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arghavan — The Lost Child
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- "... We started to hand around the bazar, All of a sudden we realized we were lost! me and Teddy were really scared."
frame of a series.
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drawing + coloring in P.S )
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I really like the perspective in this piece. You chose a difficult angle and handled it well. It would be great if the girl were interacting with the scene more. She is sort of just placed there, and we are unsure how she got there, if she is alone, what she is doing..... If she was about to open a door, and looking over her shoulder, or picking something up off the ground, or straining to look into a window (because she is too short, or something), that would give a greater sense of "story" in the piece, and just take it to an new level.
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Thank you for your expert comment
I agree with you. I could have made the child more interactive with the scene and give a deeper sense of story.
I'll keep it in my mind for other frames.
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