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AislinSwann — Frey And Takeshi - Page 1 (yaoi one shot)
Published: 2012-03-22 16:48:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 3571; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 342
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This manga is NOT drawn in the japanese reading direction, read it from LEFT to RIGHT**
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ONE SHOT yaoi we made on request of
they asked us to make a story of 10-20 pages ... we deeply hope you'll enjoy the story ...
we really did work hard on it though (Like REALLY hard)
feel free to add a comment or feedback, and fave
hugs,
Kyo&Aislin
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What program did you use. Manga Studio? How do you use that? I have it and I really want to start on my manga called Oni No Sekai (its not Yaoi, so if you're not interested don't read the rest of this 
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well honestly, I didn't use manga studio, or any other digital tools ... I dod have a tablet, but let's say I hate to use it
no all I used was plain paper, a pencil, a normal black marker (you can also use a pen for the outlines, like the japanese do, but I was affraid to spill some drops), a pot of indian or chinese ink, and a small thin brush for the big surfaces ... and that's it ....
those are all the tools I used
(no but I did use paint to add the big cross on my cover and I used microsoft powerpoint to add the title, and the texts).... but that's it
and about the procedure of making a manga ... (I got it by reading bakuman), simply make a rough pre-manga, so that you already have an idea of the amounts of pages and the lay out, and then you start making the official manga (preferable on thick paper, just to make sure the ink doesn't go trough) ... make simple line-art with your pencil, then you draw the oficial lines with your marker or pen ... en finnish by coloring the big surfaces with a brush ....
the only thing I miss are grey shades to introduce some shadows... but I'll buy them ... one day ...
I hope this helped you a little (considering I totally went off-topic) lol
and also a big big big hug for the watch
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Thanks Your welcome too
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Hi, I can see all the hard work you've done, just a couple of things, I was a little confused by the thought bubbles or are they commentary? A few little bubbles from the person thinking would be nice. Also I presume English isn't your first language, the grammar is a bit off. Instead of "I'm not the only boy around here, he over there went through the same thing." Maybe, "I'm not the only boy around here. That guy must've gone through the same thing." "Frey?" Or does he know for sure this is the person? If this is the fore ground guy thinking, a couple of small bubbles from him to the thought bubble would be a good indicator. I really like the story and I realize how much work goes into this, I'm working on my first Manga, graphic book. I did publish a children's book so I know what it takes to get your pages out. Best of luck with this, cheers.
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well to help you out ofyour confusion, those (on the first page) are thought bubbles ... and they know each other .... the first page is more like a small introduction out of takeshi's point of view... and about the grammar, well I kinda like let some one else handle that ... So I directly copy-pasted it on my page ... but I also did notice some mistakes myself (too late though 
however I'm realy happy to know you apriciated my work ... and I wish you the best for your first manga .... good luck
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simply click the 'next page' link in the description below
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oh man im dumb well thanks ima read it now
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Keep up the good work! i found the continuation.
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I will rape this website for the second page if I have to...So please do continue. It intrigues me greatly.
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[link] here is the whole manga ...
just had to get on our page
have fun reading ...
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH so interestinggggggg
death note feelings, I lovedddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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yeah You're like the second one to say that to me .... hahahahahahaha XD ....
I was about to scrap that page because of that ^^
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owwww no don´t scrappppp is amazingggg T_T
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well I did keep it after all
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