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Published: 2006-01-04 04:22:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 749; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 31
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Yes, Grilled Cheese! Does anyone else notice i seem obsessed with food??Just a quick quirky idea i had while hanging out with my friends ~TheDrag and ~Gragthor .
Threre are plans for a colored version, but not for a little while yet. If you have suggestions for any improvements i can make, lemme know.
Easily a personal fave for an idea, i certainly hope i finalize it. 
full view reccomended if you actually plan on reading the thing. Proto comic is so named because it is my first comic and it stars Blues, aka Protoman
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Maybe you could toy with the panaling, so they are more dynamic and not so square...or enlarge some images and make others smaller while you are at it? Thoughts...
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the action is already pretty dynamic. I don't really want to bring that up at all. I appreciate your imput, though.
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very cool! i really like the 5th panel. rock on man!!
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Thank you! the 5th panel was kind of hard because of the whole "up angle" perspectivey thing. Glad to dee you like!
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its funny, awesome, absolutly fantastically drawn, has aweomse love characters in it and is getting a well deserved fav!
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THAT'S SO FUNNY!!!!!
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DEFINITELY!!
Glad you like!
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looking good! it's pretty funny too. i can imagine if he tried to make tacos... boom!
keep up the great work!
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lol, yup, not a pretty sight. 
You really think it's funny?! SUH-WEET!! most of the people i've shown don't think so...
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i like the exaggerated anger over a grilled cheese sandwich
i guess the people you have shown dont understand (maybe?) show them when it's finished
anyway, the art is for yourself, if you are happy with it i think that's the main thing
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lol! I'm planning on coloring this one as well. whenever you have the time next quarter, i wouldn't say no to further tutorials!!
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Way cool, dude. LOL
. . . . .but why wasn't he cooking tacos?
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grilled cheese makes a heckuva lot more sense than tacos given Blues' culinary skills.
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Ahhm, well I hadn't thought of that before. good point
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I will have to fav this whenever it is done.
It kinda confused me seeing that the panels read right to left, but it's okay. 
Now why do I feel like having a grilled cheese right now...?
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yes, the faving is required! lol
the manga style was sort of a screw up, actually....... I wasn't quite sure how to put the sequence of events, so i actually drew the third frame first..... 
as for the grilled cheese, that's product placement for ya!
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Heh, I wathed you draw this, so you already know what I think about it. I could go for some grilled cheese right about now...
But yeah, I like the second frame with the shield, that's the best one.
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wathed?? lol, sorry bro. 
I agree with you on my second frame. It is teh kewl.
hopefully it'll still look good in color.
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