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Andibi — One of Us

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Published: 2018-01-23 12:18:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1122; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 6
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A Legend of the Before People, of Atelani, the First Female Chief

The enormous spider was beyond Atelani’s worst nightmares, yet its laughter was that of an old friend.  “You are a killer, girl of the Ouataki!”  Murmurs of assent rose from the undergrowth as Atelani realized that she was surrounded by dozens of huge arachnids.

“It…  It was not my will…” she choked, but the spider’s amusement only increased. 

“Not your will?  You kill again and again.  You spin webs and lay in wait.  You strike with your fangs and spill the blood of your prey.  You leave their lifeless husks to rot in the sun!”  The import of the spider’s words hit Atelani like a falling tree and she staggered with the realization of what she had done – what she was doing.  “Tabu!”  The word was repeated over and over as a tribe’s worth of hard, glittering eyes regarded the weeping assassin. 

Then the spider’s voice assumed an almost gentle tone.  “Do not despair.  What is tabu for the Ouataki is lawful for the Ki-Kokani.  Those you have slain are lower than the unworthiest mate; they are less even than flies.  --Aya!  Their souls are filled with stinking evil that no fly would touch!” 

Atelani hung her head, yet she listened intently.  “The gods have said it!” intoned the spider.  “You are one of us until your work is done!” 

“One of us,” chorused the others, “one of us!”  And as their approval rang in her ears, Atelani drifted off to a dreamless sleep, the best she had had in weeks.

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Comments: 28

KosmoKOYOTE [2019-04-24 21:01:31 +0000 UTC]

It's great to see you portray these arachnids as gentle creatures and not bloodthirsty monsters. 

The jumping spider is one of my favorites. From some of reading pertaining to them they will not
bite a human. 

I see that she wields a couple of macuahuilt, the Aztec "Sword." It was imbedded with obsidian
knapped down to a fine edge. Sharper the surgical steel. I imagine that you know of the history of
this formidable weapon. 

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Andibi In reply to KosmoKOYOTE [2019-04-25 00:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you   I was always fascinated by spiders, even though some of them creeped me out.  Jumping spiders have a lot of personality and their big eyes make them seem more intelligent than the average spider.  I imagined that a giant one would probably be wise and reasonable, albeit in a spider sort of way


Most of what I know about the macuahuitl comes from reading Gary Jennings's "Aztec."  There are some very vivid depictions of what that weapon can do when properly wielded...!

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KosmoKOYOTE In reply to Andibi [2019-04-25 03:35:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  

Ah! Aztec! I read that novel many years ago. One of the most fascinating books
I've ever come across. Gary Jenning's knowledge of Mesoamerican history was
utterly amazing. His descriptive writings of the wonders of Tenochtitlan were a feast
for the mind.

Yes. Quite a few of the book's chapters were quite graphic in their contents. Particularly
the chapter were the main character amputated a warriors feet wielding that weapon.     

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Andibi In reply to KosmoKOYOTE [2019-04-25 05:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Ha-- I remember that!  It was almost by accident as I recall... 

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Fire-Ebony [2018-05-12 10:15:48 +0000 UTC]

... Personally, I think that adding there two macuahuitl is pretty cool xD

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Andibi In reply to Fire-Ebony [2018-05-12 20:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!  And thank you for the Watch, too -- I really appreciate it! 

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Fire-Ebony In reply to Andibi [2018-05-13 22:51:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! 

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wisahkecahk [2018-04-03 08:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Not only is the illustration powerfull and stark work-but the background story is compelling and one wants to see more!!!!!

LOVING THIS!!!!


(those poor poor spiders!lol)
                           

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Andibi In reply to wisahkecahk [2018-04-04 01:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!  Hoping to continue this particular storyline -- The spiders are in no danger.  They're dream-spiders, so Atelani's swords can't hurt them.  (And as long as they remain peaceable, she wouldn't attack them anyway) 

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wisahkecahk In reply to Andibi [2018-04-04 09:23:30 +0000 UTC]

I see!!!
Then this piece is even more delightful!!!!

You have a great imagination!!!!!

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Andibi In reply to wisahkecahk [2018-04-04 22:13:36 +0000 UTC]

(bows humbly) 

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Annaivri [2018-01-24 21:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, stunning work as always! I'm always eager for more from your stories, they captivate and weave a colorful landscape I would love to venture to. I love creatures that speak in those stories as well! Great job!

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Andibi In reply to Annaivri [2018-01-24 22:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!  I appreciate your nice words as always -- Great to know that these little stories are so well appreciated! 

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Annaivri In reply to Andibi [2018-01-24 23:05:00 +0000 UTC]

I truly think that you would make an excellent writer; if there were a great composition of your works, such as a book or books, I would read it. You're very welcome! It is certainly well deserved.

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Andibi In reply to Annaivri [2018-01-25 00:22:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you again!  I'm hoping to write enough stuff to maybe justify that idea someday

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Annaivri In reply to Andibi [2018-01-25 00:29:16 +0000 UTC]

Anytime. I hope so too!

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diamondtapir [2018-01-23 21:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Love the giant spiders. They look friendly, and almost adorable. 

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Andibi In reply to diamondtapir [2018-01-23 21:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  Really glad you like the spiders -- I wanted them to come across as strange, but not threatening

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Zaphkiellane [2018-01-23 19:13:14 +0000 UTC]

I love that you modeled the spiders after jumping spiders. Those are my favorite type.

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Andibi In reply to Zaphkiellane [2018-01-23 21:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  I always loved them, too -- When I was a kid, I used to watch them hop from place to place -- always got a kick out that

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Owningsuperset7 [2018-01-23 16:49:11 +0000 UTC]

She's certainly braver than me. I would run screaming if I saw those spiders.

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Andibi In reply to Owningsuperset7 [2018-01-23 21:28:35 +0000 UTC]

LOL -- Me too!

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wolf12832 [2018-01-23 15:10:27 +0000 UTC]

She's Cute.

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Andibi In reply to wolf12832 [2018-01-23 21:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  Glad you like

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TheOrangeDonkey [2018-01-23 13:22:00 +0000 UTC]

That expression says so much

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Andibi In reply to TheOrangeDonkey [2018-01-23 21:28:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Always tricky to put human expressions on anthro faces, so I'm glad it reads well!

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ERA-7 [2018-01-23 12:19:52 +0000 UTC]

You rock! Keep up the wonderful work!

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Andibi In reply to ERA-7 [2018-01-23 12:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thank you very much!  I appreciate your good words  (and the Fav) 

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