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Published: 2011-07-25 07:05:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2244; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 2
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My first thing here on DA.And also my first attempt gay manga picture.
Because of that, any comments or advice are appreciated.
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looks kinda good with these hands and feet but the head of the left person seems a bit.. flat. Maybe it's the hair or whatever.
But the bodys of the two are well drawn
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Thanks, yes, I know, the left face is not really good, hope to be better next time
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Yes, it lacks the back part of the skull, (you need to draw the circle first, that's how all heads start) other than that, I loved it!
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This is well drawn, with one exception. Where the faces meet for the kiss, a bit of shading is needed to give sense of depth. Without it, both faces then seem on the same two-dimensional plane. You got it right on the hair, and where neck and arm meet.
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Thanks a lot for comment and advice. I just always overlook these "little things"
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You are most welcome. You have talent, so I hope you keep drawing and practicing.
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nice drawing.
its a good one
welcome on dA
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Thanks, thanks and thanks
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Awesome pic... and very hot! >////<
I love it
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Yeah, I know, and now I look what I wrote into the comment, my mistake 
DonΒ΄t worry, itΒ΄ll be better next time
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hehe no its not a mistake, its fine
XD What will be better? its freaking hawt <3
And youre Male too? 
But hehe thats K, Im gay myself :3
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Ok, I meant I think I wanted to write yaoi but wrote gay manga, which sounds a little weird
Yes, I am male too, and your deduction is good, I am gay as well 
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Haha well its the same thing, all good
Ahh, and I gathered that from a deviation
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The face as before mentioned though some people have a sort of longer face and narrow jaw the cheeks are almost always a bit rounder and high. Other than that win on the feet!!!
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Thanks for advice, drawing people was never easy for me (and I guess it wasnΒ΄t easy for anyone from the start
Thanks for comment
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It gets easier honey! Good Luck!
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I will say..work on the faces a bit.
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Yeah, I probably should, thanks for advice.
You mean shading of faces or faces in general?
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the shape mainly, they seem a wee bit long. faces are rounder than that, more ovular, you have them more rectangular
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Hmm, never thought of it this way. Thanks, IΒ΄ll try to make the next pic better in this.
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