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Description St. Bernard’s Hospital
Three Bridges Security Ward
Patient 6651508
SCARLET, Flandre

1.  Mental Status Exam


a. Patient is young girl, claiming to be 495 years old.  Patient’s parents verify age of 7 years.  At roughly 09:30, December 6th, 1988, patient decorated two rusty wrought iron bars measuring a 1.4 meters in length with colored glass shards before plunging both into own back (see attachments 3A-3E).  While bars missed vital organs, positioning resulted in their lodging between ribs, irremovable through surgery without extremely high risk of complication.  Bars were sawed to manageable length by medical staff shortly after incident at 21:00 of same day.  Expresses extremely antisocial and avoidant tendencies, refuses to look at medical staff above waist level.  Patient is highly delusional, and may be threat to herself and others.
b. Patient’s thought process is still difficult to determine.  Refuses to answer most questions or otherwise communicate with medical staff.  Further inquiry must be made before conclusions may be reached.
c. Aside from brief outbursts of extreme fear/aggression (?) prior to sedation when notified that metal rods would be removed, patient has not shown any other signs of visible emotion.
d. Psychotherapy sessions prove inconclusive at best.  See attachments 2A to 2H for transcripts.

Attachment 2A

The following transcript documents the first attempt to diagnose and treat Patient 6651508 through psychotherapy, using juvenile accommodation 16A.

11:30, 12/9/1988

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Hello, Flandre, I am Dr. Aimee Marsielle.  I’ve been assigned to your case.  You may call me Aimee if you’d like.”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE:  “It’s alright if you don’t want to talk.”  Pause.  “Flandre, I would like it if you could draw me a picture.”

Dr. MARSIELLE passes paper and a box of crayons to Patient 661508.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “You can draw anything you’d like.”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Go ahead, Flandre.”  Pause.  “It’s okay if you don’t want to.  We can do this another time instead.”

Patient 6651508 opens the box of crayons and chooses the black crayon.  Patient begins to color the page in.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “What are you drawing, Flandre?”

Patient 6651508 continues coloring and makes no response.  When patient completes the first side, she flips it over and continues coloring.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Do you need another crayon, Flandre?  It looks like you’re almost done with that one.”

Patient 6651508 continues coloring until the crayon is completely used up.  Patient extends her hand.  Dr. MARSIELLE gives her a new box.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Here you go, Flandre.”

Patient 6651508 takes the box without notice and takes the black crayon.  Patient colors until the page is filled in.  Patient places paper on table and slides it to Dr. MARSIELLE.  (See attachments 4A.a-4A.b)

Dr. MARSIELLE:  “Good.  That’s good, Flandre.  What is it?”

Patient 6651508 makes no response.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “That’s alright, we can talk about it another time if you would prefer that.  We’re going to take you back to your room now, okay?”

Patient 6651508 makes no response.

End transcript.

Attachment 2B

The following transcript documents the second attempt to diagnose and treat Patient 6651508 through psychotherapy, using juvenile accommodation 16A.

11:30, 12/10/1988

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Hello again, Flandre.  I wanted to follow up on yesterday’s talk.  Could you tell me what this is?”

Dr. MARSIELLE gives Patient 6651508 her drawing.  Patient does not look at the picture and does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Flandre?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “It’s alright, if you don’t want to talk about it.  Would you rather just draw another picture today?”  Pause.  “I’ll just leave these here then.”

Dr. MARSIELLE leaves paper and a box of crayons on the table.  After 3 minutes and 28 seconds, Patient 6651508 opens the box and removes black crayon.  Patient 6651508 begins filling the page in.  Patient flips paper over when done with the first side.  When crayon is used up, patient extends her hand for another box.  When finished, patient places picture on table and slides it to Dr. MARSIELLE.  (see attachments 4B.a-4B.b)

Dr. MARSIELLE: “You drew the exact same thing yesterday, Flandre.  Do you want to tell me what it means?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSILLE: “That’s alright, Flandre.  That’s alright.  We can do this again tomorrow, okay?  Let’s go back to your room now.”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

End transcript

Attachment 2C

The following transcript documents the third attempt to diagnose and treat Patient 6651508 through psychotherapy, using juvenile accommodation 16A.

11:30, 12/11/1988

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Hello, Flandre, it’s me again.  Do you want to talk about what you drew yet?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “That’s alright, Flandre.  You don’t have to talk yet if it makes you feel uncomfortable.  Why don’t you draw another picture?  But, since you’ve drawn the same thing twice already, why don’t you try drawing something new today, okay?”

Patient 6651508 takes the crayons and paper and proceeds to draw five figures of varying heights.  She is a considerably skilled artist.  Despite the figures all clearly being human females, Dr. DOWNES states that there is something extremely unsettling about the image, and the figures have a strongly inhuman air to them.  At the farthest left is red-headed woman in a beret.  Her eyes have been removed, leaving still-bleeding sockets.  Despite this, she smiles.  Beside her is a purple haired woman in a nightgown.  She has no eyes.  Next is another red-headed woman in a vest and skirt.  Her face is covered.  Second from the right is a young woman in a French maid’s uniform.  Her eyes are hollow, and she holds a bloodied knife.  At the farthest right is a winged teenaged girl.  She has mouths for eyes. (See attachment 4C.a)

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Who are these people, Flandre?  Are they your friends?

Patient 6651508 continues drawing and makes no response.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Are they your family?  Do you know them?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond and continues drawing.  When finished, patient slides the paper and crayons across table to Dr. MARSIELLE.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “That’s very good, Flandre.  Can you explain who these people are?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Flandre, could you tell me who these women are?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Flandre?  Could you just tell me what made you draw this, Flandre?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Will you tell me why you drew this picture, Flandre?”  Pause “Flandre?”

Patient 6651508 rises and walks to Dr. MARSIELLE.  Patient whispers to Dr. MARSIELLE for several minutes and returns to her seat.  The two stare at each other for nearly 17 minutes.

Dr. MARSIELLE: “Okay, Flandre, you’re going back to your room now.”

End transcript.

Attachment 2D

The following transcript documents the fourth attempt to diagnose and treat Patient 6651508 through psychotherapy, using incidental approach 1A-1C.

12:45, 12/12/1988

Dr. DOWNES: “Hello, Flandre.  My name is Dr. Nigel Downes.  Dr. Marseille couldn’t make it today, so I’ll be taking her place for today.  Is that alright?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. DOWNES: “Flandre?”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. DOWNES: “Alright then, Flandre.  You don’t have to say anything.  Just listen.”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. DOWNES: “So, if we could begin, could you tell me when and where you found the metal rods?”

Patient 6651508 whispers.

Dr. DOWNES: “I’m sorry, Flandre, I didn’t quite catch that.  Could you say it again more loudly?”

Patient 6651508 whispers.

Dr. DOWNES: “Did you say ‘wings,’ Flandre?  Wings?”

Patient 6651508 whispers.

Dr. DOWNES: “What do you mean ‘wings?’”

Patient 6651508 does not respond.

Dr. DOWNES: “Do you mean those rods were wings?”

Patient 6651508 nods.

Dr. DOWNES: “Why did you stick the wings in your back then, Flandre?”

Patient 6651508: “I wanted to fly.”
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Comments: 98

Dister01 [2016-05-01 02:15:51 +0000 UTC]

ZUN damn you, I can't unsee this now! But other than that this is really well made and interesting, good job!

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c0lB0h [2013-02-27 10:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, shit, it just hit me:
"It's Flandre's world, everyone else is just living in it."

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AnonDesu In reply to c0lB0h [2013-02-28 02:31:03 +0000 UTC]

What makes that hit you?

(Also, I know we're talking absurd power-levels here, but ain't nobody holds a candle to Yukari, man. Manipulation of borders? Border between truth and untruth, man. This isn't just omnipotence, this is control of the very definition of omnipotence.

This isn't just power over the physical, this is control of metaphysics itself. This is control of concepts. That's a meta-universe level power, man. The gap we're talking about here is author to hero. Flan's like, first stage boss compared to that shit.)

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c0lB0h In reply to AnonDesu [2013-02-28 12:32:27 +0000 UTC]

No, no, no.
What if everything else in Gensokyo is just a fantasy world Flandre made up while in the mental institution?
She started by pretending she was a vampire with multi-colored wings, and added a big sister, a mansion, servants and guards, and ended up creating a realm for her home to be in?

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AnonDesu In reply to c0lB0h [2013-02-28 17:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, hahah, I see.

Same could be said of any of them

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Shinukahn [2012-12-29 02:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Creepy.

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askmarisakirisame [2012-06-24 19:19:29 +0000 UTC]

cool XD

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Maria-the-Mermaid [2012-02-05 02:01:19 +0000 UTC]

This is completely, brilliantly, pure genius.

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AnonDesu In reply to Maria-the-Mermaid [2012-02-05 20:05:33 +0000 UTC]

It's not that brilliant

I just took a style and stuck some Touhou in there. Aside from making everything a little creepier, there wasn't much else work to be done

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Maria-the-Mermaid In reply to AnonDesu [2012-02-09 21:05:04 +0000 UTC]

i honestly think it shows flan's true side.
I think it's brilliant

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ItsRagtime [2011-11-11 04:08:57 +0000 UTC]

1o111!!!!
Wow, can't really think of the proper way to react to this.
Basically it was awesome.

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AnonDesu In reply to ItsRagtime [2011-11-19 02:28:30 +0000 UTC]

That looks like a reaction right there

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IceWolf762 [2011-08-26 21:47:03 +0000 UTC]

I shudder to think what happened to Dr. Marseille! DAMN that was an awesome read! I could totally picture the scene too. Such attention to detail.

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AnonDesu In reply to IceWolf762 [2011-09-20 21:39:55 +0000 UTC]

I shudder too :V

Thanks :3 I put way too much time into research for psychology documents for that. Most of it's probably wrong anyway >_>

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ImNotTHATDumb [2011-08-20 18:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! Poor Flandre... I thought this was a unique approach to her though. ^_^ I enjoyed reading it.

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AnonDesu In reply to ImNotTHATDumb [2011-08-23 07:59:27 +0000 UTC]

:3 Thanks

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DarkMarxSoul [2011-03-28 23:19:09 +0000 UTC]

My oh my, what a creepy little fic this was. I wonder...what exactly did Flandre whisper to Dr. Marsielle?

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AnonDesu In reply to DarkMarxSoul [2011-04-04 18:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Nothing is scarier.

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DarkMarxSoul In reply to AnonDesu [2011-04-04 21:49:50 +0000 UTC]

True...very true.

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TheOmegaGod [2011-03-28 22:51:54 +0000 UTC]

This was....unsettling. But very good job, I like it a lot >:3

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AnonDesu In reply to TheOmegaGod [2011-04-04 18:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Unsettling's a good thing to like :3c

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CruxianAzelf [2011-02-15 20:36:05 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome, I love the feeling that it's written in such a way that it could easily be felt to be.. an actual record, I guess? It's neat to see people explore the psyches of more.. uh, "psychologically challenged" characters in any fandom (if that's the way to describe it; I've always perceived Flandre to have more than a few things wrong up there), and this was interesting to read.
... yeah. I don't even know if any of that made sense, haha. |b

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AnonDesu In reply to CruxianAzelf [2011-02-16 07:27:10 +0000 UTC]

"Psychologically challenged" feels like "mentally challenged", don't you think?

But yeah, that made perfect sense Thanks :3

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SilverStarlite [2011-01-30 22:53:52 +0000 UTC]

amazing portrayl.... this is really spectacularly done.

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AnonDesu In reply to SilverStarlite [2011-02-05 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3c

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SilverStarlite In reply to AnonDesu [2011-02-05 02:22:04 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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eva-st-clare [2011-01-30 20:07:09 +0000 UTC]

Poor thing..... ;_;

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MrXliSam [2010-11-02 17:51:25 +0000 UTC]

the girl that lives in her own dream, when the dream breaks, her mind will to.
don't you think?
so if she dremt about the gensokyo as we know it, do you think she wanted to wake up?
her world was destroyed when she woke up to find reality.
she wanted to return to it but can't.
as her memories of Flandre Scarlet goes (her age, her friends, family and of course her wings). so will her mind.
sad...

...anyway, YOUR EPIC STORY WAS AWSOME! XD
must have been a hell of a job to make!
it really made me speechless!
(and sorry about the big thing up there ^
I just had to XD)

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AnonDesu In reply to MrXliSam [2010-11-04 07:02:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you woke up tomorrow and found out that everything you knew never really happened, you would too, wouldn't you?

But supesthanks :3 It wasn't all too much work, I don't think. A lot of it was looking up a bunch of things I didn't end up using anyway

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MrXliSam In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-04 15:03:38 +0000 UTC]

poor flandre...
but if flandre is out of gensokyo... wouldn't remilia to?
does this character, who thinks she's flandre, have a sister maybe?

no prob. :3
well i guess when you do it so much, its gets easier evertime!
WRITE IT EASY!!!

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AnonDesu In reply to MrXliSam [2010-11-05 01:47:06 +0000 UTC]

I pictured this Flandre to be an only child.

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MrXliSam In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-05 13:31:01 +0000 UTC]

hmm... poor flandre person...

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AnonDesu In reply to MrXliSam [2010-11-05 21:14:27 +0000 UTC]

What an impersonal way to refer to Flandre person.

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MrXliSam In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-05 21:32:23 +0000 UTC]

sad then? or mad?

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AnonDesu In reply to MrXliSam [2010-11-09 01:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't know. Just Flandre would work

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MrXliSam In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-09 06:55:03 +0000 UTC]

lol, yeah now i think about flandre does say enough

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NaturesRose [2010-11-02 16:57:31 +0000 UTC]

Definite fave!

This is an awesome story!

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AnonDesu In reply to NaturesRose [2010-11-04 06:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

Thanks for the fave :3

And thanks for liking it :V

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NaturesRose In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-04 10:16:23 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome (^__^) .

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EnergyPhoenix [2010-11-01 23:02:19 +0000 UTC]

ok i dont know who gets the idea that flanders wigns are 2 pipies but so i make things clear FLANDERES "WINGS ARE NATRUAL IN PART" since it is impossible to explain how they move if they are artifical what im not shure that is natrual are the cristals they may have been placed by force of magic but flanders wings or wing structure is natrual

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AnonDesu In reply to EnergyPhoenix [2010-11-02 00:02:42 +0000 UTC]

It's sort of a UA character interpretation. It's explicitly stated to not be Gensokyo Flandre in any case. Probably just a girl who shares the same namesake and has some sort of connection to a group of mishappen women who have some resemblance to the SDM inhabitants.

Doesn't much matter what Gensokyo Flandre's wings are made of here. Besides, Touhou fanon goes in all sorts directions about stuff like this anyway.

(Plus, I was thinking more like rebar than pipes. Pipes are thick.)

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Logos1959 In reply to AnonDesu [2010-11-02 16:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you're already having the true tards rage at you.

imo, I always thought they were somewhat malleable since they flapped in the game *shrugs*

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AnonDesu In reply to Logos1959 [2010-11-04 06:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Eh. Just a misunderstanding. What we had there was a failure to communicate.

/me shrugs. I don't know what's up with them. But they're like, megas awesome.

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DasLineal [2010-09-14 20:02:41 +0000 UTC]

YOU ARE A GENIUS, MOAR PLEASE

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AnonDesu In reply to DasLineal [2010-09-15 04:26:27 +0000 UTC]

:3 Thanks.

If you mean more in this line, I don't know if I have any. For gritty Touhou UA work, there's always the really outdated PATH series I started (and never finished) with a couple years ago.

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Flandres-Agent [2010-09-14 16:24:42 +0000 UTC]

These things are good, possible explanations and reasons for mysteries, such as Flan's wings.

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AnonDesu In reply to Flandres-Agent [2010-09-14 18:41:18 +0000 UTC]

:3

Those are seriously the coolest wings ever :V

And thanks for the favorite :3c

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Flandres-Agent In reply to AnonDesu [2010-09-14 19:26:51 +0000 UTC]

I know right?

And you're welcome, you write good stories.

I'm writing some at the moment, mediocre if you ask me. :V

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AnonDesu In reply to Flandres-Agent [2010-09-15 04:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

You write too, huh? I'll look into that :3

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Flandres-Agent In reply to AnonDesu [2010-09-15 14:09:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

And thanks, it'd be great to get some feedback from a fellow writer.

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