i noticed, that every comic i see does the speech-text differently.
In your case you use speech bubbles. I once did read somewhere that the "tails" of the bubbles should point towards the speakers mouth.
But in your case they point towards the character. So do you have any advice for me with speech-bubbles?
I can't find my source now where i did read that mouth-thing, and i'm really fine with the way you do the texts!
I didn't even think about that until this page, which is a good thing because that means that the texts seem natural!

The important thing is that the bubbles are not distracting from the rest and that the text is easy to read, and it is!
I really like the quality of your comic! ;D

Story wise i feel something important happening soon.
Well of souls = undead.
cynder = undead. (at least her sad face makes me die, but as i'm still writing i must be undead too)
ghost roaster = undead.
the comics title = "undying" (close enough!)

I'm not saiing there is a connection with all that, but i wouldn't be surprised if there was!

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A7XSparx In reply to AntonSta [2013-12-31 17:24:45 +0000 UTC]

OMG THANK YOU!!!! 8D Yeeep, I have to say that as much as I love DRAWING comics, I rarely follow them. I only read a few pages of ZR and really didn't keep up after a while, and other comics I've only skimmed and lost track of them after a while xDDD

But wow,Β that's AWESOME.Β I wasn't sure just how much I should describe each character, since it's aimed mostly towards the fans of the games, but I'm SO GLAD that someone like you who hasn't even touched Skylanders was still able to follow the story and not be utterly confused XD I plan to tell their stories more as the comic goes on.

Eeeee! Well, I never knew speech bubbles HAD to be pointed directly towards the mouth. Sometimes it can be difficult drawing the tail pointing towards the mouth, especially if the face is forward and the speech bubble is at the top of the panel. I think you can get away with just having the tail pointed towards the character with their mouth open, that way people can still tell who's talking and saying what.

The coloring of the speech bubbles is based on each character's element--Spyro, Sparx and Pop Fizz are Magic so they have a light purple; Cynder, Hex and Ghost Roaster are Undead so they have gray, and Whirlwind is Air so her speech is sky blue.

...ehehehe, I'm glad you picked up on that. The comic is centered mostly around the Undead and for many reason too, but I think that'll be further explained as the story goes on >:3 all in all, Thank you SO much!!!

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serpenna [2013-12-16 19:26:56 +0000 UTC]

death for a hero thats what

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RadSpyro [2013-12-10 22:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Another brilliant page

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A7XSparx In reply to RadSpyro [2013-12-15 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU

and omfg your adorable icon *glomps* why u do this to me D:

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RadSpyro In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-22 00:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you (and sorries) >:

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confiscatedretina [2013-12-10 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh, I love your backstory stuff with Cynder, and the way she and Hex are interacting is pretty close to my own headcanon for them.

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A7XSparx In reply to confiscatedretina [2013-12-15 16:48:40 +0000 UTC]

I always thought of Hex being a mother figure to Cynder o3o they recently released another Skylanders novel with both Cynder and Hex in it. I'm REALLY interested in that one

AND THANKS!

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confiscatedretina In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 19:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Really?! Ooooooh! I'm guessing it's Kindle only?

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A7XSparx In reply to confiscatedretina [2013-12-15 21:22:19 +0000 UTC]

Nope, it's an actual book I haven't seen it for myself though, just the cover on Amazon

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confiscatedretina In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-16 18:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Is that the one where Cynder is the title character? Because I am so getting it when I see it. XD

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A7XSparx In reply to confiscatedretina [2013-12-31 17:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup it is XD

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Cyndergirl211 [2013-12-10 16:06:22 +0000 UTC]

I love this comic <3

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A7XSparx In reply to Cyndergirl211 [2013-12-15 16:47:46 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOUUUUUU

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Cyndergirl211 In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 17:53:46 +0000 UTC]

NPPPPPPPPPPPPPP XD

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Insaneus [2013-12-10 12:24:53 +0000 UTC]

o my god I love how you draw Sparx! o0o Β 

This comic is awesome! Β 

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A7XSparx In reply to Insaneus [2013-12-15 16:47:37 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SO MACH

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Insaneus In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-16 10:52:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!~ Β 

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spyroatwarfang [2013-12-10 10:15:47 +0000 UTC]

LOVE DAT 3rd PANEL!!!


OMG whenever I see the title SUD I keep thinking of soap XD

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A7XSparx In reply to spyroatwarfang [2013-12-15 16:49:38 +0000 UTC]

It's a rather SUDsy comic if you ask me >u>

AND THANK YOU!!!!!! >;U *foams from the mouth*

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Star6176 [2013-12-10 00:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww!Β  Shroom boom looks cute in your style! And poor cynder.Β 

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sonicboom8710 [2013-12-10 00:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Ooh! Whirlwinds gonna get it ON!!

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A7XSparx In reply to sonicboom8710 [2013-12-15 16:46:21 +0000 UTC]

QUICK WE NEED TO FIND THE COLORFUL DISCO BALL OF FURY!

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sonicboom8710 In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 17:25:48 +0000 UTC]

YERSH!!! Let us go!
UP UP AND AWWAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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CrossDevice [2013-12-09 23:36:58 +0000 UTC]

Seen? This is why you always have tug ships

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A7XSparx In reply to CrossDevice [2013-12-15 16:47:26 +0000 UTC]

That sounds painful o3o

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CrossDevice In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 18:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Only if you try to use your body as an anchor : D

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A7XSparx In reply to CrossDevice [2013-12-15 18:53:13 +0000 UTC]

That could work, but I would need a grappling hook, a penguin and a LOAD of hot glue.

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CrossDevice In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 19:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Don't forget 2.4Β Β BritishΒ Β China men

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PteraDragon [2013-12-09 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]

DONUT STEEL! YES

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A7XSparx In reply to PteraDragon [2013-12-15 16:45:57 +0000 UTC]

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

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PteraDragon In reply to A7XSparx [2013-12-15 17:38:24 +0000 UTC]

XP

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Pieces-Mod [2013-12-09 22:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh yiss
We got epicness in the house toniiiiiight

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RPCatgirl56 [2013-12-09 21:51:55 +0000 UTC]

WOO! Cant wait to see what'll happen next! X3

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A7XSparx In reply to RPCatgirl56 [2013-12-15 16:50:09 +0000 UTC]

*is currently in the process of uploading the next page*

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EvArts [2013-12-09 21:38:58 +0000 UTC]

COOOOOOOL!!!!!

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