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AlessandraImperio [2017-06-23 14:36:57 +0000 UTC]

I like very mush this sketchy style!!

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PolymerWantACracker [2017-04-26 03:00:10 +0000 UTC]

Hello, brought me here! Hope I can give you worthwhile advice from one artist to another - I'm in a cafe sipping coffee right now, so this piece will fit great with my current mood, hehe.

Anyway, I can tell instantly when looking at this that you've got a solid cartoony artistic style going. The character is clearly stylized while still being relatable, and something about the way you're shading everything - I guess that there isn't much diversity of light levels on any given layer, so the layers clearly look separated from one another - gives this drawing a distinct and nice feeling, almost like it's a scene from a pop-up book or a certain kind of modern cartoon.

I would suggest moving away from cross-hatching when drawing digitally unless you're going for a highly simplified, comic-book look - when it's combined with softer shading as you're using here, it just has the result of looking messy. Your anatomy is mostly there, but the girl's right arm is a little too short and neither of her arms is really expanding as it gets closer to the camera, as they should per the principle of foreshortening. I also like the background in general, especially your decision to blur the cup because it's out-of-focus, but I would suggest getting more practice with one-point and two-point perspective: the boards of the table are expanding as they're getting farther from the camera, when it should be the opposite.

What I like above anything else about this drawing, though, is the feeling of warmth exuded by the lighter colors on the left (from her side) part of her hair - especially how even the outlines on the left part of her body are better. Good luck and keep improving!

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Indra1408 [2017-04-26 02:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Hello again ado saw this and tought I would give a lil return feedback

First off the hands your getting a lot better at them so congrats. When I first saw this piece I just knew it was yours the smart young female charector designed in that unique vibrate style you have did a good jod with the coffee shope feel as the colors fit for that sort of establishment the toned green does nicely for the wall color tough it does make one think of starbucks.

Another thing you did teally well here is the lighting it looks just like she is sitting next to a window since I live in a rainy area I like to thing that the clouds have just parted the sun glistening on the wet ground outside while the girl toughtfully sips her latte well for me it would be a smoothy or tea but she looks like a coffee drinker .

The way you sat the other mug across from her makes it feel like one is sitting right across and we are inside the drawing which is a wonderful effect. I will also mention that you once again did a great job with the outfit I am very found of hats never go outside without my fadoria so it might be bias to say that the girl looks good with head whare.

So the two flaws I can see are one the handle of the cup is not entirely visible and melts into the hand some not enough to trash this wonderful piece but just something to try not overlook in the future. Two something about the eay the head sits seems just slighly off this really could just be me so dont worry about it cant tell you my teouble with heads somehow they are nearly always to rounded and such but is something you get better at the more you draw.

So yeah great piece with many awsome elaments holding it together like a well sewed tapestry.

Keep up the great work.

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KiyomuMitsue [2017-04-26 02:27:43 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a relatively simple picture, this looks like this belongs in some sort of artistic commercial about city life and the few pleasantries that can be within it. It looks like she's just enjoying a nice cuppa Joe. While not perfect, not too sharp, it still manages to give you a relaxing atmosphere. Good job!

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AkiaWalker [2017-04-25 14:15:40 +0000 UTC]

What a cutie! I love the warm colors. c:

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Vibanib [2017-04-25 13:44:52 +0000 UTC]

You may not have gotten the effect that you wanted, but it's still a nice picture! You have good color combinations, a nice and simple light source, and I especially like the steam effect the most. If you're looking for minor details, I think that the cup closest to us could be a little bigger, but overall the composition is good ò v ó )b

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Realmetshow [2017-04-25 13:05:36 +0000 UTC]

The coloring is amazing!
The anatomy is amazing as well!

But it feels like the head isn't really connected to the body, 

But other than that it's amazing! I've fell in love with this! 

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AhsumSauce [2017-04-25 12:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww, she's cute!

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BriAnimations [2017-04-25 11:33:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't know much about your Character but looks nice, and the steam on the coffee is really nice, XD that would of then something I would either struggle with or forget to add. Lovely attention to detail. I believe it turn out nicely ^-^

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Smilingchesire [2017-04-24 13:46:33 +0000 UTC]

I love it!! Catherine looks so pretty with that casual look!!

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