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Business mode on. Long legs + airbending running + firebending thrust = MAX GROUND SPEEEEEEEEEED
I hope it's clear, she's angling the ground under her foot for a faster start/ensuring no loss of traction like runners have at the start of races.
I think this is the most complex page yet. Kept on finding thing after thing that I hadn't noticed needed to be done. Was crazy to finish, but aside from the first panel being a little dark (making it harder to read when not zoomed in fully), I'm really happy with how it came out.
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Thos two pages are fantastic. So epic. You really are a great artist
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Whoaaaa.... Is that GREEN FIRE I see??!?!?! Epic XD
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It's, uh... Unintentional. I'm color blind. Maybe I should fix the color...
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Really?? 
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It looks like energy bending!
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They look like Zealot Psi Blades from Starcraft.
Β : "My Life for Ai....uh... Avatar!"
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This is a fantastic comic, keep up the good work and update soon.
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Awesome!!!! I go away for a little while and all of a sudden I get four pages?! So happy! 
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Aah, this comic is so beautiful and wonderful~
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lol Ming's face is like "what the what?".Β I love this.Β
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Pretty sure Ming just died,..... momentarily. Β
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Avatar State YIP YIP XD
I am seriously loving this story!
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(Fourth Panel) Ming: What just happened?
This page is beautiful You can feel the energy just bounce of the page, and that last panel 
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Are you going to include the origins of the Kyoshi Warriors and her fight with Chin?
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I've been reading this series from start to finish, and I'd like to say that it's amazing! Keep up the good work XD
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This is SOOO GOOD...can't wait to read more.
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Your fire is a bit too yellow/whitish. I actually didn't realize it was fire until I read the description.
But other than that THIS IS AWESOME!
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Hmm... Thanks for bringing this up. I'm color blind, so I didn't notice. Fire is yellow and white as it gets hotter, but I didn't think it would be unrecognizable as it is without the orange and red - I guess it should have turned more those colors as it cooled in the distance. I'll keep this in mind for future pages, thanks!
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Just read all of them. They're really good!
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OH MY GOD!!!!! great! Im in love with this...
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That's a cool angle for the last panel there. I'm excited to see where this is going. Should be pretty good.
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I keep saying your pages are awesome and then I don't know what to say because I feel like they just keep getting better! 
I am also very impressed with how you managed to keep all the angles so consistent throughout this.
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You're really talented, this is amazing!
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I kind of feel bad for Chin's Army, Kyoshi is about to bring down her pimp hand on them
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Is the wall behind Ming (crap, that's her name right...) the city wall, or one Kyoshi put up?
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The city wall. Kyoshi didn't put up a wall, she broke apart the boulder that was flung at them, the halves of which are now lodged in the wall and the wall's opening. Sorry that wasn't clear!
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To me, this is a 'if you go back and re-read afterwards' event. panel 1 of page 29 clearly shows two halves flying around them. (far left and right). In panel 4 above (page 30) I love how you show the after effect. angles to me looks accurate from panel 1 of page 29. When I write, the hardest thing for me is to write the after effect -- correctly. Wonderful job. OMG the speed factor is awesome. reminds me of Azula when she hand fire flies.
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