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Published: 2013-04-21 01:48:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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The sister of Tamir, little chibi in my gallery, with all here expressions. Also for the game.Related content
Comments: 7
Hello
I've been through your gallery and I like your unique character designs and concepts. But I must say this one in particular has some bodily disproportions. I find that the arms and torso are too elongated and the head too
normal-sized and don't quite balance well with the lower half of the body and thus does not make the character look "chibi".
"Chibi",also called "super deformed" or "SD", normally calls for a cutesy style of an overly large head and smaller body. Also the stature of a "chibi" character form is supposed to appear incredibly short. Unlike the style that this character is currently displayed in.
Don't get me wrong. I'm not hating on you or anything. I like your overall style and unique designs but drawing your characters in a cuter, less detailed, and/or possibly shorter style than you would normally does not classify it "chibi".
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^^ Is this comment meant for Tamir and not his sister, Allison?
If so then fair comment though that is what I consider my chibi style. I think it's a fairly lose defination in of itself seeing as it translates to super deformed with no clear cut example of how to do so. If the character is a scaled down version of what it normally would be, I consider it "chibi" but, like you said, it could use some work if the overall balance is lost.
If not and this comment is directed at this peice, Allison is not in chibi form. This is a full sized drawing. If it looks disproportionate though please do tell me where!
You weren't offensive in the least :> and thank you for looking through my gallery!
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ohhhhhhhhh woops 
okay then. ahahaha that..explains that then. Yes my comment was for this drawing.
I'm sorry for not understanding the description properly.
But I DID mention some things were disproportionate like her torso and arms are too elongated while her legs don't seem to be long enough. Her left shoulder looks a little strange in that it seems to be sunk in before it reaches arm, but that's an easy fix. Her chin is a bit too far to her right...annnd I think that's all I got for ya.
Once again sorry for the misunderstanding...so embarrassed about that. Just let me know if the rest helps. XP
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Oh no it's okay! Those were very helpful critiques ^^ I was just unclear about who it was for!
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okay cool! No problem then. ^^
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