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Antarija — The Untold - part 60
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Published: 2018-08-21 23:25:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 4319; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 24
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Heeeey, look who's baaaack~ Even though I though I didn't go anywhere, haha.
But the new page is here and so I shall move one! Let's look forward, forward, don't mind all the dalays, since it's the future that's really important, right?
And as I promised there is a Pokemon fight this time : D
Trivia:
- *As mentioned in this part the very strong aura of some high-leveled Trainers (Gym Leaders for example) may cause a strong headache/nausea ect. in most of the Mana Usuers. So before the fight when a Gym Leader is supposed to fight Trainers Guild is so nice as to give everyone free painkillers so that they don't have to deal with too many unconcious people afterwards.
- **The destruction of the Gym was mentioned for sure in the VN chapter and I think somewhere in the comics as well, but you don't have to remember every little thing so I'll say it again here. Burgh was mad and went all KA-BOOM in the Gym so it was closed for some time. They've managed to repair it but somehow they can't find any crystals for fire absorbtion (silly capital with it's silly harbour and it's silly merchants : P )
- ***As mentoine in the Lore about personalities - Bug-type users often suffer from phyophobia
- **** Of course Gyms have their own Pokemon. They can lend them to Trainers and Summoners for a good price, of course.
- Acordias are magical weapons. It's bascically the only thing, besides enchanted crystals, that can perform some kind of magic. Creating one eats up life of a really, really lot of strong, high-leveld Pokemon. For anyone too weak to control it trying to use it would end up in their death or insanity (like catching a too strong Pokemon). The cost of one would be similar to that of a small kingdom. (Yeees, I made things even more complicated and came up with another strange thiiiings)
- The Bullet called Munna: I believe that the move Hypnosis will work only if the eye-contact is maintained. And I think it's true for most of the people that if something flies our way we usually first look what is it and just after that we turn around/hide/decide what to do with our lives.
- Most of the Trainers on tribunes are with one of their Pokemon. It's not just my attempt at showing who they are (that too, but hush) but also just how Trainers are in this world. They are show- off. There aren't many Trainers in this world to begin with so when they see each other in a larger group they won't miss the chance to parade with whatever strongest/most fancy/expensice is in their possession right now.
- Funny not funny thing - I had to redraw Dwebble since I mistook it for Shackle... I don't know how, in my notes I had it written "Dwebble" but when I drew I went for the other guy xD
-Oh, and by the way, this battle is a big fat lie, if you think about the game. Ingame I just went and 1 hit K.O-ed everything inside with my overgrinned Akashe. And I though that would be boring, so ta-daaah~
Cameos:
Thank you all for lending me your children~!
First -> fav.me/d7e62h6
Previous -> fav.me/dcd3k6j
Next -> fav.me/dcvkthk
Lore:
Mana - fav.me/d958ljm
Wilds - fav.me/d9vbkw4
Death - fav.me/d9w2s7w
Silenced - fav.me/dayzer8
Personalities - fav.me/dc6qs5w
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Comments: 50
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so any weapon is allowed?
paintball marker with pepper rounds and auto shotty time boiiis!
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Sweet mother of Arceus, that Sigilyph looks awesome!
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Zadziwiasz mnie siostro, epickością walki i.... alternatywną wersją przedstawienia zasad XD There you go, that's my sister y'all! >
Biedny Akashe :< When oh when will the world burn~?
Ale powiem ci, że te ciuchy wyglądają na Khailu źle z jednego jedynego powodu: ma goły cały jeden bok, szarfy są dla lalusiów W ZIELONYM MU NIE DO TWARZY! >:U
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Alternatywa zasad brzmi niemal jak łamanie zasad. Me likes it V(*^*)V
Soon, very, very sooooon~
No, z tym to nie mam co dyskutować XD
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Amazing as ever! I can't wait to see what all of those psychic types are doing there 🤔 Can't wait for the next pages!
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Thanks!
Uhuhu, you'll know soon enough~
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USING A PSYCHIC TYPE VERSUS A BUG TYPE WAS RISKY.
WHEN BURGH TOLD KHAIL: "DO YOUR BEST NOT TO DISAPPOINT ME" HE SHOULD REPLY: "THE SAME GOES FOR YOU"
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No risk no fun, as they say : P
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This page was amazing~ Also your welcome. ^-^ remind me, which character did you use again?
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Thanks!
The ones you sent me the link to. They're on the panel with the Haxorus.
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Ohhh, My Cheren and Touko. lol, poor Touko looks scared of that Haxorus.
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Ahh, I love the flow of the battle. It's easy to follow and really impactful. You chose really good moments to include commentary and comments from the crowd so they don't feel distracting at all. Good job!
Poor Nana getting thrown, haha. That face is precious.
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Ah, I'm really glad you think so! Recently I'm trying to work a bit on the panneling style and basically my way of story-telling (which sucks and I know it xD) , so I'm happy it works!
She didn't sign for that when she joined the team, I guess, haha.
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ahh yes finally the battle >:3ccc
Ahh the lore is really cool ;;v;; the little * helps reduce the amount of explaining that needs to be done in the comic, it's a good alternative. :'>
And Acordias are a really cool concept akjsd Burgh's is awesome :'D stringy thing fitting for the bug image x'D
Also I'm glad to see Nana in this battle alsjkd the face she made when being thrown is precious ;;v;;
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We've been waiting for it for... a year, I believe? xD
Thank you, glad you think so!
I thought about giving him a spider web (spider-man, spider-man, does whatever a spider caaaan~) , buuut I think strings suit him better after all.
Nobody expected the Pink Bullet of Doom >: D
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read this comic in one day
I am in looooooooove with this storyy ~
I want mooooooaaaarrr
You gained a new watcher owo aaaand a lot of spam.. ( Sorry 
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Whoa, really? Congratulations then! And I'm really glad that it is possible, haha.
Thank you very much! I got rather slow on the updates this past year, but fear not - more is sure to come!
I'm very happy to have you with us then and I hope you'll enjoy your stay~ (worry not, the appreciation of others by no means can ever be called a spam ; ) )
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Yep, really! Saw a page pop up in a group, I think a nuzlocke group one, and I just had to check it out.
And that is fine, everyone works on their own pace and well.. life. it's a thing..
I'm glad to be part of the fam owo
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I love the outfit and the reactions the others have to it XD
Speaking of which, neat thing that it's basically a battle armor (that leaves the sensitive parts of the torso exposed...)
Burgh looks disturbingly gleeful at the prospect of almost tearing someone's leg off o_O
Pff, love how Nana goes "Nyooom", none of us were expecting that move XD
And how you can attack both the Trainer and the Pokemon is certainly new, I like all the possibilities this implies! This is gonna get messy, isn't it?
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I'm bad at designing clothes though, so I'm glad you like it xD
Video games armors for the win =v=b
He miiiight have been just waiting for a chance to show off a little bit~
And that's exactly why it worked, haha!
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adsfjklfgs Nana has reached the highest velocity
Slow Pokémon like Munna sometimes need the extra acceleration best achieved by just fucking throwing them
This is such a cool and fun battle!! Now with extra action by including the trainers! All the dynamic poses yassssss
Thanks so much for the cameo, my child looks wonderful and this is exactly the face I would be making while watching this battle : D
That experiment there looks very dangerous, oh my...
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She's never travelled so fast in her whole life : D
Right, right?
Thank you so much!
You're most welcome, thank you for lending your girl to me~
If an "experiment" isn't dangerous, it's no fun, after all : P
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I don't think Nana was ready to be chucked like a rock today.
Typo time in order the first is I don't know if I'm reading it right Cheren thoughts "He wants an abs" I don't know if you meant "He wants those abs" or similar phrase to show ourhis jealousy of Khalie abs.
Description typos: dalays when it's delays, Mana ususers=Mana users, absorbtion=absorption, phyophobia
Now that out of the way let continue looking at the pretty art I mean seriously every pokemon look so freaking cool even the Dweeble he's actually my favorite in this page.
Have a nice day.
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I don't know if she would be ready for it any other day, haha.
More like - he wants his own abs. I'll look at it another time.
Ahaha, thanks. When I post those I'm rather tired, since I usually do it in the middle of the night after spending hours on those stupid speech bubbles, and I often don't even re-read what the heck I wrote. My bad.
Uhm, sorry, but I don't think that second phrase is correct, either? xD
Haha. thank you. Pokemon are supposed to show themselves from time to time in this story after all, so I'm glad they're to your liking.
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Sorry it's the word "anothers" that bugging me. It spelled as in this belong to another person instead another thing. Grammar was never one of my stronger points but still wish to try and help.
Don't we all want abs that can grind stones into dust.
Also here's a crazy idea for a character. He's one of the guards that protects a narrow passage on victory road he has four pokemon two Durants, a Pansear and a Steelix. His armour is mostly comprised of molted Durant exoskeleton a cost effective way of having protection when the changing of the guards take god knows how long until someone competent shows up. The Pansear is more there for emotional support and not make him the most rigid guard to ever exist in history and my favourite part the Steelix. His weapon of choice is a spear and the spear has a neat little trick at the tip of said spear there lies his Steelix crystal and should a army or a small group maybe 20 peoples decide that they can take him in the narrow passage he get into position to thrust his spear with all his might and using the force of the thrust shoots out his Steelix and then everyone dies because getting hit by a 1,000 pounds pokemon going that fast will probably hurt.
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Ah, that! Thanks. Actually I know that. The thing is, I have (and I've always had) a problem with "s" in english. I always write them where they shouldn't be and don't do it when they're necessary. I usually see my mistakes once I re-read the text, but, well, not always...
And I'm thankful for it : )
Hm, to be honest, I don't recall ever wishing for one xD
Hm, that sounds quite interesting, especially the last part! That's literally using a Pokemon like a weapon, haha!
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an oficial game with realistic looking pokémon is my dream. oh boi.
yay! that stunning art as always is amazing!
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My baby!
Thank you so much for the cameo!!
Also excellent page love a gym battle
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You're most welcome! ; D
Thanks! There'll be more of it~
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Ahhhh I see my booooyyy! XD (And I spot his Meinshao.) ((Thank you for the cameo!!))
I like this page. I definitely like the magical aura on the rocks for the attack as well as the epic looking Whirlpede.
(Also I am giggling at the alternate scene.)
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Haha, you're most welcome! Thanks for lending them to me!
Thank you, I'm glad it's to your liking~
( : P )
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KEk.
He is surprisingly pulling it of well. curse you Khail xDDD
And Anna! Go and sleep °A°
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He will do anything just to go against my wishes xD
M'kay... Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......
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I cry at Spark yelling and Gil's smart ass resting bitch face XD I have to thank you for giving them a cameo!
srsly it cheered me up alot since I'm not feeling that good haha Also go sleep pls.
Amazing Page Anna! You did iiiiiiiittttt AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Kal handles his Outfit like a boss what else is there to expect from him tho haha
Burgh is just gold. I approve to the badass fashionista~
Also, the last part of the page would prolly be like: Akashe burning everything with "Set fire to the rain" playing in background and Kal probably spotting and murdering Ishara in the most painful way possible. THE END.
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You're welcome! They make for a perfectly balanced duo, haha.
at the same moment I'm both glad I've managed to cheer you up and I'm not happy at all that you was in the need of that :< I hope whatever bothers you will get better soon!
Who needs sleep? v(@ u@)v
I DID IIIIIIIIIIT! I'm gonna cry out the waterfalls of joy I get the feeling he would do that no matter what only to spite me... Good, good the odd fashionista feeds on the approval of others~ That would be quite interesting to witness, don't you think~? ;D 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
When I saw the page and Gil's and Sparks reactions I was like: MUST DRAW A REACTION OF GIL TO KALS OUTFIT.
And Gil just like stares at him with that "WTF IS THAT" look and Spark is then like looking at his bro and just says: I think you would cool in that.
And Gil would just look at him with the like the most dissappointed look ever and just says: Excuse me but what? You think I would look good in that? Honestly I found the description of the challenger more than accurate.
IT'S OKAAAYYYYYYYY. I'M NOW OKAYYYY!!!!
I do. Everyday actually haha.
I have yet to make this damned Text otl. And I do not feel up for it actually XDDD But I should do it >w>;
Much strength to you for the next draft qwq9
He is doing the smug look just to be like: Look at me dear Author, I'm not playing your fucking games.
Your fashionista is approved from my side uwu
It would be. Yet also terrifying....And oddly satisfying for Khail and Akashe I guess otl
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I think Khail would have then seen Gill as the truly wise man at the moment xD
Text is the wost part...
Yeah, that must be a hobby of his.
Haha, thanks, I guess! xD
True!
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I guess they would like silently look at eachother and shake hands.
Kinda like "I feel you fam."
I did it ;; AHHHH Now I gotta do shadows and all that jazz HHH
And Kal has like "disrespect" written all over him. Any other Hobbies
Khailey-poo and no, killing people does not count.
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My thoughts, exactly.
Congrats! : D
Meh, that's no fun D:
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With Gil's Baby hands omg XDDD
"Hey Gil where did your hand go?" XD
God dammit he really only kills people does he XD
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LOVE the banter on this page, excellent dialogue!! And thank you so much for including my dragon child, I couldn't help but LAUGH at the reaction of the people sitting next to her (can't blame them tho dragons are scary)
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it, I changed it soooo many times... I'm glad it was worht it!
You're most welcome, your girl is a real beauty it was a pleasure to draw her
(and big, and cool, and can chomp your head in one go~)
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