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Achiru-et-al — RAVEN I. I. 17-18
Published: 2006-09-07 06:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 8098; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 0
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I really don't like how this page turned out composition-wise, but MOVING ON.
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That's one of the meanings. Infertility is another meaning of sterile.
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Ah. A mix fantasy-creature is like a zorse, huh? X) A horse crossed with a zebra. They can exist, but not pro-create. Poor things.
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Haha, that's funny, I particularly like this page's composition! I saw it and I was like, Oh, I like the way this one was layed out. >_<
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I have to agree, I really love this layout. It's unique!
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*winces* Owww... I hurt my neck trying to look at the adorable sleeping Zy. Note to self: Do NOT try to look at pages that are upside-down, right-side up. >.<
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hum. the story is very intriguing so far! 
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Thank you!
-achiru-
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you're welcome!
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Zy looks so cute laying there all unconsciousness-like.
Lucky's eyes seem to waver between green and extremely light blue to me. Probably just because it's on a computer screen though.
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And the yellow-tinted light in the room.
-achiru-
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Hey. Why can't mixes bare children?
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Because... oh well, Ari can spoil you.
Ari: The chromosome pairs don't match up completely. Its like breeding a horse and a donkey.
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But mules can still breed o.o *shot by achiru* okay i'll just wait for the next pages <<
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Great work as always!
Your coloring style is unique, and soft looking. Very appealing to the eye.
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Wonderful coloring job!
You've been updating Raven frequently in these months, but good luck on your schoolwork and I hope to read more! ^-^
I've also noticed the blond on Zy's hair for awhile. Is it a part of the story or is it a new style for him?
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Its the ugly bandage of DOOM.
-achiru-
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Ah! sorry, I took it as his hair >< I wasn't looking closely enough, gomen
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That's okay, you're not the only one. It just looks UGLY. It will be taken off soon, so no worries.
-achiru-
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Wow, that happens with all hybrid elves? I wonder how it must feel to be born like that. I would normally ask something like, "hey, how'd Fleance come then??" but i'm guessing it'll eventually be revealed, ne?
Ooh, I didn't know Lucky had green eyes. -just noticed- And its page 20 already? Congratsss. Those blankets look like they'd be soft.. And pretty. *o*
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All hybrids regardless. Like Mermyd and Sentyr or something.
Lucky's eyes are blue.
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Wow, really? I did not know that. I know what hybrids are, I just don't.. Know all that much about them.
Ahaha. Hey, I just noticed that both there are y's near the end of Mermyds and Sentyrs. I almost said Veyprs too but they don't have the "y" near the end of their names so I didn't think it counted. At least I make some sort of observations, right?
Is it just me, or do you have some crazy good knowledge of genetics? Seems so.
Agh. -smacks head- I always thought his eyes were blue but for some reason they looked green there. My bad.
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That's okay. The lighting is yellow so everything looks greener.
Hybrids are any mix of races... or cross-breeds.
I only know up to high school biology so far. I'll need to study more to play Arieka's character though.
-achiru-
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^^ Lovely colors so smooth and light, and I must admit the story has evolve
a lot, I remember the first ones you made, they were good but somehow
you manage to make them even better, my congrats to you.
Ne I also notice that Zy got a White/Blond Stipe on the hair on the last few pages,
Is it a high light or is a new color for Zy's hair?
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Oh... I guess that's what that looks like. Its actually just the ugly bandage of DOOM. His hair will grow back eventually.
-achiru-
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XD;;; it was a bandage all this time, oh boy sorry my mistake.
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That's okay, you're not the only one. It just looks UGLY. It will be taken off soon, so no worries.
-achiru-
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