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killersfromthedead [2019-02-16 17:11:27 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww that was so sweet and inspirational
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slushpuppycool [2015-11-18 02:37:31 +0000 UTC]
This is so true especially the part about wearing the rainbow jewelry and pins, hoping someone will notice.I always do that. : )
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vampeve-97 [2013-04-01 00:59:14 +0000 UTC]
dyke pride!!!!! WOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PhoenixPledge [2012-12-02 19:54:02 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love this. Very touching, very true.
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Kelsey427 [2012-05-20 20:44:56 +0000 UTC]
This is really great.
Didn't think I'd ever find someone who saw dyke as more than a manly lesbian who only wears red plaid, and faded baggy jeans, and driving a pickup.
People are so damn stereotypical.
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Love-Undefined [2011-11-06 20:42:18 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. Stay proud, sister.
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ViolenceIsAnEnergy [2010-07-12 02:44:44 +0000 UTC]
I don't care how late I am, but this is amazing. I love reading through it, and just hearig true-er words never... written, yeah, thats the right word.
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Spiro-Fly [2009-12-29 00:04:01 +0000 UTC]
That was beautiful.
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gummibat [2009-06-12 02:55:40 +0000 UTC]
The journal and deleted browsing history were straight out of my mouth. When my parent's didn't know i was gay I didn't think it would be good for them to see me on gay youth sites... ha ha
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Dark-Neko1225 [2009-06-08 01:43:11 +0000 UTC]
ooo, very nice. I love it. definitely a dyke's feelings, lol. LMAO, i delete my internet history. My parents still think i'm an innocent, straight little angel, not the only little dyke in the history of our family. Pfht, yeah right. lol. I really, really love this poem, it flows really well and your wording is pretty cool, it makes the whole thing come together. Definitely a favorite for me.
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dolphin64575 [2009-02-12 23:00:45 +0000 UTC]
fantastic. truly wonderful. I absolutely adore the line about falling in love with a person, not a gender.
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PoisonousBlood [2008-08-22 18:06:45 +0000 UTC]
I think its beautiful.
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tyrannasaurusdex [2008-04-25 21:29:39 +0000 UTC]
I don't have critique either, but damn are you good at expressing this sorta stuff with absolute honesty, like
"wearing rainbow jewelery and protest pins hoping someone will notice"
that line.
I like it alot.
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alternativepixie In reply to tyrannasaurusdex [2008-04-26 12:31:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. It is funny, I wrote this poem so long ago but it continues to get comments in a way I never expected nor anticipated. I appreciate it so.
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alternativepixie In reply to 0-Hermit-0 [2007-12-03 01:09:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much. That was certainly what I was going for.
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aisforalisha [2007-07-14 17:46:55 +0000 UTC]
'Dyke is love
Dyke is
The spiral notebook under your mattress that weeps and moans and laughs
and the deleted internet history
and the pride you feel even as you hide
Dyke is marching at Pride'
i love the flow at the end of that.
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alternativepixie In reply to zweiPelzeulen [2007-03-18 07:21:51 +0000 UTC]
The deleted internet history is a major thing... so many do it without thinking about it. Did you delete the history?
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zweiPelzeulen In reply to alternativepixie [2007-03-18 16:38:50 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yeah I did delete it. But I definitely think about it beforehand. With "dyke", I'm not necessarily ashamed about the gay implications, I just have a fear in the back of my mind that my mom will check the history and then think I'm some kind of sex-fiend looking for porn.
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alternativepixie In reply to zweiPelzeulen [2007-03-18 17:06:18 +0000 UTC]
When I would delete the history, I was just afraid of my parents asking me any questions at all about it. I wasn't quite as worried about them thinking I was a sex-fiend XD
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alternativepixie In reply to zweiPelzeulen [2007-03-19 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Hah, my dad once said: "I think you should stick with girls for a while. That way you won't get pregnant."
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scrattletrap [2007-03-09 12:21:45 +0000 UTC]
I like the way this flows and it holds so many truths.
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librarian-of-hell [2006-10-12 13:56:30 +0000 UTC]
Sooooo sweet. Absolutely irregular, more like a monologue in form and the verse parts of POD's Youth of the Nation in mood. I like it very much, because it has much connection to my personal route to understanding.
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thesofa [2006-02-26 19:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Mum: Did you know Lauren wrote a poem for her teacher?
Me: ... what?! How did you know that?
Haha, I remember that conversation. It was so strange and weird that my mum knew about that. Look, you're famous.
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alternativepixie In reply to thesofa [2006-02-26 20:04:18 +0000 UTC]
T'wasn't FOR my teacher. Harrumph. Assignment, kids.
Schlenky: "OH! That was YOU!"
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thesofa In reply to alternativepixie [2006-02-26 21:20:41 +0000 UTC]
I know that it wasn't for your teacher, but my mum thought it was. And either way, the conversation was humorous.
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