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BOH-Games [2016-01-28 22:16:27 +0000 UTC]
Interesting writing style my lady; and definitely an interesting story.
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Arnilo In reply to BOH-Games [2016-01-29 13:53:51 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it isn't, I'm extremely dull writer.
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BOH-Games In reply to Arnilo [2016-01-29 22:27:32 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't have read the whole thing if it was boring.
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Arnilo In reply to BOH-Games [2016-01-30 17:11:29 +0000 UTC]
They may work as extremely short novels, but when you look at overarching story, then you'll see that... well, there's none.
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BOH-Games In reply to Arnilo [2016-01-30 17:15:35 +0000 UTC]
I used to be the same way; but sometimes smaller stories can become larger ones; my first novel started out as a series of short stories and as I rewrote them they became connected and larger.
Maybe try and outline.
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RecklessCharge [2016-01-28 21:19:08 +0000 UTC]
Fun from beginning to end xD
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Arnilo In reply to RecklessCharge [2016-01-28 21:19:36 +0000 UTC]
Don't tell me you read those! Even I don't.
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Arnilo In reply to RecklessCharge [2016-01-29 13:56:10 +0000 UTC]
Three Families created by two different people are in the story.
Just sayin' in case of certain RashAssault would be interested by this fun-fact.
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RecklessCharge In reply to Arnilo [2016-01-29 14:38:47 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely interested, there is intrigue afoot!
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Arnilo In reply to RecklessCharge [2016-01-29 19:11:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, offer from here still stands fav.me/d9kivnl , though I'm afraid Families in Merchant Federacy follow rather specific rules.
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Arnilo In reply to Walt-Marsters [2016-01-28 21:10:13 +0000 UTC]
I thought about finishing story with Ardogast at Corrigan, receiving the angry call from Marge about where the fuck is he, but then I noticed that I never mentioned full Oberon name in story and you'd be only one getting the joke without overexplaining it to death >.<
I just needed Rowena to make totally diva entrance, but as entrance was made off-screen, I needed her to make... uhm... diva presence.
We shall see, Waltey, we shall see. Oriana totally brings her girlfriend on it, though.
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Arnilo In reply to Walt-Marsters [2016-01-29 13:56:43 +0000 UTC]
Well, because of you she refused to leave my head yesterday D:<
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Arnilo In reply to OhMyGoshItJosh [2016-01-28 21:01:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm not too happy with soldiers' design, but didn't want them to look too fancy.
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