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RockFairy [2005-06-13 05:42:45 +0000 UTC]
To be honest I think she looks fine. Wow, i love the position shes in. Very cool.
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Arwaia In reply to RockFairy [2005-06-13 16:41:23 +0000 UTC]
thanx, I'm glad she looks ok
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Night-Sky-Panther [2005-06-12 21:53:18 +0000 UTC]
coolieo <- laughs at odd word she just used
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Jade-Thyre [2005-06-12 17:23:56 +0000 UTC]
Im confused a bit about how the girl works out.. and such.. but I like it anyway.. dracula's coo'
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Arwaia In reply to Jade-Thyre [2005-06-13 02:13:54 +0000 UTC]
^^ no worries on being confused, very few understand who the girl is and how she "works out"
thanks!!
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gabrielsangel In reply to Arwaia [2005-06-13 02:48:08 +0000 UTC]
I know! The cape if just too awesome! You did a really good job with it!
Okay! Here goes,
She looked out off the balcony and sighed, her heart yearned to be loved by someone who would actually love her. Not someone who saw her as a porcilin figure. She knew it was pointless and turned back to the gathering... but there he stood.
Her heart seemed to leap at the sight of him, but a strange feeling came over her, something mysterious and cold.
"May I help you, good sir?" She asked. A smiled curried on his handsome lips,
"Oh, forgive me, my dear." His voice was so powerful, yet sweeter than the most dazzling of music.He came nearer to her, her golden streeks glissened in the moonlight. Her skin was so pale, yet so soft,
"I could not help but notice one so fair being on her own."
She looked away from him, not wanting to tell the truth about why she left the party. Suddenly, a cold hand touched her chin and she was forced to look into his eyes again. Something firey burned within thoes eyes and entranced her.
"Tell me your name, my blossom." He whispered and drew her closer.
"Katrina." She whispered as he wrapped an arm around her waist. He drew down and kissed her throat. A warm, sweet smell came to him.
"You are quite beautiful, my child." He grined, "Would you permit me to give you... a kiss?"
Had she been out of her trance, she would have refused at once, but this man's spell had woven over her heart and she could not turn back,
"Yes." She whispered.
"Very good, my dear. You have chosen your destany well." He came forth and his fangs grew long before he broke the skin of her thoat.
"Now, my dear, you shall find the love you long for."
I hope that was good and that you liked it. I kinda messed it up and I'm sorry about the spelling. Love you muchly!
*huggles you and sooo much love*
Kudos, GBY and LYL!
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poofximxgone [2005-06-12 05:53:05 +0000 UTC]
pretty vampire *gawks*
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