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Ares101 — Withers and Wastes Away
Published: 2006-08-27 06:20:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 288; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description How does it feel
when all you touch withers and dies
all rot and waste away
revealing yours and this worlds lies

so how does it feel
holding your bloodsoaked hands
here to end the day
do as best you can

but you can start to feel
it flowing through your veins
like none of this is real
and neither is the pain

and finally you kneel
lowering your eyes
dreading the fateful day
when all you touch dies...

when all withers and wastes away...
I guess I'll see you another day...
when all withers and wastes away...
you didn't love me anyway...

so falling to your knees
you can't believe your eyes
the day is finally here
the day...
when all you touch dies...
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Comments: 15

makoboy [2007-10-14 02:43:11 +0000 UTC]

this is quite beautiful. I know not how it sucks it better than my work. leaps greater

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Puffling [2006-08-29 05:11:06 +0000 UTC]

i really like ur poem u can feel it when u read it.

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Ares101 In reply to Puffling [2006-08-30 01:36:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I'm glad you liked it

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the-beautiful-red [2006-08-28 04:15:53 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful... and i could so hear it a song...
glad to see more work from you, was missing your stuff.. xox

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Ares101 In reply to the-beautiful-red [2006-08-29 00:45:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much it means a lot to me.

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the-beautiful-red In reply to Ares101 [2006-08-29 03:07:58 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome, very xox

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Ares101 In reply to the-beautiful-red [2006-08-30 01:34:04 +0000 UTC]

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RagingMalice [2006-08-28 02:38:46 +0000 UTC]

This doesn't suck, but it's not as good as your other stuff (sorry). The emotion is there, and easily visible. Plus these would make very good lyrics

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Ares101 In reply to RagingMalice [2006-08-29 00:44:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah, its okay to be honest. thanks though

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Mithril-Dragoness [2006-08-28 00:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Author's Comments
I know this sucks but I havn't submitted anything in awhile so I figured what the hell.

I disagree- I find this extremely emotional, and while it is depressing, that only makes it better. I really like it, actually, and it's nice to hear from you. I would fav it, to be honest, but I'm having issues with that function right now.

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Ares101 In reply to Mithril-Dragoness [2006-08-29 00:43:31 +0000 UTC]

wow really, thanks I am glad you like it so much. I guess it doesn't suck that bad but It seemed like it just didn't live up to its potential. I don't know though, maybe im just crazy

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Mithril-Dragoness In reply to Ares101 [2006-08-31 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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hereforyou08 [2006-08-27 17:35:53 +0000 UTC]

.... whats w/ you being depressive?!

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imightloveu777 [2006-08-27 17:28:05 +0000 UTC]

hmmm.....this is pretty depressing! it makes my heart hurt....haha danielle looks at me like i am insane...maybe i am? its good though

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Ares101 In reply to imightloveu777 [2006-08-29 00:41:58 +0000 UTC]

okay then... thanks

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