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Published: 2008-09-19 21:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1047; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description Hey! Gift art for !aiolia--jack !!!!! I know I promised a drawing a long time ago. I'm sorry it took me so long. I just can't draw when I'm not in my drawing phase.

Anyways, so I decided to do a more realistic drawing. I just wanted to draw curley, dark hair. Heh heh heh! At first, I was really happy with the way this turned out. But whenever I would leave and come back to look at this, I started to not like it as much. It has so many flaws, and some are the kinds where I know I can do better. So I'm a little bummed out about the picture right now. I think I'm stunted. I'm definitely not improving much at all...Gah!

Since this is one of my more recent works, I would love to hear some critiques, but I probably already know most of it. Still, feel free to critique if you want.
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Comments: 11

Eolhin [2010-06-05 17:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work on the hair!

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Aryli In reply to Eolhin [2010-06-07 09:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Eolhin In reply to Aryli [2010-06-10 16:33:11 +0000 UTC]

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erikaho [2008-10-20 08:44:54 +0000 UTC]

The hair is great!!!!
but I think,the lips are a bit too close to the nose....

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xManders [2008-09-29 22:33:10 +0000 UTC]

ah. i notice the effor to do more realistic eyes. it works, too.
the darker curly hair is awesome. the darker lips are just as luscious.

the only thing is the shape of her face is.. off. the chin again. but the proportions of everything else are right on! dont get into a disapointed rut! you learn from your mistakes. and the fact that you know you can do better is a good thing. so next time, just tell yourself that it will be better. if you put your heart into it, there's no way it'll turn out "bad."

silly. :]

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stellachan [2008-09-24 23:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Your skills for details amaze me. Her eyes and her hair are just gorgeous, not to mention just how clean and beautiful the rest of the lines are!

I don't think I can really come up with anything to critique right now, It's just so pretty! I would love to see it colored though *_* Even just shaded in black and white I think would be pretty!

Your lines are so clean, I think your art would be fun to color, if you ever want to do a collaboration!

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XxTwilightVampirexX [2008-09-20 19:06:25 +0000 UTC]

the hair is amazing omg thats awesom it reminds me of my hair lol

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c85 [2008-09-20 14:42:19 +0000 UTC]

I love curly hairs! *.*
exelent drawing *__*

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Jadestinger [2008-09-20 06:59:42 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, amazing job with the hair! I'm really digging this new style I just see that the lips are a little too high up and the neck's too far to the left, or something.

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Sweet-Serenity69 [2008-09-20 02:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh my! Her hair is amazing! So are her eyes! Nice picture<33

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aiolia--jack [2008-09-19 22:18:03 +0000 UTC]

OMG you're the best \o/
I LOVE IT she's soo beautiful OMG OMG OMG
it's so perfect...the hair ...the eyes...awwww...I love you...thank you so so much
*¬* ^3^

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