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themultiplayer1 [2018-03-16 03:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Pony tail switch it the other way round too. Short one on the right and long one on the left. Make the top left hair layers land in different directions. Don't land on the same side, same short length in different directions, make it spread out.

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themultiplayer1 [2018-03-16 03:14:34 +0000 UTC]

if possible, make it look more BRS, the more accurate she looks, the more people will want the wallpaper. The hand grip on the sword needs to close up to show there is weight on the sword. I don't believe anyone will hold the sword with their pinkies apart. The eyes need lenses and look more rounder. Also, she has a collar around her neck, which is not shown here. Her belt is not saggy, make it look firm.

Overall, it looks good, the proportion is there.

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JayOfTeeJay [2018-03-12 14:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Line art is amazing, what is the size of the brush that you use?

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Ludra90 [2018-03-12 00:53:15 +0000 UTC]

It looks absolutely gorgeous to me! I can’t wait to see the coloured version!

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loentar [2018-03-11 20:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Everything looks absolutely fine for me in exception of two things.
1. Her proportions are just perfect for me, but the pose looks somewhat unnatural and constrained. IDK how to say right: maybe.. make her look upper (make her look like she throw up her head -  rotate her head by few degree clockwise), also maybe make her neck a bit thinner.. 
2. Probably improve the perspective on her left hand (which is right on the picture). That hand look a bit constrained too. IMO it's hard to handle that sword like that (like wrist is tense or a bit twisted)..

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