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ashflee0 β Tired.
Published: 2012-01-24 21:28:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 16944; Favourites: 916; Downloads: 138
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I, am tired.Tired of feeling.
Tired of all the hard work of healing.
Tired of failing.
Tired of falling.
Tired.
I am tired of things,
People, and notions.
Tired of people,
And tired of their motions.
Tired of their talk
Tired of their commotion.
Tired of everything
Inside and out
Tired of hating
Too tired to pout
I just wish,
Wish I could live,
Live underwater
Some place to forgive
Some place to wish
And wish I shall do
Wish to not be tired
Oh, please wish,
Come true.
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Comments: 202
This describes me on a lot of occasions. Nice writing.
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omg im crying this describes me perfectly right now
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I love the honesty. Β Your passion was in each word and I could hear the feelings dripping from your verses.
Thank you for sharing your honesty and truth. Β It is inspirational 
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but I also empathize and see a lot of points apart from those that I really understand. Good work!
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this is great.... but the feeling and falling stuff, if you think about it, these things are what we call life! without them you are not living! We need to face the fact that, no matter how hard we try,Β we can't hide from living, we can't hide from feeling! therefore we must embrace it. we must love it. We must LIVE it!!!!
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This is really great, I think that many people can relate. I like how the last to stanzas went from 'tired' to 'wish' and back again.
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I totally feel this way, it is beautiful!
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you're welcome!
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Wow, this is so beautiful and moving. I love it.
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I really like this. I think I appreciate it because of where I am right now in my life.
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this is really deep and i can relate to it done well
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You really can write. I loved it all, it's hard to end something like this, but you made it work
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I'm sure many can relate to the words contained here, yet in sharing them they're no longer contained and it is freeing to know that you're not the only person who is tired.
Thank you for sharing these words with us all
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That's one of those wishes that you just have to make come true yourself.
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reminds me of Pablo Neruda's Walking Around in some ways...
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I resonate with these words, for I also am tired and wish the same as you. Not to be tired.
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I've lived a fucked up, drug-addicted, akward, self-destructing life, but even I know that without people, feelings, and conflict the world would be void of boring neutralness in which all entertainment or learnig cannot escape.
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Story of my life for the last 3 years... Thanks for putting it into words.
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I read this in ariels voice, like the little mermaid song and stuff
it fits if you start in the middle of the song and skip around parts... at least it works in my head xD
nice poem C:
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Might I suggest A poem I wrote that you may find amazing?
I love love love love this poem it speaks my life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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βWhen life gives you lemons, donβt make lemonade. Make life take the lemons back! Get mad! I donβt want your damn lemons, what the hell am I supposed to do with these? Demand to see lifeβs manager! Make life rue the day it thought it could give you lemons! Do you know who I am? Iβm the man whoβs gonna burn your house down! With the lemons! Iβm gonna get my engineers to invent a combustible lemon that burns your house down!β - Cave Johnson
By which I mean, it's okay to be a tad unhappy from time to time, but this poem reeks of inertia. You have the power to change all that tires you, so get your act together. Or, to quote Barney Stinson: "Whenever I'm sad, I just stop being sad and be awesome instead."
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I loved this and I completely understand how you feel.
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