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ApocalypsePuppy — Chibi Fluttershy
Published: 2012-01-11 21:16:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2193; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 59
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Needs some work, but feedback would be nice? What should I change and what should I keep! I'm gonna be turning these into phone charms!Possible Changes - Not too sure how I feel about the green sleeves. It makes the drawing pop, and putting pink there was total overkill.... what do you think?
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Hello! I was reviewing some of your drawings. They're very cute and lovely. The only real thing I would suggest is adding some shading. You definitely have the highlights down and great color choices! With the look you're going for you wouldn't even need a lot of shading, but it would make the drawings a tad more dynamic. I'm excited to see what these look like as key chains
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...i love everything in this picture! the only thing that would make this better is to make her blush a bit to show the shy expression :3 other then that. i love this picture, pose, and how the hair is covering her face
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AH! I didn't think of that! I will most definitely add the blush once I have the time! That was a really great idea! Thank you!
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its no problem dX
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I'm with you on the sleeves, maybe leave them yellow?
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I tried the plain yellow and, unfortunately, everyone agreed that the sweater dress looked TOO plain. I don't feel that Fluttershy is plain by any means. In fact, she's almost bipolar (hence the designs on one side and not the other! YAY asymmetry. I suppose I'll just mess around with it a bit more! Thank you for the suggestion!
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I really like this 
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Naw, but I could've done it for you. The BG color is a separate Layer! XD
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I love this. I really can't say what you could change to make this better. Some black in the eyes would be nice, though that's just something minor.
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Hmmmm, I wrestled with the idea, I'll give it a try. If you notice the picture has not changed, it means the black looked like crap! XD
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Leave the sleeves. But maybe... give her a tiny, albeit cute, smile?
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Hmmmmm maybe I can make another version with the smile! I wanted to do the shy/nervous Flutteryshy like when Twilight first meets her. She's so cute!
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Oh, yes. I remember that scene. Well then. I look forward to that version.
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^__^ Thanks so much! So do I.... 0__0 ::is lazy::
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0__o Why didn't I try that?! Gah, I'm such an idiot sometimes! Can't see the forest for the trees and all that. I'll try it! If the picture doesn't change between now and then, that means the change looked like crap! XD
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