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Description Karl looks at the clock while sitting back in a chair by the window, in an apartment that he shares with his elderly father and elder sister along with a new couple that was ordered to live with them. He realized that it was time to go out to get food for himself. He shivered, "Ech- it's mighty cold outside; I hope the soup that they're serving will be warm when they serve it." He walks out of the flat and headed down to the street and followed the crowd to the cafe.
Adalric did the usual Heil at the gate to the ghetto, the lower officers nodded in return opening the iron gate for him, he never gave it much thought before but he idly wondered in the back of his head why they needed such big walls to keep in regular people. He shrugged the thought off and headed inside quickly the muddy road already staining his newly shinned boots. Two fellow SS officers followed behind him closely saying something about how they kept the Jews very under control and well behaved hoping it would impress him. It didn't.
"Hey are you the new guy? Adalric right?" the 2nd SS said. He had a happy grin on his face.
SS 1 then intruded in; "While your here, you better watch the kikes. I heard Liede say they bite."
Adal gave a half hearted laugh; he didn't see the problem with the Jewish people himself. "Ha-ha, I'm sure he's right." He agreed for his own sake, he didn't want anyone to think he was against the party.
He continued to look around the streets which were far more concerning to him, the place was filthy and the people were giving him dirty looks, it made him feel rather uneasy.
SS one then continued: "Well the roll says you're on kitchen duty. Be careful as to how much you give each of them. There's so many of them and a handful of us. Remember that... As for where it is-" he points down the street and tells you to make a right and that you can't miss it.
He adjusts his hat slightly and nods "Alright." What a pain in the ass was this really as necessary as Himmler was saying? He didn't see the point. He strode down the road to the kitchen most people getting out of his way, probably because he was glaring into the ground in irritation.
On Karl's end:
"Oh god... where is the kitchen?" He asked himself as he suddenly took the wrong turn to accidentally follow some of the people to a temple. (Today wasn't for prayer! even if it is Saturday.) He back tracked to the cross-section where he made his wrong turn; right up the street from Adalric. He scratched the back of his head and looked about.
He saw the SS troop walking up and he decided to calmly but boldly approach and say "Excuse me sir"
Adal snapped out of his brooding and almost jumped a little, he stopped and turned to the direction that the voice had come from "Ah, yes?"
"Ach, didn't mean to shock you but which way is the kitchen?"
"Oh." He tilted his cap up a bit and looked to the side "I'm actually going there myself.You can follow me if you like." He was being oddly polite for a Nazi.
Karl's held back shiver subsided and was nearly dumbfounded then regained his train of though "Wow um... Okay then! Thank you, officer."
He shook his head and smiled walking forward "No trouble at all." He wanted to get there quickly while the directions were still fresh in his mind.
An older SS guard saw Karl walking along with him and he came by Adalric and asks "um Sir why is there a juden walking with you? Shouldn't he be in line?" despite him being older he was still under him in rank.
Adal's almost light hearted and kind face immediately shifted to a much scarier expression "If there was a problem I think I would have handled it by now, I was simply showing him to the mess hall, we can't have people wandering around aimlessly, be on your way now officer there is no problem here."
The other troop then became fearful "y-yes sir" and he went back to his post.
Karl was a bit shocked; he wasn't used to soldiers being this nice. "Um officer, may I ask what you name is?" a touch of nervousness crept into his speech.
Adal looked up to him a bit surprised "Adalric, and yours?" he asked in return.
"My name is Karl Bremnerr"
He gave a smile. The both of them were starting to near the kitchen
"A pleasure" He smiled in return and started to head forward "Now if you'll excuse me Karl I've got to get to work, can't set a bad example, have a good day." He waved slightly and gave him another smile before heading in
He got in line, unknowingly stating, "Wow, he was awfully nice." Then the other Jewish citizen, an old lady sneered "Nice? Don't joke, boy"
Adal Put an apron on and stood next to another officer looking a little thoughtful "What nice manners." Okay, so it was vague but any less vague and he would be in trouble.
The other officer gave him an eye "What's with the apron? It's.... lacey."
Adal snorted "Any true man shouldn't be ashamed of his dress, I'll have you know I'm a very good cook this just proves that I'm a prodigy in the kitchen, unlike you I'll bet." He gave him a sly smile.
He snorted and giggled. He started to place the rations on the trays, small in serving almost sparing.
A small boy asked if he could have more and your partner simply gave him a dirty look.
Adal tapped the spoon on his pot, eyeing the mashed potatoes inside, he then scooped some up and put it onto his plate, giving a notably larger portion then what was normally expected.
"Hey they don't need as much as that!"
His partner snapped; Karl watching from the next row, hearing what was going on.
He waved his hand at him letting out an agitated sigh "We can't have people walking around starving, then they'll complain and I don't want to deal with that." Managing to come up with another fairly good excuse.
For the next few minutes he shuts up.
Then Karl's row rolls in. most of them were already starting to wear down from hunger, being impatient and old. Karl stood vigilant and didn't complain.
He got down to the serving area and then looks up and without thinking and said "You're that officer from earlier right?" He was then abruptly interrupted by your counterpart again
Adal continued to hand out good amounts of food without a second thought even giving some of the older people smiles while his partner wasn't looking.
The other Nazi sneers "Don't ever talk to us higher without addressing us with sir! Now learn your place!"ΓΏ He scowled down at him; as Karl glared back at him.
Adal eyed the two, there was a lot of tension he really wasn't aware of "Alright, alright its fine.lets not get into a fight here." he said trying to keep the situation from escalating.
He sighs' and whispers to himself "maybe my hopes got too high"
"Being called sir isn't really all that important to me." He said scooping up some mashed potatoes and putting them onto Karl's plate "But that's just me." He laughed a bit to himself.
Karl smiled at him, while Adal's partner is still like adfkdsklfsdd. "I'll just be more careful then" he goes to sit down and eat.
Adal nodded in return and continued his job, really, what was so bad about these people? They couldn't have really been the reason they lost the first war, but he couldn't just question the Fhrer, he would be questioning his country then. He frowned a little at this thought.

TO BE CONTINUED?????
lol, sup ZUKA.
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Comments: 139

anomoo In reply to ??? [2009-05-12 03:11:14 +0000 UTC]

He used to be a scary fellow : D

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-12 18:02:43 +0000 UTC]

its hard to imagine now...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 16:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah it is, and i made him!

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 17:44:51 +0000 UTC]

yes... he's all super happy & pretty....
he was scary for like... the pg 6 and never again. *__*

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 18:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Hee~ x3 Yes hes really supresses that part of his personality now, because he hates how he acts then >A>

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 18:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Elior would get really scared if he showed that side. He doesn't deal with scary/crazy well...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 19:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Haha, Yesh, Adal isn't like that anymore, he was able to overcome his little mental problems
with butterflys and HUGS

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 19:24:16 +0000 UTC]

mental problems O__O;;;

ah hopefully no one makes him revert...diel... > - >;

I wonder if he was like Diel is currently.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 19:27:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL, Yes he was like that! He hated everyone/everything Except maybe Bern and Dedrich, but once he went to war and saw what was happeneing to the jews he had a mental meltdown and was able to find his true personality xD haha, i dunno if he could ever go back to that.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 19:35:49 +0000 UTC]

lol i thought so....that's probably why he was so sweet on him.

At least he didn't end up staying that way till the end like Gregor. He actually shot Mendel and then killed himself. Felix left that part out b/c Elior might have been ease dropping.

i think all my characters are wary of my love now. I said i loved Gregor and look how nicely it turned out for him....

wah i like how all our characters mesh.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 19:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Mehehe, Yes Adal can relate to Diel's troubles very well, so he can't find it in himself to blame him for his actions since its the product of unfortunate events |D

Lol, poor guys xD haha I killed the lover of one of my characters before, not so nice |D

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 19:52:13 +0000 UTC]

nope....
Felix : She said she loved me too....I'm next !!! I'm next..!!!
Me : no...you live....

Elior is trying to understand but he's really scared of Diel still. It's probably going to take him longer to forgive and be nice to him again.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 19:57:25 +0000 UTC]

I loev evveryyonnneee~

Yes, its understandable since he is younger, and doesn't have the same experiences to know like Adal does, plus Adal is just so forgiving to everyone |D Except LEO, he haet Leonid long tiem. But Leonid loev Adal and want him to become his waifu : DD

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:00:40 +0000 UTC]

yeah.... Adal is liike mommaterresa.....

hasn't met leo , but he sounds ten times worse than Felix....

Elior is still the youngest so his reactions are different. I remember being his age , it was very confusing...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:03:41 +0000 UTC]

LOL, haha xD oh jeez.

Leonid is CRAZY, to the MAX. They meet on the eastern front near the USSR and had a show down that almost ENDED IN RAPE. By Leo, Adal got the hell out of there before he could, so Leo now has an insane fixation on him and LOEVV HEEM, but hes a communist so he wants Adal to join him in that too xD Hes gonna pop up soon to stop Adal from going to poland and to...cause lots of problems, lol.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:05:34 +0000 UTC]

omg....Is he Russia? O__O ;;;

oh dear i hope diel tries and kills him.
And that i hadn't killed Gregor off so quickly.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Hes not quite as bad xD i mean hes only really insane when it comes to Adal
LOL, One thing i can be sure of is that Diel will not like him and he will not like Diel.

You could always magically poof him back, haha

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:16:54 +0000 UTC]

lol.... I hope his tastes are only for Adal... -looks at her two cute boys- hn
Me : I'm sure you'll be fine.
Elior : hn....
Felix : NOOO!!!! not again! Never again ..fjhdjdgdgfhgdfhds
( he went through 'the lesson' too.. )
but then the realism...then again...Deil....flaming....

lol....

"I just pretended to shoot myself? "

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:23:22 +0000 UTC]

They are, don't worry |D hes pretty fixated on him. What with the whole "Become a soviet, come home with me and BE MY WAIFU!!1"

While Adal is just trying to run away : D....


LOOOOOOLLLL.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:28:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah for my characters...

sux to be Adal...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it does suck to be him |D

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:41:02 +0000 UTC]

lol...

And i thought my love was tough.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:42:39 +0000 UTC]

Hohoho, Leo is really a force to be delt with....|D

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:47:09 +0000 UTC]

ah... I am worried than if he appears around Elior , that Elior will try to defend his 'mama'. And get his arm broken or something.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Lawwl, that is so cute, xD I think Leo would just be all
"Don't worry, im going to marry him so i'll be your Daddy!"
lolol xD

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:52:37 +0000 UTC]

oh god... Elior would be like "No Diel is my Daddy not you! " ....

cute and kinda sad too....

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 20:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Awww |D Poor thing

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 20:57:42 +0000 UTC]

elior doesn't know when to be quiet... =__= ;;

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 21:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, well he is young~

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 21:04:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah...
It's sorta cute when he doesn't make trouble for people.
-cuddles him- he's just so cute....

eh... wait where is Elior going when Adal leaves?

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-13 21:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Thats the whole point of the introduction of Leo, so Adal doesn't leave : D hehe, i wouldn't let that happen, no sir.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-13 21:16:18 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

yeah cause,Elior is basically doomed if Adal leaves. Deid would probably have no reason to come over and Diel wants nothing to do with him.
poor baby... When he finds out (Diel hates him) he's going to start crying again.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-14 20:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes, haha, can't really have the RP without him either xD

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-14 21:27:54 +0000 UTC]

aw Aren't you happy Elior your needed?
Elior : eh? Really * w *

yeah...It kinda helps to have a jew around the Nazis.....

Lait is making me grumpy....poor adal...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-15 13:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, aww

Lait...wait you mean the real Diel? or other? Lait/Diel
OHMYGOD MY HEAD. so confusing.
and Adal is so pissed they did that one his bed xD haha, thats his happy place
Adal: Those perverted defilers of beds! D: <

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-15 14:00:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't know!!
... the one with the sexy France hair?

And now Elior is taking off his clothes...
poor Adal...

Elior : I am getting so hot...I'm gonna take my clothes off...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 00:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol, you mean the jewish one. thats the real Diel.

: D...

Adal: DO NOT SING SUCH DIRTY SONGS IN MY ROOM! D: <<

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 02:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Elior : But it's hot in here Adal.... (he has a fever.)

I know... it's still kind like WAT?
And he's so mean , poor broken hearted felix...

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 02:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Adal: -Pushes him into the guest room bed- Lay down D: >

Lawwl, yeah i know.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 02:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Elior : I dunt wanna! T x T ;;;

I'm tempted to make Felix go all Yandere and try and kill him with a knife.

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 18:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Adal would only rage because his head hurts and he wants nappy time xD

Adal: Your sick, TO BED D: <

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 20:00:13 +0000 UTC]

no, i mean Felix raging.

Elior : wah.... read me a story ....

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 20:30:20 +0000 UTC]

No i know, and then Adal would rage because he doth not like violence in his house |D

Adal: Uh okay....There once was a man from mantucket

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 20:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Elior : ? from where?

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 20:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Adal: Who kept all his cash in a bucket.

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 20:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Elior : ....-is bored- tell me another story....

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 20:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Adal: uhh Fuzzy Wuzzy was a bare,
Fuzzy Wuzzy had no hair,
Fuzzy Wuzzy was arrested for indecent exposure and is
now serving time in the state pen-- WAIT. i mean.
shit. >A>;;

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 20:39:54 +0000 UTC]

Elior : .... what's indecent exposure?

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anomoo In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2009-05-16 20:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Adal: Its something that you should never do

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to anomoo [2009-05-16 20:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Elior : -stare- that is a terrible description. You bore me..

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