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I wasn't really satisfied with previous versions of this panel (to say the least). To be honest, i always have a sort of "Meh" feeling when it comes to that particular page!

So, i thought i would try to go back to it a last time and see if i could finally get it right.
Few corrections later, i then decided i'd maybe go for a more "vanishing" look to the shown drawing specifically (which is supposed to be a very old charcoal and cray sketch in a simple "sort of" parchment diary). And i kinda don't regret it (yet) : i think it works a bit better like that (maybe).
The thing is supposed to look very old, (with less sharper edges and with a partially "erased" look). I guess it's more relevant of the basic idea i had for this one!

For the lore, this belongs to an old entry in Iris' Diary (way before the events depicted in my Bloody Bastard webcomic). Fun fact, she knew nothing about drawing : the drawing is actually from Hayden, who asked her to draw her once in her own diary. She just loved the result and decided to keep it as it was. She loved it so much, that she made sure to keep the next page entirely blank (to avoid any inking to "mirror print" on it)! As a matter of facts, there's not even a name (nor a signature) on it!

So, does it finally conclude the rework process for this one?!
(I really hope so)!

Description
I wasn't really satisfied with previous versions of this panel (to say the least). To be honest, i always have a sort of "Meh" feeling when it comes to that particular page!

So, i thought i would try to go back to it a last time and see if i could finally get it right.
Few corrections later, i then decided i'd maybe go for a more "vanishing" look to the shown drawing specifically (which is supposed to be a very old charcoal and cray sketch in a simple "sort of" parchment diary). And i kinda don't regret it (yet) : i think it works a bit better like that (maybe).
The thing is supposed to look very old, (with less sharper edges and with a partially "erased" look). I guess it's more relevant of the basic idea i had for this one!

For the lore, this belongs to an old entry in Iris' Diary (way before the events depicted in my Bloody Bastard webcomic). Fun fact, she knew nothing about drawing : the drawing is actually from Hayden, who asked her to draw her once in her own diary. She just loved the result and decided to keep it as it was. She loved it so much, that she made sure to keep the next page entirely blank (to avoid any inking to "mirror print" on it)! As a matter of facts, there's not even a name (nor a signature) on it!

So, does it finally conclude the rework process for this one?!
(I really hope so)!