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AngelDranger — ..:Dayshaun:.. Prologue
Published: 2004-12-07 01:25:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 295; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 40
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Well here is what came out when I was in the ===>
*something comes flying and hits me on the head* Ouch That hurts... *rubs head* Oh well now on with this little story. This little story popped into my head and I just said, "Oh better write this before I lose the idea!" So I did. Wrote it and gave it to some loyal friends to read... They said they liked it... So i decided to put it up....
I have to thank some people for helping me out....
OH thank you for reading this first and telling me that you liked it...
:my clone: Thank you so much for reading it tooo.....
: other people that read it at my school: THank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well thats all...
Story line and plot (c) MOI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Picture (c) MOI!!!!!!!!
If you look closely at the pictuer you can see some thing... ^^ Or sometimes you might see just pitch black... That's what this story is all about... DARKNESS.....
And don't forget if you want your character in this Hope finding story please go to my journal and please leave the following information...
Thank you and good night....
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Comments: 14
*____* wow-ness, i love the start of this. [link] !!! >_<
oh, i hope theres going to be dragons and phoenixes and griffins and other cool creatures! X3 *hugs the kitty* so cute!
This seems very origional ^^ you could publish this when you finish it. XD I'd read it!!
well ~ on to the next chapter *bounces off*
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Yes, there will be many creatures.
And thank you for the comment. ^^
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Oh. *looks around for more* *pouts* no more. ?_? i hope you update this soon. it was in depth enough that it caught my attention, and vauge enough to keep me wanting to find out what happens next. excellent work!!
this sounds like it's very well thought out.
Critizism: the only thing that had me a bit confused was the spelling errors, i sometimes had to read a line twice to figure out what was happening. but don't worry, i do that A LOT. it just takes practice. what helps me is reading through it a few times to try and find as many mistakes, or stuff that doesn't make sense, as i can.
hope that helped, sorry if it came out as rude ramblings, i didn't mean for that. i really hope you update this soon, i wanna found out what happens with Cadee.
*looks up* wow.. longest complement/crtique thingy ever.... it was fun should write these more often. lol *poinntlessness*
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THanks... I kind of went over it when i was sick so there should be a little mistakes here and there. Brain was flying.. :float:
I am so happy that you love it. ^^ Stay tuned for more!
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Finally a spare moment to finish reading this! *sighs with releif* I love this! It sound really really good I I can't wait to read more! ^_^ Keep on writing!
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Whoa this is so cool! omg it's so descriptive and suspenseful that I got goosebumps! 
Aww, I hope she's not really dead, but she probably is...
Is this going to be a romance story? Oooo I love romance, and I love fantasy too!
Definate 
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Not really a romance story... 
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this is really cute!! i love kitties!! ^__^ cant wait to see more
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AWESOME! MORE MORE MORE...or is this the end...if it is, i'm going to cry!
Without wa,x
SCS
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no it isn't
I am like attached to this.... ^^
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