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Description darn it the scanner has eaten the soft pink and yellow colours !!

BELATED MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY HOLIDAYS !!

this piece is for ~Rebe-chan-vk 's WISHLIST in `Tajii-chan 's Secret Santa Event. It was ended in Dec. 25, 2011 but since a tragic happening happened to me and my family (let's not talk about it ) and it's only 2 days ago since my cousin lent me his art tool, my SS piece is delayed.

Sorry ~Rebe-chan-vk if I am late. Please forgive me, I don't know what to do. . .


The characters in the drawing [from the left]:

Chiaki Yoshino
~Rebe-chan-vk herself
Onodera Ritsu
Kisa Shouta


Sorry if the drawing is like that !! Aside from the darned scanner, it's been months since I last took hold of pencil for drawing because I was using it more to write the thesis for school requirement.

Also, I rushed the piece ei. Three hours straight. No breaks.


I really need to do a final drawing before 2011 ends....

So there !




Critique and COMMENT if you feel like it ! Make me feel happy.

Til next time !!



Lovelots,
=ALzRitH
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Comments: 23

f1utterby3 [2012-04-06 22:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Wow, the colors in this piece are absolutely fantastic. I love how you've combined a range of bright blues, oranges, yellows, and greens together, they compliment each other very well.
You've also put an incredibly amount of detail into this. The folds in the clothing is exquisite, and even the detail on the wallpaper is great!
Moving on from the awesome colors and vibe of the picture, there are a couple things that stand out to me. I really love the woman's expression and her pose. However the guys all have the same expression and are just kind of staring out into the distance, which makes them a little bit detached from everything else. Also, I'm not really sure what the deal is with the teddy bear, but it just strikes me as a bit out of place. Lastly, I don't know if the scanner bleached it out or not, but the chair area seems to be distinctly whiter than the rest.

As for the stars....
I really loved the technique that you used to combine and blend colors, which really made the whole image special and vibrant. This helped make an impact, but as I said before, the fact that all the guys are just staring away detracted for me. Everything else was lovely though, awesome work!

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aLzRitH In reply to f1utterby3 [2012-04-07 05:11:24 +0000 UTC]

awh thank you so much for the critique !! I can now relate to those things you've pointed out. And yeah, I don't deny the distracting expressions of the boys. And the bear is supposed to be a design on the purple-haired guy's clothe. but.... hahah... I failed to enhance the effect.

And no. The chair has a colour. It's in pale blends of ochre and pink [darker tone of the colour of the girl's pants]. And yeah, it was bleached. That's why I wished I knew how to edit the colours using Photoshop.


Again, thank you so much for the critique !

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Kinalara-Sohru [2012-04-06 06:33:56 +0000 UTC]

This is very nice!! I like the relaxed poses and the colors!!

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aLzRitH In reply to Kinalara-Sohru [2012-04-06 09:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Awh thank you so much !!

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lilloulou [2012-04-05 23:05:12 +0000 UTC]

This looks great and it's so colorful even if your scanner has eaten the pink and yellow

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aLzRitH In reply to lilloulou [2012-04-06 09:14:18 +0000 UTC]

You think so ??

awh thank you lovely...

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Jenniej92 [2012-02-12 16:41:40 +0000 UTC]

brilliant my dear!
you are really getting a grip at making pictures interersting to look at!

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aLzRitH In reply to Jenniej92 [2012-02-16 11:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you so much lovely !

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EvilDoctorHobbit [2012-01-11 15:27:00 +0000 UTC]

The colors!!

Your works are always so colorful and beautiful. Once again, I love all the detail- and the outfits are just spectacular.

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aLzRitH In reply to EvilDoctorHobbit [2012-01-19 04:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Awh thank you so much you like it !!

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danexg [2012-01-03 10:13:23 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah! those one of a kind scanners
Its great! the picture is still soft looking
you're still smart at using those crazy patterns again at a simple drawing like this on

Happy new year too!

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aLzRitH In reply to danexg [2012-01-05 13:16:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah that scanner... oh well, the damage is done.


Thanks Dani !! I'm wishing you the same, too !

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danexg In reply to aLzRitH [2012-01-09 10:17:31 +0000 UTC]

good!
no problem

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Yasny-chan [2011-12-31 13:46:59 +0000 UTC]

super gorgeous!!

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aLzRitH In reply to Yasny-chan [2012-01-05 13:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Awh thanks Yasny !

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Tajii-chan [2011-12-31 06:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Such a sweet artwork!

I absolutely love the colors, and the character poses are all done so well!

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aLzRitH In reply to Tajii-chan [2012-01-05 13:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Awh thanks Tajii !

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jamisamson [2011-12-30 21:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

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aLzRitH In reply to jamisamson [2012-01-05 13:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Awh it's very belated now... but thank you for greeting me Ate !! Happy Holidays ! (if there's still any !)

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jamisamson In reply to aLzRitH [2012-01-31 04:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Maligayang bati muli

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PoOfyPink [2011-12-29 08:51:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ..

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aLzRitH In reply to PoOfyPink [2012-01-05 13:11:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks !!

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PoOfyPink In reply to aLzRitH [2012-01-07 18:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Your Very Welcome ..

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