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Description Tell me what's the story behind this scene: Who did this, why did he get so close to him and how does he react ^^
I'm curious what you see!


This came to my mind while I was doing a little break from my final work for university. Well lets say the little break extended a bit...

You can see the things I used for drawing: A DinA5-Sketchbook, a Fineliner, a mechanical-pencil, a rubber-pen with two different rubbers and a normal rubber ^^

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The Comic THE LIGHT IN THE DARK is based on the game MINECRAFT.
Storyline by me.
The character and the design belongs to me.
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CautiousArtist [2019-09-05 15:09:22 +0000 UTC]

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Annkh-Redox In reply to CautiousArtist [2019-09-06 10:17:18 +0000 UTC]

That's really well written and a really awesome plot Love the story! Especially the little twist on the end. I can totally imagine him doing such an asshole move

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CautiousArtist In reply to Annkh-Redox [2019-09-06 12:48:08 +0000 UTC]

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MoonClaw0712 [2017-02-06 21:02:41 +0000 UTC]

OK, let's try a thing here.
AHEM!

"Herobrine, I'm sorry, I didn't want to-"
"Shut up!" The man shouted, wiping the blood from his new wound. His white eyes were glowing brightly, filled with anger and hatred.
"I swear, it was an accident. I would never want to hurt you-"
"Then why did you do this to me, huh?"
"It was a reflex, you must understand. You have reflexes and I know you must hurt plenty of others because of them."
"Poor excuse, Notch. Seems like you're trying to make your death even more painful with every breath you take."
"Please, just calm down and stop all of this... this foolishness! The humans here are innocent, and you know it."
"Now you see... that, my dear friend, is where you're wrong. They were all guilty- every last one of them. I was just carrying out my verdict."
"Why have you become so cold? I remember when you used to be more caring."
"That was before I learned the truth."
"The truth? The truth about what?"
"You're blind if you cannot see it. All humans are guilty of murder in my eyes. Even the children, as they are bound to commit murder themselves one day."
"Slaughtering an entire village does not make you right!"
"Yet it justifies the humans?"
"The mobs attack them!"
"Out of fear, Notch. Self defense."
The other was silent for once.Β 
"You are wise to hold your tongue. Yet foolish at the same time. I'm still most definitely going to kill you. Maybe even torture you for a while, who knows? You need to be judged for your crimes, Notch. And I'm the ultimate Judge here."
"You've become a monster," the other said, looking at the white-eyed man with some hatred, but also pity, and a little sadness. This made the white-eyed man laugh.
"And you haven't been all these years? You imprisoned me, and told everyone that big, scary Herobrine was gone. Removed. Now the whole world will learn that I have returned... and I'll be carrying your head with me as I spread my destruction and show the human world I'm back.
And most importantly, you won't be there to save them."

Probably turned out bad as I just sat down and wrote. So... there you go, I guess.
From a writer suffering from writer's block and a total dweeb, I present unto thee this... thingy.
Let's call it a dialogue as I barely used anything aside from dialogue in this thing.
Hope you enjoy my utter dweebish nonsense.

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Annkh-Redox In reply to MoonClaw0712 [2017-02-06 21:11:20 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed every single bit!!! Really awesome ^^ You captured botch really good I'm surprised how good it matches ^^
Thank you very much for writing this it means a lot to me


... gonna read it again now x3

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MoonClaw0712 In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-06 22:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you mate.Β 
Writing this in writer's block too.

I'm kinda proud as usually anything I write while having writer's block turns out TRES TERRIBLE!

That was supposed to be French.

I'm learning French but I still suck at it after being in class for about 4 years...

Random thing is random!

Love your art by the way. Much jealousy from this American who also celebrated the Patriots winning the Super Bowl-

Sorry if this was really off-track. That's just how I work, I guess.

Still love your work though.Β 

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Saphirone-Arnes [2017-02-05 13:16:54 +0000 UTC]

"A moment. A fucking mere moment has been enough. The human has struggled so hardly, his injuries were beautiful to look at and his screams... They were a pure delight to his ears.
And now, as he was finally reaching the final moment were he will see life disappear slowly from his eyes after the last hit, he took a moment to look at his victim expression.
And the pain appeared.
A wood. A FUCKING PIECE OF WOOD ?! He used a simple shard of wood from the wall he was crushed into to hit him ?! Him !? Whose powers rivalised once with gods as he battled them ?
HIM ?! HAVING HIS BLOOD SPILLED BY SUCH SIMPLE BEINGS ?!
His mind was so filled with anger, with these thoughts of hatred, that he didn't realised that he was hitting a corpse with his fists, only turning more into pulp the internal chest of the villager. He ruined his moment of pleasure. This was pissing him off. The scar wasn't even there anymore, already healed, with no traces of it left.

But at least, the flames were pretty anyway. He always liked their purifying aspect. And he smiled in delight upon seeing them, raising his arms around him, almost like if he was dancing in the burning house.

Oh yeah it's true, he was here for a reason. In the delight of simple murder, he almost forgot what he wanted to do. Approaching the wall, he passed his hand on it and wrote.

"GUILTY"

Yes they were. And they will soon know why. The flames bursted even more wildly, and nobody was here after. Leaving the corpse to the flames, and his warning on the wall. The humiliation from before was already away. All he could do know, was to smile..."

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Annkh-Redox In reply to Saphirone-Arnes [2017-02-05 13:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome x3 I love it !!! and you also referred to the other picture that's awesome x3
Thank you very much for writing this story!

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Saphirone-Arnes In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 15:28:59 +0000 UTC]

That was quite funny to do, you give me a lot of inspiration through all your drawings so it was fairly easy for me to wrote it down.

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YumeQueen [2017-02-05 09:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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Annkh-Redox In reply to YumeQueen [2017-02-05 11:58:06 +0000 UTC]

thx ^^

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aneagle [2017-02-05 08:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Poor Hero, that must hurt. Annkh amazing work.

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Annkh-Redox In reply to aneagle [2017-02-05 11:58:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much x3 ad yeah it really hurts ^^

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aneagle In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 12:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, Hero is my favorite character. When I write I always make him suffer and then later that he lives happily with his brother. Yeah your right it really feels when you hurt your character.

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Annkh-Redox In reply to aneagle [2017-02-05 13:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh mine too ^^ He suffers a lot but my endings are mostly sad ^^'

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aneagle In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 13:33:47 +0000 UTC]

Oww, I wanted to write a sad ending story once, but thought it would be better to give him a second chance.

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annikaherz28 [2017-02-05 08:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Ich sehe das Herobrine versucht hat meine (roleplay) Kinder anzugreifen und ich ihn einfach mit einem Messer angegriffen habe.

Dann Laufe ich mit meinen Kindern weg. :3

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Annkh-Redox In reply to annikaherz28 [2017-02-05 11:58:46 +0000 UTC]

und was wenn er dann euch hinterherlΓ€uft? D:

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annikaherz28 In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 12:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Tja was bestimmt sein wird, werden entweder mein (roleplay) Ehemann der ein demon ist ausrasten oder ich. Und was dann passiert willst du nicht wissen.......

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Annkh-Redox In reply to annikaherz28 [2017-02-05 12:51:09 +0000 UTC]

xDΒ  obwohl ich glaube das Hero selber auch so einiges austeilen kann

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annikaherz28 In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 13:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Auch eingesperrt um zerquescht werden von einem Kokon aus erhΓ€rtetem Blut?

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Annkh-Redox In reply to annikaherz28 [2017-02-05 13:30:01 +0000 UTC]

wΓ€re was neues aber ich glaube er wΓΌrde damit zurechtkommen

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annikaherz28 In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 14:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Bei deiner Hero Version bestimmt. ;3

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VileCure [2017-02-05 02:04:18 +0000 UTC]

That hair! <3 and the cut across his face is portrayed nicely of how it is like a second or two right after with the flow of motion! AHHH -fans- Another amazing piece of how you have the eye following the hidden flow you have <3

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Annkh-Redox In reply to VileCure [2017-02-05 12:01:36 +0000 UTC]

x3 thx I spent a lot of time in the hair ^^'
And I'm glad how it turned out especially with the emotion ^^
But I do recognized I often draw stuff like that xD I can't remember the last time I drew a happy face xD

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VileCure In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 19:10:28 +0000 UTC]

But drama makes us happy XD PAIN TO OUR CHARACTERS! I mean love >>;

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Watcher-Magic [2017-02-05 01:47:19 +0000 UTC]

You are officially the queen of crosshatching. o.o I want to crosshatch like that.

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Annkh-Redox In reply to Watcher-Magic [2017-02-05 12:02:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you verry much (I'm a queen!!! Wheeh x3)

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Watcher-Magic In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 22:28:27 +0000 UTC]

(Your kingdom awaits X3)

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DragonessGrace In reply to Watcher-Magic [2017-02-05 07:17:32 +0000 UTC]

^^^ this

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MidNight-Vixen [2017-02-05 00:45:27 +0000 UTC]

I say, Hero tried to attack Notch and Notch defended himself by attacking back and cut Hero's face... oh i'm dark!

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Annkh-Redox In reply to MidNight-Vixen [2017-02-05 12:03:51 +0000 UTC]

That could be, because Notch surely can get so close on him. ^^

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AvalonCat [2017-02-05 00:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Looks painful. Β 
Still very breath taking.

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Annkh-Redox In reply to AvalonCat [2017-02-05 12:04:02 +0000 UTC]

thx ^^

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Enabi-Seira [2017-02-05 00:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I see someone in the ground, crawling in an attempt to escape his hunter. But he failed as this creature with pure white eyes reached for him. As a hand showed in his peripheral view, a little dagger encounters flesh.

Rage and pain run all over his face while the blood drops fall to the floor. That was the first and the last time he lower his guard.

For the one who stroke? Well, I can't see him now...

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Annkh-Redox In reply to Enabi-Seira [2017-02-05 12:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Cool story I really like it x3

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Enabi-Seira In reply to Annkh-Redox [2017-02-05 18:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Flying-Hybrid [2017-02-05 00:00:15 +0000 UTC]

He got a paper cut

Pretty much, this is everyone when they get a paper cut

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Annkh-Redox In reply to Flying-Hybrid [2017-02-05 12:04:10 +0000 UTC]

xD

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Watcher-Magic In reply to Flying-Hybrid [2017-02-05 01:48:14 +0000 UTC]

YES XD Especially when they're deep.

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Elessig In reply to Flying-Hybrid [2017-02-05 00:54:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm laughing XD

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Meazigread [2017-02-04 23:47:17 +0000 UTC]

wow! thats gotta hurt!

this looks awesome though!

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Annkh-Redox In reply to Meazigread [2017-02-05 12:05:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much x3 and yeah, it probably hurts really bad...

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TheFrommie86 [2017-02-04 23:42:20 +0000 UTC]

ouch das muss doch weh tun

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Annkh-Redox In reply to TheFrommie86 [2017-02-04 23:44:45 +0000 UTC]

jaa ich glaube das tut es auch >.<

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