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Description the condense

hope i win i skipped a surreality update for this dumb shit

EDIT: ive gotten some comments on how stretched her face looks and despite how much i hate an artist using the rebuttal "i did that on purpose" i did in fact do that on purpose this time ? the reason is i thought it would make her look more like a disturbed monster that way and less of a person. however, a lot of people are commenting on it so that may have actually been a bad anatomy decision. unfortunately this was for a contest so i cant change it even if i wanted to :/ thanks for the feedback anyway!
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Comments: 47

Aradia-chan [2016-06-09 11:55:15 +0000 UTC]

i love it! it looks so cool and the stretched face looks nice, in a weird, disturbed, condescension sort of way.

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ASHESSS In reply to Aradia-chan [2016-06-15 15:16:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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AradiaLeijon [2015-09-17 02:35:20 +0000 UTC]

honestly I love this so much.

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ASHESSS In reply to AradiaLeijon [2015-09-17 18:40:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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x-MirthfulMessiah-x [2015-08-18 15:57:31 +0000 UTC]

murder it before it lays eggs

and kills poor psiioniic

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Sushida [2015-01-04 04:27:42 +0000 UTC]

i love it... i love the teeth it makes her look like a monster-type sea creature
and the lighting you did is amazing i think she looks absolutely amazing <3
after all they are aliens. Β 

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ASHESSS In reply to Sushida [2015-01-04 19:51:53 +0000 UTC]

thank u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sushida In reply to ASHESSS [2015-01-06 01:32:30 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome!!! ^D^

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peopletwo [2014-10-19 18:57:25 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing! I love it because its so unique and lets be honest, she's a sea dweller troll queen. She's not suppose to look exactly like a human and I believe that you did exactly that! Well done! it looks more canon this wayΒ 


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ASHESSS In reply to peopletwo [2014-10-20 00:56:21 +0000 UTC]

thank u!!!!!!!

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sunnythepikachu12303 [2014-06-23 00:51:27 +0000 UTC]

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Fandom-Trash-Tbh In reply to sunnythepikachu12303 [2015-09-26 20:45:59 +0000 UTC]

I agree it looks a bit wierd but it also looks cool, and its their interpretation so it doesnt have to be exactly canon, ya know?

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ASHESSS In reply to sunnythepikachu12303 [2014-06-28 02:33:08 +0000 UTC]

i just asked andrew hussie himself and he told me that the condense not only does not have pupils but her fins go across her face just like i drew them. hussie himself told me this

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sunnythepikachu12303 In reply to ASHESSS [2014-06-28 07:48:43 +0000 UTC]

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ASHESSS In reply to sunnythepikachu12303 [2014-06-30 05:27:18 +0000 UTC]

hussie is sitting in my lap right now and eating catfood and telling me he thinks you are dumb

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xXKidoairakuXx [2014-06-17 16:17:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't think it was a bad decision. She just looks a bit creepy, and I think that fits amazingly in this style! Β Not bad decision, awesome decision.

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miss-monomi [2013-07-23 13:03:57 +0000 UTC]

i love how freakish you make them lookΒ 


i mean everyone is always drawing them all cutesy but this is really great *o*

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ASHESSS In reply to miss-monomi [2013-11-16 03:49:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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winininini [2013-05-28 00:59:52 +0000 UTC]

wow you make the condesce look super pretty

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ASHESSS In reply to winininini [2013-11-16 03:49:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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minus646 [2013-02-19 05:08:45 +0000 UTC]

Love the style of this! Very cool interpretation of the Condense!
I especially love the teeth in this, it really does look like one of those creepy fish deep under the sea.

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ASHESSS In reply to minus646 [2013-11-16 03:49:41 +0000 UTC]

))

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PhantomOfZeCarribean [2013-01-29 03:07:53 +0000 UTC]

I think she looks Wonderful. They ARE supposed to be trolls after all.

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ASHESSS In reply to PhantomOfZeCarribean [2013-11-16 03:49:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Karisean [2012-05-09 23:32:41 +0000 UTC]

I actually really like the stretched face look for the reason you said. It makes her look more monstrous and creepy.

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Psshaw [2012-04-15 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe people were telling you this is WRONG, it's so obviously a freaky stylistic choice. The direction of the eyes even compliment it... Actually, I just wish you'd pushed it FURTHER. And this might have looked way freakier if she were more centered.

I like it. I like it a lot. I don't even like Homestuck but I'm gonna favorite this so. Kinda a big deal.

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ASHESSS In reply to Psshaw [2012-04-16 03:14:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks !

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Semes [2012-04-03 14:46:44 +0000 UTC]

man, I was really hoping you'd win this contest. Your drawing looks way better than the one that won, imo. I love how alien she looks here!

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ASHESSS In reply to Semes [2012-04-06 22:09:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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purenonsens [2012-03-06 06:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Damn, one terryfying lady. I love how you did her face! And the part of her forehead, with horns and diadem... fantastic job!

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ASHESSS In reply to purenonsens [2012-03-06 13:10:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much !

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Arcturne [2012-03-06 06:15:04 +0000 UTC]

I actually like the stretched look. It's unique and interesting, making her look more alien.

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Kids-Sexy-ReaperBody [2012-03-06 05:02:45 +0000 UTC]

This picture looks fantastic and even after reading comments like β€œher face looks stretched” it doesn’t change the fact that this is an amazing picture! Making her face like that only adds your own spin or twist to what you think a troll would look like! Your view on Fef doesn’t need to be the same as everyone else’s and that’s what being an artist is about. I personally like what you’ve done with this picture and wouldn’t want it any other way! β™₯

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HADOKENHero [2012-03-06 05:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm pretty sure you can tell this was done on purpose, why the hell wouldn't you notice that the cheeks arn't as defined.. jeez...

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blueisa [2012-03-06 01:57:31 +0000 UTC]

i was thinking about the "looks kind of stretched" thing but i actually thought it looked cooler... like an actual fish like creature and when you say she is meant to look monstruous that just adds to it : D

good luck on the contest!! : D

(any idea when the results may be out? )

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ASHESSS In reply to blueisa [2012-03-06 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]

no ive no idea and im really nervous d a n g

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blueisa In reply to ASHESSS [2012-03-13 22:25:41 +0000 UTC]

i know! im nervous too! i submitted something but i dont know if i stand a chance against artwork like this! haha
best of luck to you! : D

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ASHESSS In reply to blueisa [2012-03-14 00:46:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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awdontcryiloveu [2012-03-06 01:18:47 +0000 UTC]

I Think this may be the most amazing realistic drawing of Feferi i have ever seen.
Her face is stretched out but i think that makes it more realistic mermaids and seadwellers dont have simple faces as we do, they have long ears that do resemble fins, it helps them swim.

The artwork on this is very beautiful as well elegant with a hint of deranged creepyness and TO YOU I SAY GOOD JOB <3 <3 <3 (no really though this is awesome i was staring at it for like 10 whole minutes fangirling over how good it looks)

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ASHESSS In reply to awdontcryiloveu [2012-03-06 01:27:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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awdontcryiloveu In reply to ASHESSS [2012-03-07 00:29:20 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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ColacatintheHat [2012-03-05 23:29:30 +0000 UTC]

I agree with Yinsho, the painting is lovely and I really like the style but I think you need to define the edges of the face more because the gills look like they're a part of her cheeks. Her eyelashes, on the other hand, are FAB!

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Yinsho [2012-03-05 23:15:33 +0000 UTC]

Um....I'm not trying to be insulting or anything. :c
But her face looks a little...stretched out, like that...
The fins start closer to the back of the jaw...here they kind of seem like they're stretched off from the front of the face, outward and backwards from the mouth.

I think all you'd need to do to make it look better is to edit the edges of the face so we see her cheeks infront of the fins, instead of being like a smooth transition from one to the other.

Sorry if this was out of line. ;A;

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ASHESSS In reply to Yinsho [2012-03-06 01:11:40 +0000 UTC]

its not insulting at all i like critique
i did that on purpose though because i thought it looked cool?? also because it fits my personal headcanon
its nice to hear feedback though and i appreciate it~ if i ever draw anything like that again i'll take that into consideration

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Yinsho In reply to ASHESSS [2012-03-06 04:19:20 +0000 UTC]

:3

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OverdramaticToast [2012-03-05 22:48:41 +0000 UTC]

WOW
So realistic looking!
Kudos man you did a great job!

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ASHESSS In reply to OverdramaticToast [2012-03-05 23:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !

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ThEpAnDaOfDoOm [2012-03-05 22:44:54 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME.

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ASHESSS In reply to ThEpAnDaOfDoOm [2012-03-05 22:46:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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