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Description Taken Summer 2009.


-do you think i made the white & blue too bright?
-to you think the vignette (black around the corners) adds to or takes away from the photo? and why?
-do you think the photo is "blurry", and if so is this a good or a bad thing?
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anarae22 In reply to ??? [2009-11-19 07:29:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback(:

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taiyou-tsuki-hoshi [2009-11-18 04:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Already said this...but here it is with an icon!



This is beautiful. I absolutely love the colors. It's quite reminiscent of a style I go for..LoL maybe that's why I like it.

Anyway, to be honest I just love color in general. The fact that this image is so rich is what makes this piece work out so well.

The black edges put a sense of focus on the image. Seeing as the landscape is fairly consistent all the way through, the edges help one to focus on the center and catch the color detail.

The fact that it's a little blurry kind of gives the sense, "You gotta catch it while you can" kind of feel. After all, nothing is perfect. If this was in perfect clarity, it might have been almost overwhelming.

One can see enough detail to be curious about what's beyond, without giving away the story...so to speak.

LoL sorry I'm a writer as well...so I tend to mix and match analogies.

Beautiful piece. I'd love to see more.

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taiyou-tsuki-hoshi [2009-11-17 03:59:00 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. I absolutely love the colors. It's quite reminiscent of a style I go for..LoL maybe that's why I like it.

Anyway, to be honest I just love color in general. The fact that this image is so rich is what makes this piece work out so well.

The black edges put a sense of focus on the image. Seeing as the landscape is fairly consistent all the way through, the edges help one to focus on the center and catch the color detail.

The fact that it's a little blurry kind of gives the sense, "You gotta catch it while you can" kind of feel. After all, nothing is perfect. If this was in perfect clarity, it might have been almost overwhelming.

One can see enough detail to be curious about what's beyond, without giving away the story...so to speak.

LoL sorry I'm a writer as well...so I tend to mix and match analogies.

Beautiful piece. I'd love to see more.

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anarae22 In reply to taiyou-tsuki-hoshi [2009-11-18 04:30:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for the feedback!

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taiyou-tsuki-hoshi In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-18 04:33:42 +0000 UTC]

No problem..though I'm going to resend the critique but only to add the icon in with it...

I thought I'd give you a heads up...I wanted my critique to actually count....LoL though I didn't realize I needed the icon in with it.

Like I said, I'd like to see more. I'll watch for your name.

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anarae22 In reply to taiyou-tsuki-hoshi [2009-11-18 04:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay, sounds good! And thanks again for such a detailed critique!

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Silverthe-Dragon [2009-11-13 23:23:58 +0000 UTC]

I loove pictures like this! the landscape itself is beutiful, but the way it fades around the borders just tops it off. quick question, how do you do that?

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anarae22 In reply to Silverthe-Dragon [2009-11-13 23:55:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
i just applied a vignette in my photo editor.

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dawnmist [2009-11-07 19:02:03 +0000 UTC]



I think it looks really good...the vignette is perfect, as is the blue and white. I think it could be a bit sharper nearer to the front, but that may be because it's small! I'd love to see this in a larger size (hint, hint )

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anarae22 In reply to dawnmist [2009-11-07 22:40:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks (:

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nii-kun-san [2009-11-05 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]

i think everything looks great i especially like the black border i say it adds to the picture can't exactly explain why though but it makes it look nicer. it isn't blurry either which is good

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anarae22 In reply to nii-kun-san [2009-11-06 00:16:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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nii-kun-san In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-12 23:04:19 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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imsoshy [2009-11-05 11:42:14 +0000 UTC]

awesome shot!
i like the colours and the way youยดve done the picure!
i like the vignette (little impression of an fisheye )

the blue and white is really cool!

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anarae22 In reply to imsoshy [2009-11-05 15:14:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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XCaligirl [2009-11-04 23:56:49 +0000 UTC]

I don't think you made the colors too bright. It add vibrancy which is balanced by the black around the edges. Nice capture and editing

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anarae22 In reply to XCaligirl [2009-11-05 05:22:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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XCaligirl In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-06 01:47:44 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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jonathoncomfortreed [2009-11-04 21:36:11 +0000 UTC]



-do you think i made the white & blue too bright? Not at all, I like the high contrast effect. Looks really cool. However, you might want to redo the top right corner - it looks almost gray and not in accordance to the bright left corner. Just clone stamp or something. Whatever you're comfortable with.

-to you think the vignette (black around the corners) adds to or takes away from the photo? and why? I think it makes the picture more 3D and .. "jumping out at me" Looks really cool and adds a focal point to the horizon line. The tilt is really perfect for this shot - unique and creative, great work! I love how the colours work together.

-do you think the photo is "blurry", and if so is this a good or a bad thing Doesn't look blurry to me. Of course it would probably be a bad thing, but it looks fine.

Great shot!

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anarae22 In reply to jonathoncomfortreed [2009-11-05 05:22:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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jonathoncomfortreed In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-06 14:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Of course.

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Wheatart [2009-11-04 17:32:22 +0000 UTC]


I found the vignette a little distracting. Maybe try a border and see what you like better. Also, if you can increase the viewing size on the deviation, that would help with impact.

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anarae22 In reply to Wheatart [2009-11-04 21:29:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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Wheatart In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-04 21:55:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Sooyle [2009-11-04 17:31:12 +0000 UTC]

This is a nice photo.
I think the vignette works well because since its lanscape, Its gives more focus on the center rather than the hole picture, and I also love how its angled
I think you should make the view slightly bigger too, since its landscape

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anarae22 In reply to Sooyle [2009-11-04 21:29:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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experimental-thing [2009-11-04 16:16:59 +0000 UTC]



it looks like a flascback for a past or some dream. you know how they make them in movies like that. with blurry ends.

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anarae22 In reply to experimental-thing [2009-11-04 21:29:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks (:

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experimental-thing In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-06 21:33:30 +0000 UTC]

np

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EmTheFreak [2009-11-04 16:08:51 +0000 UTC]

I think the sky is the perfect shade of blue, and that the edges are awesome. I can't explain why I like the edges though.

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anarae22 In reply to EmTheFreak [2009-11-04 21:29:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you (:

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bLiTh3 [2009-11-04 11:58:44 +0000 UTC]


This is truly am amazing picture. Just makes you feel like going to this far away land.
The beautiful fields of grass, the wide blue sky on top.
I don't want to comment any suggestions as this is just great.
Just would like to say one thing about the vignette, whether you use it or no, it'd still be nice
nice job!

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anarae22 In reply to bLiTh3 [2009-11-04 21:28:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav. (:

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bLiTh3 In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-05 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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LavaWaffle [2009-11-04 11:06:42 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of childhood days when you're running through the field cashing whatever (a friend,dog...your mother's lost parakeet *cough*) and everything is just moving too fast to be clear...

I think that the vignette it a little bit too overwhelming, it creates a kind of tunnel that forces your eye to the middle of the photo. Tone it down just a little bit.

And if you can, try darkening the sky there where it's almost white; those clouds can make for great detail.

Other than that, it's an excellent snapshot filled with emotion. I love the shade of green on the grass and the little yellow flowers :3

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anarae22 In reply to LavaWaffle [2009-11-04 21:28:28 +0000 UTC]

A parakeet!? Ohh my..!

Thanks for the feedback (:

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maxtad [2009-11-04 10:45:01 +0000 UTC]


The slight over exposure gives a nice feel to it, but that depends on what your intentions are. It can work both ways. If you didn't really have an intention then I suggest editing it to a slightly lower exposure, and comparing it to the origional to see which you like more.
I love the vignette but think it would be better if the horizon line was horizontal, because then the darker parts on the edges would be the edges, and not what seems like the middle of the field.
It is slightly burry, most noticeably in the foreground, but I like the effect it gives. It seems like there is a slight breeze, but without pushing the grass over.

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anarae22 In reply to maxtad [2009-11-04 21:27:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback(:

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loveyoulater [2009-11-04 10:07:07 +0000 UTC]

I really adore this, particularly the bright and vibrant colours! The composition looks great, although I think it'd be a less distracting if it were horizontal. I think the vignette works beautifully-- it really leads you in and makes you look at the mountains and the bright sky. The photo isn't too blurry, for me, I think it looks fine! Very lovely work. <3


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anarae22 In reply to loveyoulater [2009-11-04 21:25:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback (:

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MissMorticia [2009-11-04 10:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I thought it was you, recognised your style almost as soon as I saw this piece.

The white is very definable against the black mountain, I think it is an excellent contrast the way you have done it.

Nice work.

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anarae22 In reply to MissMorticia [2009-11-04 21:25:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you! (:

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CSnyder [2009-11-02 02:36:44 +0000 UTC]

very lovely and nice vibrant color, great balanced image

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anarae22 In reply to CSnyder [2009-11-02 02:44:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks (:

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CSnyder In reply to anarae22 [2009-11-02 02:45:46 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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OccupyedHead [2009-09-15 20:22:30 +0000 UTC]

Hello
Your work has been featured in my news article: [link]

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anarae22 In reply to OccupyedHead [2009-09-16 03:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank You!

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Knockonthedoor [2009-09-08 20:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Love the colours!

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anarae22 In reply to Knockonthedoor [2009-09-08 20:54:31 +0000 UTC]

THANKS!

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Knockonthedoor In reply to anarae22 [2009-09-08 20:58:28 +0000 UTC]

No probs. XD

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