Comments: 8
whisperofstars [2016-08-25 09:02:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the expression and the haircolour *.*
There is really a huge different, but you can still tell that it's the same person. That's great.
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jamaicancrocodile [2016-08-25 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]
i love the background of this picture but (might be translation or wording?) it sounds for a second like you're saying nathan was younger than him in that first paragraph. unless you read the rest of the 'story' you only find out he's older. i would say 'his older brother of six years' just to clarify that shaw isn't the older one.
other than that, the background story of the picture and everything is awesome and sad but it brings great history to your character. beautiful as always, my dear!
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Apriorii In reply to jamaicancrocodile [2016-08-25 07:20:36 +0000 UTC]
I can't really say I see the sentence you feel is misleading you, honestly. Granted, I wrote this in the middle of the night so who knows.
Thank you!
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jamaicancrocodile In reply to Apriorii [2016-08-25 14:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Its in the first paragraph towards the last sentence i believe
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Apriorii In reply to jamaicancrocodile [2016-08-25 15:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Still don't see it. Maybe I've lost my capability of understanding english sentences. The whole point of uploading the picture and writing a description to it wasn't so that I would have a chance to discuss semantics, honestly.
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SoubiVee [2016-08-24 21:35:23 +0000 UTC]
I love how you shaded his hair omg!
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Apriorii In reply to SoubiVee [2016-08-24 21:41:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, thank you very much!
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