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hair and make up me
Necklace by me
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variouslyvaried [2009-04-06 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Its a very nice shot of a pretty young lady. The outfit and lighting look great and head position and hair are certainly working. The only problem I have with the pic over it is washed way to much out. But when I look at it i know its an easily fixable wash out because your camera seems to be a nice one. Go into photoshop and play with the levels. I certainly would like to see it after it has been darkend. I scored as follows:

Vision 3: The shot doesn't look like you had planed out the location. (house in bg) But the subject is perfectly put.

Originality 3: Standard Portrait procedure.

Technique 4 : Depth of field is nice, but can be more severe. Gaussian blur the BG for that effect.

Impact 3 : See Originality.*

I crit = Please Return the favor. Thanks

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aderial In reply to variouslyvaried [2009-04-06 02:05:35 +0000 UTC]

well as the model what can i do to make this better?

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variouslyvaried In reply to aderial [2009-04-06 02:16:03 +0000 UTC]

first off, stunning I don't think as the model you did anything wrong at all. Just check through the lens once or twice more and make sure the backgrounds are complimenting you. Actually if you were timing the shots thats really hard. If you had friend hit the button just tell them to make sure the bg is simple as not to draw attention away from your pretty face

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aderial In reply to variouslyvaried [2009-04-06 02:26:40 +0000 UTC]

well i was using a professional photographer, i thought that she was paying attention to those things, i didn't even get to see the pics until they were edited

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jay21317 [2009-04-23 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]

there is something about this picture profound beauty i see here and more that there just isn't the right words in the English language to describe the beauty i see i love your eyes smoldering depths to a beautiful soul i see

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aderial In reply to jay21317 [2009-04-23 04:19:57 +0000 UTC]

why thank youyou have blown me away

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jay21317 In reply to aderial [2009-04-23 04:26:01 +0000 UTC]

not my intention let me get the rocks we tie them to your feet so you dont go flying i cant wait to see more of your beautiful face

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aderial In reply to jay21317 [2009-04-23 04:33:56 +0000 UTC]

it is just rare to have someone issue such kinds words to me in such a nice way.

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jay21317 In reply to aderial [2009-04-23 04:35:51 +0000 UTC]

then everyone else mydear is a blind bat and needs to open there eyes to the beauty of the world and its greatest treasures and creatures

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aderial In reply to jay21317 [2009-04-23 04:49:04 +0000 UTC]

well thank you, i am having someone right now whom i love dearly show me all these things and more

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jay21317 In reply to aderial [2009-04-23 04:51:32 +0000 UTC]

them im happy for you i hope you see the beauty the world has to offer yours and others

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aderial In reply to jay21317 [2009-04-23 05:02:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah he is truly a blessing in my life, i am as blessed to have him in my life as i am blessed to be in his

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jay21317 In reply to aderial [2009-04-23 05:05:14 +0000 UTC]

that is good to hear

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fumblequill [2009-01-14 13:11:04 +0000 UTC]

My favorite of this series.

It's like you continue to show new facets.
What a gem you are.

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-01-14 15:33:15 +0000 UTC]

awwww you make me feel so special

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fumblequill In reply to aderial [2009-01-14 19:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Good, because, you are.

Btw, unless I'm misstaken that dress is the same as in [link] - it was the first picture I saw of you.

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-01-14 21:41:36 +0000 UTC]

you are correct that is in fact the same dress

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fumblequill In reply to aderial [2009-01-14 22:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Did I mention that you look fabulous in it?

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-01-15 00:10:55 +0000 UTC]

no but thank you very much, and if you look hard enough you can see i also used another outfit from the new stuff before as well

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fumblequill In reply to aderial [2009-01-15 07:54:30 +0000 UTC]

The green one?
Took me a while to remember, I think it was the black sash(?) that threw me off.

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-01-19 19:19:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah i mght have taken the pics down but it was from a shoot a while ago and i was playing with my glasses

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fumblequill In reply to aderial [2009-01-20 11:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Not wanting to sound greedy but .. in a way maybe I am ..
Do you have any more shoots planned soon?

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-01-30 20:25:00 +0000 UTC]

oh yes i am waiting for the edits right now as a matter of fact but i can gve you a taste of whats to come

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fumblequill In reply to aderial [2009-01-31 13:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Great.
I'm looking forward to it.

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aderial In reply to fumblequill [2009-02-02 21:08:56 +0000 UTC]

i just have to go get it out of te car, i have the unedited work and even that is WOW!

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Rodent26 [2009-01-14 03:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Love this look hon. Outstanding!

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aderial In reply to Rodent26 [2009-01-14 15:32:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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dang7997 [2009-01-13 22:12:02 +0000 UTC]

stunning

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aderial In reply to dang7997 [2009-01-13 22:29:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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