MalainaKanda [2015-10-28 02:45:01 +0000 UTC]
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Everything is fine but you could have made the scar more realistic, in other words, make it look just like allen's....I can't tell because of the hair but I think you have the star upside up, it's suposed to be upside down....and also give some kind of background to give character and give Allen a little more emotion, like make him seem more happy because we all know Allen LOVES sweets and he always smiles even if most of his smiles are fake....but that's all I see that needs fixing...everything else is perfect ^w^ Nice!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Allen-Red-Walker In reply to MalainaKanda [2015-10-28 14:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Lol I agree and appreciate the critique You are actually my very first critique ever, which is super awesome (thanks so much) and I agree with the smile, I actually have multiple shots I didn't post and they were much happier, interestingly this shot was taken while I was not fully aware and it struck me as so different that I actually chose to pick it. But I do agree Allen is usually perceived as being quite happy even if he's faking it :*( and as for the scar it was like 3 am and you caught me xD I actually did 5 versions of Allen that night and the scar faded over time and it did not help that my air covered it, BUT again I super appreciate this and have definitely learned from it
MalainaKanda In reply to Allen-Red-Walker [2015-10-28 15:05:41 +0000 UTC]
Lol I'm glad to know I made you happy ^w^
Allen-Red-Walker In reply to MalainaKanda [2015-10-29 20:23:40 +0000 UTC]
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izzym19 [2015-12-10 02:07:07 +0000 UTC]
it is cool
Allen-Red-Walker In reply to izzym19 [2015-12-14 01:03:43 +0000 UTC]
Aw thanks!
izzym19 In reply to Allen-Red-Walker [2015-12-14 04:02:15 +0000 UTC]
no problem