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oakstudios [2016-05-14 02:31:48 +0000 UTC]

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Hello Asano-nee

Great painting with a great central character. I like the simplicity of it and the expression of the girl.

I take it the character is supposed to be underwater, hence the bubbles and the wavy hair, but the bubbles are kind of sparse. If they were removed, would it really detract from the image? More details of the underwater setting would provide a better context for the image. Also her right arm is a little hard to see. I think a little more work on the hand, especially with the fingers, would make it clearer to the viewer.

That's it. These are minor issues that can be easily worked on. Keep up the good work.

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CHYsheryl [2016-10-22 18:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Eerie but beautiful!!!!Β 

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Asano-nee In reply to CHYsheryl [2016-10-24 12:13:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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TheIdleWriter [2016-09-26 04:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Such an eerily stunning piece. I love the instinctual, animalistic, almost curious expression she has. A little desperation, too. Beautiful colors and blending of her hair. Wonderful work.

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Asano-nee In reply to TheIdleWriter [2016-09-26 18:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!!Β Β Β Β 

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gawki [2016-05-15 18:15:28 +0000 UTC]

HOLY COW. When I saw this my ENTIRE jaw dropped! I love, love, love, love the dark and mysterious, but sort of thrilling, ambience of the piece. It fits their story so well. I'm completely awestruck. Honestly I was expecting a lil' doodle, ykno? Not a super thoughtfully made piece. This is soooo good. It's so pretty I'm going to cry... thank you so, sOOOO MUCH Asano!!

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Asano-nee In reply to gawki [2016-05-16 06:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Β  Β mehehehehe~ I feel noticed by senpai~~
and I have a thing for details x'D so couldnt help myself xDD + it was nice practice for me! C: and you're welcome!!!! Im really happy you like it!

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Aniel-AK [2016-05-14 21:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I love everything about this picture: emotion, details, this gentle touches on her hair *_* How much time do you spent while creating this?

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Asano-nee In reply to Aniel-AK [2016-05-15 09:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! And around 4-5 hours : >

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Lintu47 [2016-05-14 17:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Hello
You have been featured hereΒ  MAF 23




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Have a nice day!

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Asano-nee In reply to Lintu47 [2016-05-15 09:43:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you! :>>>

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Lintu47 In reply to Asano-nee [2016-05-15 11:06:48 +0000 UTC]

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JasmineFractals [2016-05-14 15:40:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautifull! No matter the critiques, this deserves a 5 star!

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Asano-nee In reply to JasmineFractals [2016-05-14 16:01:55 +0000 UTC]

Β ;////; there is still a lot I need to improve! But I feel Im on the right path! Thank you so much!!! It make me really happy~~Β 

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JasmineFractals In reply to Asano-nee [2016-05-14 16:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Its good to improve but dont forget were you already are! Your work is amazing!

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Merman-Dylan [2016-05-14 05:10:03 +0000 UTC]

This piece looks very dark, but it's cool at the same time. I almost think that something more monstrous or creepy would suit the colors more, but in nature, beauty is deadly. One thing I'd like to point out is that the background seems to get lost in the darker colors, and I think it could benefit from some kind of background with a little bit more detail in the shadows.

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Biodaemonium [2016-05-14 02:15:31 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! Love the touch of the cyan highlights!Β 

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heromomo [2016-05-14 01:40:08 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome

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