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Published: 2009-06-14 16:48:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 795; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 192
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Description Just kidding his name is Bonehead.
Well, not really.

For *Ravenpuff 's contest, Bix Fiks' second husband. Typing this all for the second time, too, because my internet HAD to shit itself when I posted it yesterday night. D| There we go.

Yiiram Persan, a business man from an Irken/Vortian business family, which is why he tolerates Vortians as an Irken. He's got a tiny tiny bit of Vortian DNA in him, too, since one Vortian rebel sneaked his DNA in the birth facilities, making several Irken/Vortian hybrids.

But anyway, that's another story.

Yiiram owns the tanking station Xael works at, and used to be very rich. He's not that rich any more, due to the following story:

Yiiram and Bix met eachother at a bar, and he started to talk to her since she was a PlayVortian model and he recognised her. He really liked her personality, and they quickly became friends and started hanging out with eachother. After almost a year of knowing eachother, they got together, and a few months later, they married. But Yiiram quickly paid less and less attention to Bix, as he spent more time at work than with her, listened less to her because he always came home tired, and when they went out, he looked at other girls. Bix mentioned it, and Yiiram said that maybe it wouldn't work out like this; their lives are too different from eachother to be together.

Yiiram also acknowledged that he looked at other girls and that kind of shit, and he said that he was truly sorry. He wanted to divorce on good terms, so he offered half of his posessions to Bix to let her know he still cared for her. Bix agreed, and they divorced. They stayed friends, but due to their jobs, hung out less with eachother.

BLAAH FINALLY I GOT IT WRITTEN DOWN AGAIN. DAMN it. Just used different wording. Oh wells. I hope the story and species aren't TOO unoriginal. :l I really tried this time, and it's not every day I enter a contest, so yeah.

Anyway, I fucked up the lighting on his jacket and suitcase, but whatever. XD I don't fully like his design either, I might redraw it latersssssss. Might. >.>

.PNG NO BACKGROUND BLAHAHAHA full view or something lol.

Next time I'll put a decent background, I hate how dA handles their .PNG pictures. Hmp. :l

Mentioned Bix Fiks © *Ravenpuff .
Shitty art and character © Me.

I HAS A SUITCAES. I'm sure some of you remember that, hur dee hur.
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Comments: 13

CleaveTheWhatHaveYou [2009-06-15 20:23:22 +0000 UTC]

He's pretty cool-looking, though I'm kinda more interested in what he does than his love life. What kinda business is he in?

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AnimationFan In reply to CleaveTheWhatHaveYou [2009-06-16 16:30:39 +0000 UTC]

It was for a contest, so I had to describe his love life more than his actual business.

Well, he basically manages and runs finances for several tanking stations. It doesn't look like much, but it's hard work and it pays great.

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Zerna [2009-06-14 22:41:10 +0000 UTC]

nice horns and pak..

aww, he seems like an okay guy. <:/

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AnimationFan In reply to Zerna [2009-06-16 16:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. XD I like to make the PAK compartments shiny. It's so fun~.

He's very caring, he just doesn't show it much.

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Zerna In reply to AnimationFan [2009-06-16 16:44:51 +0000 UTC]

^_^ nice!

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AnimationFan In reply to Zerna [2009-06-16 19:41:39 +0000 UTC]

Mhm. ^^

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avatarjk137 [2009-06-14 17:17:45 +0000 UTC]

I like the design.

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AnimationFan In reply to avatarjk137 [2009-06-14 17:28:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. :3

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Invader-Sideos [2009-06-14 17:03:04 +0000 UTC]

He looks very actiony and whatnot and BOOO for him for being a bad husband and stuff.

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AnimationFan In reply to Invader-Sideos [2009-06-14 17:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. XD Thank you.

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gdpr-2852538 [2009-06-14 16:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Cool dude and story ^^

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AnimationFan In reply to gdpr-2852538 [2009-06-14 17:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. 8D

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gdpr-2852538 In reply to AnimationFan [2009-06-14 17:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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