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AlwaysRainCheck โ€” Ever After
Published: 2016-07-20 16:29:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1425; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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Description Crumbs
from a slice
of life
left behind
to remember,
eaten up
by birds
of the past.

This way
I lost
one path,
found a thousand
white trees,
a woman asleep
pale as the moon,
surrounded
by stale tears.

In dreams
she waits;
in reality
I wonder:
can I save her
does she want
my love
still?
I have no horse
I have no reign.
Nothing to give
but a kiss
and the rotting castle
of my heart.

Long shadows
bruise the ground,
as I let fear
hold my hope.
Around us
poisonous roses
bloom inviting -
what kind of curse
is to believe
and lose,
what kind of evil
will promise
and steal.

The sad wolf
of loneliness
howls
through skin and bones,
I shiver
clasping blood red
upon my shoulders -
I understand
what the winds
are screaming:
these woods
wonโ€™t let us both dream,
itโ€™s the eerie comfort
of one eternal night
or the key
to something uncertain
and frail.

When my name
trembles close
to her lips,
crystal shards
pierce the sun
back to life.
Suddenly
her eyes of gold,
sweet homes,
are mine again -
and so
I pray
forgive me
princess,
if once upon a time
I couldn't find the courage
to let you go.
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Comments: 22

NotenSMSK [2017-04-20 15:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my - this was quite a lovely work! I normally have a hard time with pieces with short lines, and they seem disconnected, but this was well written. I enjoyed reading it - it had some wonderful expressions along its flow, and the story told was touching and breathtaking. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Candless [2016-09-09 17:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I faved this like three times...I was trying to get the right category!

I love this so much. First, I'm a fairytale freak, so all the folklore in it sends my heart spinning...but the way you weaved the tales together in such delicate lines and vivid images--into a story all your own--makes it so much better. That, and this line, which breaks my heart:

Around us
poisonous roses
bloom inviting -
what kind of curse
is to believe
and lose,
what kind of evil
will promiseย 
and steal.

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to Candless [2016-09-12 15:51:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm not gonna complain!

Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm utterly honored to hear you liked this so much! And I'm also truly delighted to know you are a fellow fairytale freak, I feel like they are an underrated source of depth and dreams.

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Candless In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-09-12 15:52:18 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't agree more.

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LaurenIpsome [2016-08-09 19:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Powerful and moving piece, my friend. "There's no place like home," if you can find one...

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to LaurenIpsome [2016-08-11 16:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! This one still feels weird to me somehow...it came from a place of longing I want to find again.

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LaurenIpsome In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-08-11 18:17:01 +0000 UTC]

Mm... Longing and I are old, old friends. Not to sound cliche', but we do ache for that "fairy tale" ending, only to find we're quatsequal (sp?), the snake eating its own tail.

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LuckySpirit14 [2016-08-02 02:31:57 +0000 UTC]

ย  there are no words....just.....ย ย ย ย ย 

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to LuckySpirit14 [2016-08-02 22:42:56 +0000 UTC]

When I see that emoticon I know I did a good job!ย ย ย ย Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked this!ย 

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LuckySpirit14 In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-08-03 22:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol Yes! For sure!!
You are most welcome!, I LOVED it! ย 

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robi83 [2016-07-25 09:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Molto bella, hai dato il meglio di te anche in questa occasione. Brava Isabellaย  ย 

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to robi83 [2016-07-27 14:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Grazie mille, Roberto!

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robi83 In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-07-27 21:01:56 +0000 UTC]

โ˜บ๐Ÿ‘

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Hades-Flower [2016-07-22 04:44:53 +0000 UTC]

An enchanting tale, and an enjoyable read. I was taken to a faraway place, as well as into my own heart. Beautiful!ย 

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to Hades-Flower [2016-07-23 01:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ever so much for your kind words! I'm really glad to know you liked this odd fairytale. ย 

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Hades-Flower In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-07-25 04:15:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! This is such a lovely poem, and I can totally relate to the "woman asleep." A fantastic story.

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Shadster221 [2016-07-21 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing reading it out loud and you can feel every emotion and picture all of the settings that it pulls you into making this fantasy seem like a reality

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to Shadster221 [2016-07-23 01:28:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm so happy to know you read it out loud, and even more so that you enjoyed the story! Thank you for your wonderful comment! ย 

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Shadster221 In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-07-23 03:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh your welcome i love works of literature like this keep up the good work you have a very beautiful way with words its inspiring really ๐Ÿ‘

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SueJO [2016-07-20 23:27:24 +0000 UTC]

The depth of this touches me deeply.

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AlwaysRainCheck In reply to SueJO [2016-07-23 01:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Sue! I'm really happy you liked this!ย ย ย ย ย 

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SueJO In reply to AlwaysRainCheck [2016-07-25 04:03:20 +0000 UTC]

ย 

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