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andyending — and they called it love
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Published: 2019-06-04 09:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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picture—
a house
you’ve been building for
a decade plus some change.
imagine—
the comfort. the love. the
memories from which
you drew
foundations.
imagine—
a house
becoming a home.

picture—
me walking up
to the front door:
‘hello. here is
a match. i
am the fire’.

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Comments: 7

mrcrozier [2019-06-05 05:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful ending!

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andyending In reply to mrcrozier [2019-06-10 13:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was afraid the ending wouldn't make sense. I mean, it hardly makes sense to me, but this is how it was supposed to be written, you know? 

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YouInventedMe [2019-06-04 15:11:17 +0000 UTC]

This is terrific. Glad to see new work from you.


Oh! And if you check your correspondence in your message center, you should see a request for this and at least one other poem to be featured over at PoetryForHumans . We'd love if you'd accept the requests. We're both big fans of your words.

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andyending In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-06-10 13:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Glad to see you're still around and checking out my work.  
Thanks so much again for the requests for submitting and the compliment. It means a lot! 

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YouInventedMe In reply to andyending [2019-06-10 15:35:40 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Tiger--eyes [2019-06-04 14:43:59 +0000 UTC]

I find this very relatable.

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andyending In reply to Tiger--eyes [2019-06-10 13:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Big compliment.

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