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Published: 2010-08-04 16:15:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 5004; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 181
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Wake Up Pakistan..Time Duration: 4 Hours
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I like over all design and everything,
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Usually i would say nice and browse away but since you mentioned yourself designer so here is a thing that bothered me very much in first look,
NOTE:my criticism here is purely based on design rule and my perception so nothing personal.
It got NO EYE DIRECTION, let me tell what i saw,
main text :come on Pakistan , then flag and thew i tried to read text but which is more important, felt confuse then suddenly my eye found your name on top right so i said , "Nah , dnt read it"
I typed this lot 
I googled out and found this article, [link]
to be fair haven't read whole myself , but just Notice the first para the highlighted some text and thats grabbing attention
Goodluck
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my 3d & Design Blog
[link]
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I know.. I typed my name at very wrong place. Agreed. There is no Eye Direction. Agreed. I made it in a hurry so I just adjust what I feel good.
But Why the thing designer bothered you? :S I object this and want to know about it.
fURTHER I really like your comments and appreciation on previous post.
Thanks
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dnt take it wrong way , by that I was hoping i can talk deeply about design, just read my comment again, if i do it on a non designer deviant he would say "U r crazy " and wont get the eye path thing at all.
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it's sad to see how you've messed up the flag here. Follow the guidelines and respect your country's flag!
I do like your message though.
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I respect my Country and it's flag. I am not clear what do you want to say? I messed up the flag? :S
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Yes you did mess up the colors of the flag. Here's a little guide on the flag: [link]
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It's a design man! Not an original flag. Why don't you object the dress of Pakistani Cricket team then? It is a total green color. It doesn't really matter man.What I design, represents pakistan. Thats all I wanted to do. You don't have to worry about it.
Just Chill.. ok
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Agreed, but you still messed up the flag.. didn't you ?
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No I didn't I just tried to merge it with the background. Thats all.
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yeaah I know..I know the technical stuff.. just look at what you've done with that..
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i have to disagree with you, i think its not a hard and fast thing to Only show BORDER TO BORDER flag, in art many things are done. Once typographers used to say like that about typo and the day people broke that rule typo got a new meaning. thats no mess its creative, cheers goodluck
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Thats what I am trying to make him understand. lol
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never said you have to be border to border on the flag, atleast respect certain proportions when you place elements from the flag, and the color has a very significant job. keep that in the actual state. the rest is all playable.
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hmm , then according to this, 80% deviants on independence day will fail
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that would be sad.. now wouldn't it?
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