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Description I still can't draw people
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InkyGoat [2016-08-27 06:41:15 +0000 UTC]

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Well it would probably be pretty hard for me to write a critique on this. After all you are much better at drawing half humans half animals. But i will try my best. So, just don't take everything i say as a fact.
First the good things.
Starting from the background and ending at the eyes, the whole picture is following the same nice style. It's very appealing to the eye. A very good part of the style is that some colours come outside of the main black lines. Also the fact that the shading on her hair and on her skin is different shows the different textures between them. I love the way you put a large contrast in brightness in the flowers, it plays along nicely with the shading.
The "bad" things
They isn't any actual bad things in the picture, just a few things that I as a perfectionist get fussy about. One is that her right eyes is bigger than the left, but then of course in the icon you can't see that. another part is inside the mouth, but then again it doesn't matter much since it will be your new icon picture

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AriesAlpineSavi In reply to InkyGoat [2016-08-27 12:29:09 +0000 UTC]

im so mad about the eye thing lol i literally noticed it like 10 mins ago when i woke up and looked at it again, but i might still be able to make some minute edits to it

thanks for pointing it out as well!!'

The mouth i will probably leeave alone because it doesnt bother me, an im too lazy to add decent shading to it (: thank you though!!

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InkyGoat In reply to AriesAlpineSavi [2016-08-27 22:15:34 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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NekoSerenity [2016-08-29 14:05:33 +0000 UTC]

I can't draw humans either haha :T

but this is honestly great Kenna I'm really happy to see you improving and trying and everything<3

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VibhusCoffee [2016-08-27 18:20:31 +0000 UTC]

"I still can't draw people" hahahHAHA good one man always the joker amirite
seriously tho I understand your pain.
But aaaa this looks really good! The hair looks so pretty omg.

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jennifervasquez [2016-08-27 15:29:00 +0000 UTC]

when I draw people, they look to cartoony ;n;

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LauraSwiftFoot [2016-08-27 13:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Lol she's like a goat person! x3 and lol you can draw humans fine man

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KiraAndFriends [2016-08-27 09:09:39 +0000 UTC]

im crying the face proportions are perfect

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Phelza [2016-08-27 05:46:00 +0000 UTC]

I understand the pain

This is still fabulous! :3

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outIIaws [2016-08-27 05:32:28 +0000 UTC]

same

but your art is really good! Love the expression on this one!

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GLlTTERR [2016-08-27 05:31:14 +0000 UTC]

You are so good at people like wtf

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