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ASHLEY212 — the broken is easly fixed
Published: 2006-07-23 08:27:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description I cant stay, i dont know what to do,
the only person i can trust is you.
people said not to, that you're just a creep,
i dont believe them, you're the one i'll keep.
the light beams from the candlestick,
the fire flickers from the 1 inch wick.
have not become smarter,
but instead my heart has become softer.

why must i be this way?
remembering to keep in mid what he might say.
i dodge it and look back,
all i see is the things i lack.
where is he?why should i be here?
i think of him so dear.

the touch of your lips,
feel like a thousand whips.
whailing upon my heart,
and i feel us growing apart.
please just look into my eyes,
and tell me your heart doesn't rise.

the touch of your hand on my pale face drives me insane,
why wont you save me from this pain?
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Comments: 4

1SilentScream [2006-07-24 02:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very beautifully written. My favorite part was -
"the touch of your lips,
feel like a thousand whips.
whailing upon my heart,
and i feel us growing apart."

Heh, I'm faving this.

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ASHLEY212 In reply to 1SilentScream [2006-07-24 05:49:13 +0000 UTC]

thank u...

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kikiume [2006-07-23 14:28:07 +0000 UTC]

*bows to holy poet* You are greater than me... So much greater

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ASHLEY212 In reply to kikiume [2006-07-23 21:05:41 +0000 UTC]

no im not, its just i dont write as much as u so its a proud moment.......
ah and thank you!!

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