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BillyNikoll [2019-09-09 16:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Great
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MsTurpentine [2019-02-14 14:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Great job! I really like the veins on the wings. You nailed it! Also the light that shines through the wing (especially the orange/yellow one) gives a really nice touch to it. It didn't work quite as well with the blue dragon, probably because of the perspective issue you mentioned, but it still looks good.
About the clouds: I don't think they're so bad! They look very fluffy ^^ However, one thing you could try is to add more hard edges to the clouds. Your clouds are all smooth and blured out. I think they would look even better with some more hard lines.
And just one little thing about the colours: The orange dragon almost fades into the background. It would help for more contrast if you would switch the colours of the dragons, so that the blue one is in front of the yellow part of the background. This would make them pop out more. And maybe the red tip of the tail would have looked better in a more purple-red tone (just like the colour above the cloud in the top left corner)
But all in all I think this is great! I love the dynamic
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MsTurpentine In reply to AppalArts [2019-02-14 17:25:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm happy to help I'm glad you appreciate my comment. A lot of people don't like criticism.
About the clouds: of course there are different types of clouds, some are really smooth and fluffy and some have more hard edges. You have to choose the one, that fits best into the scenery. I've picked some photos for you to illustrate this:
above clouds
clouds and sun dramatic
clouds and sun smooth
Can you see, how there are often hard edges where the sun hits the cloud? I think this would work really well in a scenery like this one up here.
However, Clouds are so difficult. I have problems drawing them too
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AppalArts In reply to MsTurpentine [2019-02-14 19:08:07 +0000 UTC]
those are awesome images, I will surely learn from them.
I've seen various tutorials on how to draw clouds. doing that in digital drawing it's much easier. all people I see do plim plam 10 seconds and they get an awesome cloudy background. I think it's a matter of getting used to it
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MsTurpentine In reply to AppalArts [2019-02-14 21:45:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, they are just some random images from the internet (google image search). I was just looking for something to illustrate what I meant. ^^
Oh yeah, it's always like that with tutorials. They do something really quick and it looks so easy and awesome. We'll get there with practice. We can do it
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AppalArts In reply to MsTurpentine [2019-02-14 22:25:01 +0000 UTC]
your motivation is really contagious :>
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