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Published: 2012-01-28 18:56:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2368; Favourites: 162; Downloads: 34
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Back where I belong.Please comment and critique! I hope you all like it
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Horse: [link]
Sky: [link] [link] Β§ion=&global=1&q=ineedfire#/d1x98tg
Beach: [link]
Smoke: [link] /[link]
Thank you very much!
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Hey! I loved this piece of art so much that I featured it in my journal, here . Keep up the fabulous work! 
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
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thanks very much!
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I really like the outline of the horse. There's also some good movement in the scene. Great job
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Thank you very much, Im glad you like it!
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I just noticed that you requested critique. I'll try hard to point some things out. I mentioned the good sense movement you created here in my precious comment. I think you could make it even better by adding splashes of water to show where the horse was standing before it leaped into the air, especially in underneath the front hooves. It would really create some upward momentum to the picture.
I hope I was fair and helpful
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Thank you very much!
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On the picture, the eye could use a little more shape. It just looks like a sphere, but other than that, it's really really good.
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Ah okay, il take a look and get it sorted when I can, thank you very much!
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Thank you very much!
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